Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and grammatically accurate. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and subject-verb agreement, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Give one brief reason and, if needed, a short consequence or example using linking words (e.g., 'because', 'so', 'therefore').

Example: I don't walk much nowadays because I'm quite lazy and I also have some health issues. As a result, I prefer short walks near my home rather than long ones.

Suggestion: Use correct tense consistency and avoid awkward phrasing. Begin with a direct answer, then provide one or two concise supporting details linked logically. Use past tense for childhood events and choose natural collocations (e.g., 'full of energy').

Example: Yes, I went outside often when I was a child because I was full of energy and liked playing with friends. For example, we used to run around the neighborhood and play games every afternoon.

Suggestion: Be clear and use plural/singular agreement. Provide two distinct reasons with a linking word and a specific example to support each reason. Use natural phrases like 'stay healthy' and 'relaxing environment'.

Example: People like walking in parks because it's a relaxing environment where they can unwind, and also because walking helps them stay healthy. For instance, couples or friends often meet there to talk while enjoying fresh air.

Suggestion: Use the conditional correctly and be more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence using 'would' for hypothetical situations, then give a reason and a brief detail. Avoid redundant phrases like 'that is the town area located in my place.'

Example: If I had the chance, I would walk from my home to the town centre because I haven't walked that far before and I'd like to explore new streets and shops along the route.

Suggestion: Use a direct past-tense answer and concise phrasing. Begin with a clear sentence stating where you went and when, then give one specific detail about the occasion using a linking word like 'because' or 'so'.

Example: The last time I went for a walk was last weekend when my cousins and I visited a nearby park. We walked around the paths to relax and catch up with each other.

× I used to walk but normally I'm a person who doesn't walk much.

✓ I used to walk, but normally I'm a person who doesn't walk much.

Comma added for clarity between clauses; sentence tense is correct (used to + present) so no verb change needed. Suggestion: keep 'used to' for past habit and 'doesn't walk' for present habit. (No grammar type change required.)

× Mainly it is because I am so lazy to do that, although I have very weak health and doesn't seems to.

✓ Mainly it is because I am too lazy to do that, although I have very poor health and it doesn't seem so.

Errors: 'so lazy to do that' should be 'too lazy to do that' to express inability; 'very weak health' is unnatural — use 'poor health'; 'doesn't seems to' is wrong subject-verb and form: 'it doesn't seem so.' Fixes: use 'too' for excessive degree, correct noun phrase 'poor health', and include subject 'it' with verb 'doesn't seem'.

× Absolutely. I love to go outside when I was a child because when being a child is so energizing, we have so much of energy that helps us to do many tasks.

✓ Absolutely. I loved to go outside when I was a child because being a child was so energizing; we had so much energy that helped us do many things.

Mixing present and past: 'love' should be past 'loved' to match 'was a child'; 'being a child is' should be 'was'; 'we have' -> 'we had'; 'so much of energy' incorrect quantifier — use 'so much energy'; 'helps us to do many tasks' -> 'helped us do many things' for natural phrasing and past tense consistency.

× Some people feels like it is the best way to communicate as well as to take care of their health as well.

✓ Some people feel that it is the best way to communicate and to take care of their health.

'Some people' is plural, so verb should be 'feel' not 'feels'. Also avoid redundant 'as well' twice; use 'that' for reporting clause and parallel 'to communicate and to take care'.

× It is the most relaxing place where we can meet others and have a proper communication.

✓ It is the most relaxing place where we can meet others and have proper conversations.

'have a proper communication' is awkward; use 'have proper conversations' or 'proper communication' without 'a'. Tense is present and appropriate; adjustment is lexical and countability.

× If I have a chance to walk a long way, I would preferably choose to walk from my home to the central area that is the town area located in my place because I haven't walked that much far before.

✓ If I had a chance to take a long walk, I would prefer to walk from my home to the central area of my town because I haven't walked that far before.

Condition mix: use past simple 'had' in the if-clause for a hypothetical (second conditional) and 'would' in main clause. 'preferably choose' is redundant — use 'would prefer'; 'walk a long way' -> 'take a long walk' or 'walk a long distance'; 'central area that is the town area located in my place' simplified to 'central area of my town'; 'that much far' incorrect order — use 'that far'.

× In my memory, the last time I walked was when we all cousins gathered together where we went to a park and we walked together just to relax and spend some time together.

✓ As far as I remember, the last time I went for a walk was when all my cousins gathered together; we went to a park and walked together to relax and spend time together.

Awkward phrasing: 'In my memory' -> 'As far as I remember'; use 'went for a walk' not 'last time I walked' for natural English; 'we all cousins' -> 'all my cousins'; remove redundant 'together' and streamline clauses. Maintain past tense consistency.