Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and concise supporting detail. Say one clear sentence stating your favourite food, then add one or two brief, specific reasons using linking words. Avoid filler sounds (umm) and repetition.

Example: My favourite food is sushi. I enjoy it because it offers a wide range of flavours and textures, and I never get bored of trying different types such as salmon nigiri or spicy tuna rolls.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence about what you liked as a child, then give one or two specific examples and a short reason. Use past tense consistently and remove fillers.

Example: When I was young, I loved ice cream and chocolate. I used to ask my mother to buy me an ice cream almost every evening because it felt like a special treat after school.

Suggestion: Answer directly, then explain with specific examples and linking words. Mention seasonal changes or festival foods to be concrete. Avoid vague phrases and fillers.

Example: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I prefer hot soups and stews, while in summer I eat lighter dishes like salads and cold noodles. Also, during holidays I try traditional foods from other countries because their flavours are unique.

Suggestion: Give a clear statement whether it has changed, then explain specific changes with reasons and examples. Use correct tenses and simpler sentence structures to avoid confusion.

Example: Yes, my favourites have changed. As a child I preferred sweet and creamy foods like ice cream, but now I choose healthier options such as grilled fish and vegetables because I care more about nutrition.

× My favorite food is sushi is I love having in particular.

✓ My favorite food is sushi; I particularly love having it.

The original sentence has redundant 'is' and awkward word order. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to join related ideas and place 'particularly' before the verb phrase. Also replace 'having in particular' with 'particularly love having it' to make the meaning clear.

× Apart from that, since she has a variety of flavours which umm, I never feel bores of helping them for umm for instance, I love having sushi when I feel like umm having.

✓ Apart from that, it has a variety of flavours, and I never get bored of eating it; for instance, I love having sushi when I feel like it.

The sentence uses 'she' incorrectly for food and 'helping them' is incorrect verb and pronoun choice. Replace 'she' with 'it' for inanimate nouns, use 'get bored' not 'feel bores', and 'eating it' instead of 'helping them'. Also simplify with conjunctions and proper pronoun 'it' for sushi.

× As I remember when I was a kid alive, having ice creams so much, I was so obsessed with iced wing, uh, chocolates in particular.

✓ As I remember when I was a kid, I ate a lot of ice cream; I was obsessed with ice cream and chocolates in particular.

The phrase 'kid alive' is incorrect and awkward. Use simple past 'ate' to describe habitual past actions. 'Iced wing' seems a misphrase for 'ice cream'; clarify to 'ice cream'. Use parallel nouns 'ice cream and chocolates'.

× I always umm, asked my mum umm to buy ones for me almost every umm evening after.

✓ I always asked my mum to buy some for me almost every evening.

Use 'some' instead of 'ones' for plural unspecified items. 'Evening after' is redundant; 'almost every evening' is correct. Past habitual action uses simple past 'asked' which is correct.

× You know some country have different like umm recipe and taste which very interesting to try and I love having like different.

✓ You know, some countries have different recipes and tastes that are very interesting to try, and I love trying different foods.

Use plural 'countries' and plural nouns 'recipes' and 'tastes'. Add 'that' to introduce the relative clause and change 'having like different' to 'trying different foods' for clarity.

× You know some country have different like umm recipe and taste which very interesting to try and I love having like different.

✓ You know, some countries have different recipes and tastes that are very interesting to try, and I love trying different foods.

Original uses singular 'country' with plural verb 'have'—they must agree. Changing to 'countries have' corrects the subject-verb agreement; plural nouns align with the plural subject.

× I would say my taste and appetite chain a large company when think about what I usually have in the Paris and now before I like to eat the sweet and creamy and as I've grown up I cut up like healthy foods like vegetable.

✓ I would say my taste and appetite have changed a lot. When I think about what I usually ate in the past and now, before I liked sweet and creamy foods, but as I've grown up I have chosen healthier foods like vegetables.

The original sentence is incoherent: 'chain a large company' is incorrect and many verbs and nouns are wrong. Use 'have changed a lot' for present perfect change, 'ate in the past' for past habit, and contrast 'before I liked' with 'as I've grown up I have chosen'. Use 'vegetables' plural and correct verb forms for clarity.