Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (uh, umm), and correct tense/number errors (sometime→sometimes, a free time→free time, I don't do it on daily basis→I don't do it daily). Use one or two supporting details and a linking word. Aim for 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often when I have free time. I prefer long walks of around 10 to 15 kilometres because they help me clear my mind and stay fit.

Suggestion: Give a direct topic sentence and avoid repetition and colloquialisms like 'tight leash'. Fix grammar (did not had→did not have) and tense consistency. Use linking words to explain reasons and one concrete detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: No, I didn't go for walks often as a child. My parents kept strict rules and I had a busy schedule with school and extra coaching, so I rarely had free time to walk.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and organize reasons with linking words. Replace vague phrases (you will feel dopamine) with clearer, natural expressions. Provide 2–3 specific benefits and connect them logically. Avoid repetition.

Example: People enjoy walking in parks because they offer fresh air and less pollution. Moreover, being surrounded by greenery reduces stress and boosts mood, making walks both pleasant and restorative.

Suggestion: Answer directly and smoothly, remove hesitations, and correct small phrasing issues (take walk→take a walk, English Park→the English Garden). Add one or two specific details about why it appeals to you using linking words.

Example: I'd love to take a long walk in the English Garden in Munich. It appeals to me because it has a large lake, wide paths and lovely scenery where people relax, so it would be peaceful and scenic.

Suggestion: Provide a clear, past-tense reply. Remove confusion between 'you' and 'I', avoid fillers, and be specific about timing and location. Use linking words to contrast past habit with recent change. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I usually take walks near my hometown, which is a rural area near Indore. However, I haven't walked much in the past week because I've been busy with work.

× Yeah, sometime I do uh, whenever I have a free time, I go on walks and it's, I don't like to take short walks.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I do. Whenever I have free time, I go on walks and I don't like to take short walks.

'sometime' should be 'sometimes' (adverb of frequency). 'a free time' is incorrect; 'free time' is an uncountable noun and does not need 'a'. Split into two sentences for clarity. ID: Combined 22 and 13

× I just put on my headset and go for a very, very long walk.

✓ I just put on my headset and go for a very, very long walk.

Sentence is acceptable in present habitual sense; no change needed. (Included to indicate correct usage of present tense for habitual actions.) ID: 6

× For example, 10 kilometers, 15 kilometers.

✓ For example, 10 kilometers or 15 kilometers.

Add 'or' to indicate alternatives and make the fragment a complete idea; not a tense error but improves sentence structure. ID: 7

× Umm, I don't do it on daily basis, but sometimes I do it.

✓ Umm, I don't do it on a daily basis, but sometimes I do.

'on daily basis' requires the article 'a' -> 'on a daily basis'. Also avoid repeating 'it' at end; redundant. ID: 6

× Actually, when I was a child, I think, uh, my parents put me in a very tight leash.

✓ Actually, when I was a child, I think my parents kept me on a very tight leash.

'Put me in a leash' is an incorrect collocation. Use 'kept me on a leash' or 'kept me under strict control'. 'Kept' better expresses ongoing past condition. ID: 5

× I think I was not allowed to go outside for a very long time.

✓ I think I was not allowed to go outside very often.

'For a very long time' suggests duration rather than frequency; 'very often' matches intended meaning (lack of permission to go out frequently). Also structure clearer. ID: 12

× And uh, I have a specific schedule to follow, like a school coaching and you know, everything was so organized and tight that I did not had enough time to go on walks.

✓ And I had a specific schedule to follow, like school coaching, and everything was so organized and tight that I did not have enough time to go on walks.

Shift 'have' to past 'had' to match past context. 'Did not had' is wrong; after 'did' use base verb 'have'. 'a school coaching' is unnatural; 'school coaching' or 'a coaching class' is better. ID: 5

× Walking in parks have a very, very benefits.

✓ Walking in parks has many benefits.

'Walking' (gerund subject) is singular so uses 'has'. 'a very, very benefits' is ungrammatical; use 'many benefits' or 'a lot of benefits'. ID: 27

× For example, you don't have pollution there.

✓ For example, there isn't much pollution there.

'You don't have pollution there' is informal and awkward; use 'there isn't much pollution' to indicate low levels. Adds correct existential structure. ID: 22

× You can breathe in fresh air.

✓ You can breathe fresh air.

'Breathe in' is acceptable but 'breathe fresh air' is more natural. Minor stylistic improvement. ID: 12

× You if you see greenery, it's a natural response to human being.

✓ If you see greenery, it's a natural response in human beings.

Remove duplicate 'you'. Use 'in human beings' or 'in people' for natural reaction; 'human being' singular odd here. ID: 12

× You will feel satisfied.

✓ You will feel satisfied.

Sentence is grammatically fine; keeps future simple to express result. No change necessary. ID: 13

× You would feel dopamine at some level.

✓ You might experience a release of dopamine to some degree.

'Feel dopamine' is imprecise; 'experience a release of dopamine' is clearer. 'Might' better expresses probability. ID: 13

× Yeah, there is one specific part of the world that I would like to take walk, Umm, it's in Germany, Munich.

✓ Yeah, there is one specific part of the world where I would like to take a walk. It's in Munich, Germany.

Use 'take a walk' with article 'a'. 'In Germany, Munich' order is unnatural; use 'Munich, Germany' or 'in Munich, Germany'. 'Where' fits better than 'that I would like to take walk'. ID: 22

× It's, uh, it's called English Park.

✓ It's called the English Garden.

Munich's 'Englischer Garten' is usually translated 'the English Garden'; include definite article 'the'. 'English Park' is a literal but less common name. ID: 12

× And it, it is special because it has a lake and people usually gather around and it is so beautiful.

✓ It is special because it has a lake where people usually gather, and it is very beautiful.

Remove stutters 'it, it' and combine clauses for smoother flow. 'So beautiful' acceptable but 'very beautiful' is slightly more formal. ID: 26

× Uh, I, you used to take frequent walks, uh, near my hometown, it is a remote area, uh, it's around Indore and I, I used to take walks more often in previous days, but, uh, like in a week or so, I was not able to do it that much.

✓ I used to take frequent walks near my hometown. It is a remote area around Indore, and I used to walk more often before, but in the past week or so I was not able to do it that much.

Remove incorrect 'you'. Use 'used to' consistently for past habitual action. 'Previous days' is awkward; 'before' or 'in the past' is better. Split into sentences for clarity. ID: 6