Part 1
Examiner
Do you walk a lot?
Candidate
No, I don't like work because I'm I'm easily T I'm easily get tired when I walk a lot so I usually work when I must to work.
Examiner
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Candidate
When I was a child I usually go outside with my friend to play games, so I worked a lot. Why was a child? I feel, I feel very energy.
Examiner
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Candidate
Because park is a good place to walk. There are many trees and lakes in it, so the air is very fresh when you walk in it. You can, you can.
Examiner
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Candidate
I like to go to tourism sport to take long walk because when I travel I must go some tourist spot, so take a long walk is must I have to do so.
Examiner
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Candidate
Lately I went to shopping mall and walk a lot. I buy some. I bought some food in it and watch the cinema and buy some food in the put some food in.
Do you walk a lot?
Score: 35.0Suggestion: 回答要直接且用正確語法表達。注意不要把“work”和“walk”混淆,保持句子簡短完整,使用連接詞提高流暢度。可說明原因並給出頻率細節。練習時注意時態和主謂一致,避免重複詞語。
Example: No, I don't walk a lot because I get tired easily. I usually only walk when I have to, for example when I go to the supermarket or take public transport for short distances.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 回答要用過去時態並保持句子結構清晰。不要混淆單詞(如"worked"應為"walked"或"played")。補充具體活動細節並用連接詞連貫敘述,例如頻率、對象和感受。
Example: Yes, when I was a child I often went outside with my friends to play games like tag and football. We walked and ran a lot, and I felt very energetic and happy.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答基本清楚但可更自然和豐富。使用連接詞使句子更流暢,並加入更多具體原因或對比(例如與街道相比)。避免重複詞語,結尾完整。
Example: People like to walk in parks because they are quiet and green, with many trees and lakes, so the air feels fresh. Compared with busy streets, parks are safer and more relaxing for walking or exercising.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Score: 45.0Suggestion: 回答時要用條理清晰的句子,避免語法錯誤和冗長表達。明確指出地點並說明原因,可以給出一兩個具體例子。使用條理詞如"because"或"for example"來連接想法。
Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk at a scenic tourist spot, such as a coastal path or a mountain trail, because I enjoy the views and the fresh air when I travel.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Score: 30.0Suggestion: 使用正確的過去式並組織句子順序,避免重複和不完整句。說明具體活動並按時間或次序描述(先做什麼,然後做什麼)。練習用簡短完整的句子描述一次經歷。
Example: Lately I went to a shopping mall and walked a lot. I bought some snacks, watched a movie at the cinema, and then had dinner at a food court.
× No, I don't like work because I'm I'm easily T I'm easily get tired when I walk a lot so I usually work when I must to work.
✓ No, I don't like walking because I easily get tired when I walk a lot, so I only walk when I must.
问题类型:现在时与动词形式错误。说明:原句把动词用法混淆(like work → 应用动名词或不带宾语的短语like walking),并且含有多余重复词和错误结构(I'm I'm easily T 我容易,I easily get tired 更自然)。另外 must 后面不接 to,因此改为 "when I must" 或 "when I have to"。建议:动名词用于表示喜欢/不喜欢某活动(like walking);避免重复词;使用正确的短语结构(must / have to)。
× When I was a child I usually go outside with my friend to play games, so I worked a lot. Why was a child? I feel, I feel very energy.
✓ When I was a child, I usually went outside with my friends to play games, so I was very active and had a lot of energy.
问题类型:过去时错误。说明:句子描述过去习惯,应使用过去时(go → went;friend → friends;worked a lot 表达不准确,改用 was very active 或 had a lot of energy)。原句还有疑问句 'Why was a child?' 不合逻辑应删除。建议:叙述过去习惯时统一用过去时态,复数注意与上下文一致,使用自然表达如 'have energy' 的过去式为 'had energy'。
× Because park is a good place to walk. There are many trees and lakes in it, so the air is very fresh when you walk in it. You can, you can.
✓ Because the park is a good place to walk. There are many trees and lakes, so the air is very fresh when you walk there.
问题类型:定冠词与代词使用错误。说明:可数名词前若指特定公园应加定冠词 the;后半句用 'walk there' 比 'walk in it' 更自然;多余重复 'You can, you can' 删除或补完整句。建议:可数名词前判断是否需要定冠词,代词选择更自然的地点副词(there)。
× I like to go to tourism sport to take long walk because when I travel I must go some tourist spot, so take a long walk is must I have to do so.
✓ I would like to take a long walk when I travel because I usually visit some tourist spots, so taking a long walk is something I have to do.
问题类型:句子结构错误与动名词形式使用。说明:原句 'tourism sport' 用词错误,应为 'tourist spots' 或 'tourist areas';must 后不接不定式,'take a long walk is must I have to do so' 结构混乱。改为 'taking a long walk is something I have to do' 更自然。建议:注意名词搭配(tourist spot)、使用动名词作主语(taking a long walk),以及正确使用 must / have to 的句型。
× Lately I went to shopping mall and walk a lot. I buy some. I bought some food in it and watch the cinema and buy some food in the put some food in.
✓ Lately I went to the shopping mall and walked a lot. I bought some food there and watched a movie.
问题类型:过去时错误与句子结构混乱。说明:既然是过去发生的动作,应统一使用过去时(go → went, walk → walked, buy → bought, watch → watched)。并且原句重复且结构混乱,去掉多余部分并明确表达 'watched a movie'。建议:描述过去经历时统一用过去时,句子要简洁,避免重复。