Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 注意语法和句子结构。回答要简洁并提供一到两句支持细节。避免重复和口语化错误，如 double negative 和不正确的词形变化。可以用简单的现在时说明习惯，再给出原因。

Example: To be honest, I don't walk much. I usually prefer to drive or take public transport because walking takes too long and I find it tiring.

Suggestion: 注意时态一致性（过去时）和用词准确。先直接回答（Yes/No），然后用一两句具体细节支持。避免模糊或语法错误，如冠词重复和现在时替代过去时。

Example: Yes, I often went for walks with my family when I was a child. I remember we would buy snacks and candy along the way, which made those walks especially memorable.

Suggestion: 用更准确的词汇和连词组织观点。先给出直接原因，再列举具体的两个支持点。注意词汇错误（clever→clean/refreshing；rivers wave→river's flow）和流畅的连接词。

Example: People like to walk in parks because the environment is pleasant and calm. For example, parks often have trees and flowers that make the air feel fresher, and some have streams or ponds which are relaxing to watch.

Suggestion: 先给出直接回答，再说明具体理由并用连接词衔接。注意形容词和搭配（relaxable→relaxing；sea side→seaside）。减少冗长和重复。

Example: I would choose Sanya because it has a long coastline. Walking along the seaside is very relaxing and you can enjoy beautiful ocean views.

Suggestion: 使用正确的过去时和清晰的时间短语，先直接回答然后补充细节。避免语法错误和重复，描述要具体（谁、什么时候、为什么）。

Example: I went for a walk last weekend after having dinner with a friend. We walked to help digest the food and continued chatting while we strolled.

× To be honest I'm the person that don't want don't want to take a walk even just have to walk a little Rd. because I prefer to take car or something else to get my destination and walk is a very hard thing for me to strict.

✓ To be honest, I'm the kind of person who doesn't want to take a walk, even if I only have to walk a little, because I prefer to take a car or something else to get to my destination, and walking is a very difficult thing for me.

存在主谓一致错误（that don't → who doesn't），以及多处结构和词形错误。建议：1) 使用 who 引导修饰人，并将 don't 改为 doesn't 与单数主语 I'm the kind of person 保持一致；2) 将 'take car' 改为 'take a car'；3) 'get my destination' 改为 'get to my destination'；4) 用 'walking' 代替名词短语 'walk' 并用 'difficult' 替换不恰当的 'strict'。整体上注意人称和数的一致，冠词和固定搭配的使用。

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child? / Absolutely, because when I was hanging out with my family, I can always get some snacks and candy along the road and it became a the best thing that I remember when I was a child.

✓ Absolutely. When I was hanging out with my family, I could always get some snacks and candy along the road, and it became one of the best things I remember from my childhood.

原句中时态和情态动词不一致：回忆过去应使用过去时（can → could），而 'became the a best' 有冠词和表达错误，应为 'became one of the best things' 或 'was one of the best things'。建议：将 can 改为 could，使用 'one of the best things I remember from my childhood' 来表达过去习惯性经历。

× I think it's because there have a lot of trees and flowers which makes the air more clever and there always have a river inside the park. And for per, for people who like to relax, watching the rivers wave must be a great choice.

✓ I think it's because there are a lot of trees and flowers which make the air fresher, and there is often a river inside the park. And for people who like to relax, watching the river's waves must be a great choice.

原句存在介词和其他用词错误：'there have a lot' 应为 'there are a lot'；'more clever' 用词不当，应为 'fresher'（空气更清新）；'there always have a river inside' 应为 'there is often a river inside'；'watching the rivers wave' 应为 'watching the river's waves' 或 'watching the waves of the river'。建议：注意存在句型 'there is/are'，形容词选择要符合语义，名词所有格或复数形式要正确。

× If we are talking about the cities that I have to choose, it must be Sanya because there have a long coast along this city. It was beside the sea and when I walk along the sea side, I think is a relaxable things for every person. You can see the beauty.

✓ If we're talking about the cities I would choose, it would be Sanya because there is a long coast along that city. It is by the sea, and when I walk along the seaside, I think it is a relaxing thing for everyone. You can see the beauty.

存在 'there be' 用法错误：'there have a long coast' 应为 'there is a long coast'。此外时态和搭配也需调整：条件句中用 'would' 更合适，'beside the sea' 改为 'by the sea'，'sea side' 合并为 'seaside'，'relaxable things' 用词不当应为 'relaxing thing'。建议掌握 'there is/are' 的正确用法并注意形容词形式。

× I think it's last weekend when I was when I with my friend friend ate out a dinner we choose the walk to. It stimulate my hours stomach because we eat a lot and that time we talk a lot.

✓ I think it was last weekend. When my friend and I ate out for dinner, we chose to go for a walk. It upset my stomach a little because we ate a lot, and that time we talked a lot.

句子中过去时使用混乱：'I think it's last weekend' 应为 'I think it was last weekend'；'when I was when I with my friend friend ate out a dinner' 结构混乱，主谓和词序错误，需改为 'When my friend and I ate out for dinner'；'we choose the walk to' 应为 'we chose to go for a walk'（过去时）；'It stimulate my hours stomach' 用词和时态错误，应为 'It upset my stomach a little'；'we eat a lot' 改为过去时 'we ate a lot'。建议：回忆过去事件时统一使用过去时，注意主语顺序 'my friend and I'，以及正确动词形式的选择。