Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid grammar mistakes (use articles and correct word order) and reduce redundancy.

Example: I really like sushi. It’s a traditional Japanese dish made with vinegared rice and fresh fish, and I enjoy it because it tastes delicate and is quite healthy.

Suggestion: Give a clear past-tense statement, then explain briefly and coherently why you liked it. Use simple linking words (because, so) and avoid unclear words or fragments. Check verb tenses and subject-verb agreement.

Example: When I was young, I preferred fast food because it tasted good and was easy for my parents to buy. However, I later realized it was unhealthy, so I started eating more home-cooked meals.

Suggestion: Answer directly and simply: say yes or no, then give a specific example and use linking words (for example, because, usually). Avoid hesitation and filler words.

Example: Not really — I don’t change my diet by season, but I do eat different foods during the week. For example, I usually have lighter meals like salads in summer and more soups or stews in winter.

Suggestion: Be concise and correct name words. Use past simple for childhood and give a reason for the change using linking words (because, so). Correct small errors (remove extra articles).

Example: Yes. When I was a child I loved burgers and instant noodles, but now my favourite food is sushi because I prefer lighter, fresher flavours and healthier options.

× Sushi is a combination Japanese food.

✓ Sushi is a type of Japanese food.

The original uses 'a combination Japanese food' which is ungrammatical. Use 'a type of' or 'a kind of' + noun to classify; also include the definite article pattern 'a type of Japanese food'. Suggestion: 'Sushi is a type of Japanese food.'

× It is very delicious and healthy.

✓ It is very delicious and healthy.

Sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Keep as is.

× When I was young, I prefer the fast food because I was a child.

✓ When I was young, I preferred fast food because I was a child.

The speaker is referring to a past habitual preference, so use the past tense 'preferred' rather than present 'prefer'. Also 'fast food' does not need 'the' in this context.

× I don't know he will makes me opacity O obesity and Zen and.

✓ I didn't know it would make me obese.

The original is ungrammatical and confused. For past reference use past tense 'didn't know' and conditional 'would make'. Use the correct object pronoun 'it' to refer to fast food and the adjective 'obese' rather than the noun confusion. Also use 'make me obese' to express causing weight gain.

× And they don't know what is there.

✓ And I didn't know what was in it.

The original 'they don't know what is there' is vague and mismatched with speaker perspective. Since speaker talks about their own past knowledge, use 'I didn't know' and 'what was in it' to refer to the contents/effects of the food. Maintain past tense for consistency.

× In my opinion I think the difference food is a I don't know but but I am the but I eat a different food in a week not a year so it is.

✓ In my opinion, I eat different foods during a week, not different foods in different seasons of the year.

The original sentence is confused and repetitive. Clarify the intended meaning: contrast weekly variation with seasonal variation. Use plural 'foods' and correct prepositional phrase 'during a week' or 'in a week' and 'in different seasons of the year' to express times of year. Remove filler words and redundant phrases.

× Yes, when I was a child I loved burgers and endoumi, but now my favorite food is a sushi.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I loved burgers and udon, but now my favorite food is sushi.

Do not use the article 'a' before uncountable or general food names like 'sushi'. Also correct the likely misspelling 'endoumi' to 'udon' (or 'ramen' if intended). Use plural 'burgers' is fine for general past preference. Maintain past tense 'loved' and present 'is' for current favorite.