Food— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence naming the food, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid repetition and wordiness (e.g., 'fancy restaurant or a hotel' is redundant). Use precise adjectives and a short example or description of what you like about it.

Example: My favourite food is eggs Benedict. I love it because the poached eggs and hollandaise sauce create a rich, creamy flavour, and I usually enjoy it as a special breakfast at a café or hotel on weekends.

Suggestion: Organise into clear past and present contrast using linking words (e.g., 'but', 'however', 'now'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'I stopped eating them') and be specific about which foods and why you changed. Keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

Example: When I was young I often ate fast food such as KFC because it was tasty and convenient. However, now I avoid it for health reasons and usually choose salads and grilled dishes instead.

Suggestion: Remove filler words and improve clarity. Begin with a direct answer, then give a clear reason and a specific example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' correctly. Correct phrasing: 'I usually eat the same types of food all year.'

Example: No, I usually eat the same types of food throughout the year because it's convenient. For example, I often have chicken with a salad for dinner regardless of the season.

Suggestion: Clarify timeline and correct grammar. Start with a clear statement whether it changed, then explain how and give a specific example of foods before and after. Avoid vague phrases and fix tense and word choice ('I discovered other fish and now I eat them').

Example: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. As a child I liked salmon, but as I grew older I tried different fish and seafood and now I prefer dishes like grilled sea bass or prawns because they have more flavour.

× I have a lot of favorite foods, but if I had to pick one, it would be an egg Benedict and this is my favorite food because it is a delicious breakfast food that is available in a fancy restaurant or a hotel, which is very good and luxurious.

✓ I have a lot of favorite foods, but if I had to pick one, it would be Eggs Benedict. It is my favorite because it is a delicious breakfast available in fancy restaurants or hotels, which I find very good and luxurious.

Used incorrect pronoun reference and awkward phrasing ('an egg Benedict', 'this is my favorite food because it is...'). Also singular/plural issues with 'a fancy restaurant or a hotel' and unclear relative clause 'which is very good and luxurious'. Suggestions: use the correct dish name 'Eggs Benedict'; split the long sentence into two for clarity; pluralize 'restaurants' and 'hotels' to match the general statement; clarify the relative clause by specifying the speaker's opinion ('which I find very good and luxurious').

× When I was a kid I used to enjoy KFC or fast food but now I realize that it's not healthy for my body so I stop it eating them and now I only eat healthy food like salad.

✓ When I was a kid I used to enjoy KFC and other fast food, but now I realize it's not healthy for my body so I stopped eating it and now I only eat healthy foods like salad.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'stop it eating them' is ungrammatical; present tense 'stop' should be past 'stopped' because the change occurred in the past; 'KFC or fast food' is better as 'KFC and other fast food'; use 'eat it' or 'eat them' consistently—here 'it' refers to fast food, and 'foods' plural fits 'healthy foods'. Suggestions: use past simple 'stopped' for the completed change, correct object placement ('stopped eating it'), and pluralize 'foods' or keep 'food' consistently.

× No, I don't uh, usually eat the same time of food throughout the year. This is because it is convenient and I don't have to think much of what I want to eat. For example, I eat chicken for my dinner with salad.

✓ No, I usually eat the same types of food throughout the year. This is because it is convenient and I don't have to think much about what I want to eat. For example, I eat chicken for my dinner with salad.

Errors: 'don't uh, usually eat the same time of food' has wrong word choice and filler placement; 'time of food' should be 'types of food'; 'don't have to think much of' should be 'think much about'. Suggestions: remove filler 'uh' in formal answer, use 'types' to indicate variety, and use correct preposition 'about' after 'think'.

× My favorite food has changed a lot. When I grew up I just over new food that are quite strange and I enjoy it very much. For example, when I was a child I enjoy eating salmon, but when I grew up I discovered that there are other fishes and I'm now I eat.

✓ My favorite foods have changed a lot. When I grew up, I tried new foods that were quite unfamiliar and I enjoyed them very much. For example, when I was a child I enjoyed eating salmon, but as I grew up I discovered there are other kinds of fish that I now eat.

Multiple tense and number issues: 'My favorite food has changed' should use plural 'foods' if multiple changed; 'When I grew up I just over new food' is ungrammatical—likely intended 'I tried new foods'; 'are quite strange' better as 'were quite unfamiliar' to match past context; 'I enjoy it' should agree in number 'enjoyed them'; 'fishes' is rarely used for types—use 'kinds of fish'; 'I'm now I eat' is incomplete. Suggestions: use past tense 'tried' and 'enjoyed' for past actions, use plural 'foods' and 'them', and use 'kinds of fish' for varieties.