Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I walk a lot.”), avoid filler words (“like”, repeated phrases), and keep to 2–3 supporting sentences explaining why (health, mood). Use appropriate tense and grammar (e.g. “walking helps me stay healthy and refresh my mind”).

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. Walking helps me stay healthy and it refreshes my mind after a long day. For example, I usually take a 30-minute walk in the evening to relax and get some exercise.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and give specific details. Begin with a clear past-tense topic sentence (e.g. “Yes, I often walked outside as a child.”), then give one or two concrete examples (where, who, frequency). Avoid repetition and incomplete phrases.

Example: Yes, I often walked outside as a child. My parents liked exercising, so we walked together every weekend in a nearby park, and sometimes my sisters joined us for a long family stroll.

Suggestion: Structure your answer: state one or two main reasons and support them with specific details. Use correct vocabulary (e.g. “facilities”, “paths”, “safe”) and avoid unclear words (“improperly”, “soda bridge”). Use linking words (because, for example) to make it coherent.

Example: People like to walk in parks because they offer pleasant facilities and safe paths. For example, parks often have lakes and walking trails where people can relax without worrying about traffic, so families and joggers feel safer there.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Start with a topic sentence naming the place, then give 1–2 specific reasons (safety, space, facilities). Avoid hesitation and incomplete thoughts. Use correct prepositions (e.g. “on campus”, “sports field”) and concise language.

Example: I would like to walk on my university campus or on a sports field. These places are spacious and safe, and they often have paths and courts nearby if I want to play volleyball or do other sports afterward.

Suggestion: Use past simple and be specific about time and place. Start with a clear answer (e.g. “I walked around my neighborhood recently.”), then give one reason and a brief detail (how often, how long). Avoid fillers and unclear comparisons about travel time.

Example: I walked around my neighborhood yesterday because it is convenient. The nearest park is an hour away by bus, so I usually prefer short walks close to home when I don’t have much time.

× Probably yes because like walking is a good way to ensure you are you will have a healthy life and also when you run, exercising you can refresh your mind and all of The Walking can make sure that you have a better life.

✓ Probably yes because walking is a good way to ensure you have a healthy life, and exercising, like running, can refresh your mind; walking can help you have a better life.

The student mixes present forms and inserts redundant words ('you are you will'). Use simple present for general truths: 'walking is', 'you have'. Also remove filler 'like' and the capitalized 'The'. Improve parallel structure by grouping ideas with commas and conjunctions. Grammar problem type id: 6

× Yes I do I always have the regular walking when I was a child and for example I always go with my parents because they are really enjoy exercising.

✓ Yes, I did. I always took regular walks when I was a child; for example, I always went with my parents because they really enjoyed exercising.

The question asked about the past, so responses should use past tense. 'Do' should be 'did'; 'have the regular walking' is ungrammatical — use 'took regular walks'; 'are really enjoy' mixes present and base form — use past 'really enjoyed'. Grammar problem type id: 5

× So so did I with my sisters.

✓ So did I with my sisters.

The repetition 'So so' is filler and unnecessary. The sentence is short response; keep one 'So'. This improves clarity and removes redundant words. Grammar problem type id: 12

× So our family always always will go to some kind of the the.

✓ So our family always went to places like that.

The original repeats words and ends with an incomplete phrase. Use past tense 'went' to match earlier past context and replace vague 'some kind of the the' with 'places like that' to complete the idea. Grammar problem type id: 26

× Improperly related to the park facilities such as like the lake or soda bridge and sometimes they will have some kind of the path which is a safer for everyone to walk in there because if anyone want to walking on the road it probably probably be a little dangerous because the car just passed through.

✓ People are attracted to park facilities such as lakes or small bridges, and sometimes parks have paths that are safer for everyone to walk on. Walking on the road can be dangerous because cars pass by.

The sentence has wrong word choices ('Improperly related' is incorrect), unnecessary fillers, article errors, and wrong verb forms. Use 'are attracted to' or 'like' instead. Use plural 'lakes', 'small bridges'. Use 'paths that are safer' and the correct verb forms 'walk on' and 'cars pass by'. Remove repetitions ('probably probably'). Grammar problem type id: 14

× Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance? I will choose the sport field such as like studios or in uh, in the campus, because uh, that's kind of the field is more is much is much safer for everyone to use land. And also if people want to have another sport such as like volleyball or.

✓ I would choose a sports field, such as a stadium or the campus, because those fields are much safer for everyone. Also, people can play other sports there, such as volleyball.

The conditional question asks for a hypothetical preference, so use 'would' not 'will'. Fix noun forms: 'sports field' and 'stadium' instead of 'studios'. Use plural 'those fields are much safer'. Remove redundant 'is more is much is much'. Use 'play' (verb) rather than awkward 'have another sport'. Grammar problem type id: 8

× Where did you go for a walk lately? I just walk around my neighbors because, uh, it, it is more convenient for me to go to another place like is took for uh, an hour on the bus, then you can go to another place. So it is kind of hard for me to get you another once.

✓ I just walked around my neighborhood because it is more convenient for me. Going to other places takes about an hour by bus, so it is hard for me to go there often.

The question uses past tense 'did you go', so the response should use past tense 'walked'. 'Neighbors' should be 'neighborhood'. Fix awkward phrasing: 'is took for an hour' -> 'takes about an hour by bus'. Remove 'get you another once' and replace with 'go there often' for clarity. Grammar problem type id: 5