Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır ancak dilbilgisi hataları ve bazı doğal olmayan ifadeler var. Cümleleri daha akıcı hale getirmek için gereksiz tekrarları çıkarın ve mekan ifadelerinde doğru edatları kullanın. Ayrıca 3-4 cümleyle kısa destekleyici detay ekleyebilirsiniz (zaman, amaç, his).

Example: Yes, I walk every day. I usually walk around my neighborhood for exercise, and sometimes I walk along the seaside because I enjoy the fresh air and scenery.

Suggestion: Cevap net ama zaman uyumu ve ifadelerde karışıklık var. Geçmişten bahsederken geçmiş zaman kullanın ve gereksiz tekrarları ("my childhood friends") çıkarın. Ayrıca daha tutarlı bir yapı kurmak için bağlantı ifadeleri kullanın (for example, however).

Example: Not really. I didn't like walking when I was a child. Instead, I spent most of my time playing running games with friends in the park. However, I enjoy walking much more now.

Suggestion: Cevap amaç/onay açıklaması içeriyor ama dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi yanlış ("Pixar", edatlar, yapı). Daha açık bir sebep verin ve karşılaştırma yapacaksanız uygun bağlaçlar kullanın (because, although, whereas).

Example: I think people walk in parks because parks are peaceful and relaxing, with lots of greenery. Although I prefer the seaside myself, parks are convenient for families and people who want quiet walks.

Suggestion: İyi fikir ancak edat ve dilbilgisi hataları var ("near to the beach", "It's make me"). Cümleleri daha doğal ve akıcı yapın, nedenini açıklamak için bağlaç kullanın. Ayrıca bir veya iki destekleyici detay ekleyin (time of day, who with).

Example: I would definitely take a long walk along the beach. I love listening to the sound of the waves because it helps me relax, especially in the early morning when it's quiet.

Suggestion: Yanıt mantıklı ama zaman ifadeleri ve bazı ifadeler doğal değil ("In these days", "maybe in weekends"). Daha doğru zaman zarfları ve netlik için kısa, akıcı cümleler kullanın. Ayrıca örnek bir gün/hafta sonu aktivitesi ekleyin.

Example: These days I usually walk around my neighborhood because it's convenient. However, on weekends I often go to the beach for a longer walk with friends.

× Yes I do. I walk every single day.

✓ Yes, I do. I walk every single day.

Add a comma after 'Yes' for natural spoken writing; no major grammar error otherwise. The sentence correctly uses simple present to describe habitual action.

× I often walk in my neighborhood.

✓ I often walk around my neighborhood.

Use 'around' or 'in' can be acceptable but 'around my neighborhood' is more natural for walking about the area. This fixes preposition choice for location context.

× I also love walking in near the seas.

✓ I also love walking near the sea.

Remove the preposition 'in' before 'near' and use 'the sea' (singular) for natural English. 'Near' already indicates location so 'in near' is redundant; 'seas' is unneeded unless referring to multiple seas.

× No, not really. When I was a child, I don't like walking.

✓ No, not really. When I was a child, I didn't like walking.

The time frame 'When I was a child' requires past tense. Use 'didn't like' (past simple) rather than present 'don't like.'

× I am in love. Uh, used to play in the parks and maybe, uh, playing running games with my friends, my childhood friends.

✓ I used to play in the parks and play running games with my childhood friends.

Remove 'I am in love' which is unrelated and incorrect here. Use 'used to' + base verb for past habits: 'used to play.' Avoid mixing 'used to' with continuous forms; parallel structure ('play running games') is clearer as 'play running games.'

× But now I love walking.

✓ But now I love walking.

This sentence correctly uses present tense to express a current preference; no grammatical correction needed.

× They like because I think Pixar more silent place and more relaxing place but I prefer the sea places.

✓ I think people like parks because they are quieter and more relaxing, but I prefer seaside places.

The original has multiple issues: 'They like because' is ungrammatical—use 'I think people like parks because...'; 'Pixar' is a mispronunciation/misspelling of 'parks'; compare adjectives require 'quieter' and 'more relaxing'; 'sea places' is awkward—use 'seaside places.' Rearranged for natural English.

× I love walking near the seas.

✓ I love walking near the sea.

Use singular 'sea' in this context unless referring to multiple specific seas. 'Near the sea' is the natural phrase.

× Definitely I would go to the near to beach.

✓ Definitely I would go to the beach.

Remove the unnecessary 'to' and 'near to'; the correct phrase is 'go to the beach.' Word order: 'Definitely, I would go to the beach.'

× When I walk in near to the sea I love hearing the voice of waves.

✓ When I walk near the sea, I love hearing the sound of the waves.

Remove 'in' and 'to'—use 'walk near the sea.' Use 'sound of the waves' (natural collocation) instead of 'voice of waves.' Add a comma after the subordinate clause.

× It's make me more relaxed.

✓ It makes me more relaxed.

Subject-verb agreement: 'It' (singular) requires 'makes' not 'make.' This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× In these days I just walk around my neighborhood because it's near, but sometimes, maybe in weekends, I go to the beach for a walk.

✓ Nowadays, I just walk around my neighborhood because it's close, but sometimes, maybe on weekends, I go to the beach for a walk.

Use 'Nowadays' or 'These days' for current habits. 'Because it's near' is vague—'because it's close' or 'because it's nearby.' Preposition for time is 'on weekends' not 'in weekends.' Also keep adverb placement natural.