Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Begin with a clear topic sentence directly answering the question, avoid unrelated phrases, and make the contrast concise. Use linking words like 'however' to connect ideas and keep answers to no more than 3–4 sentences. Also correct small grammar issues (e.g. 'when I am in Ukraine' instead of 'when I stay in Ukraine').

Example: Yes, I do walk a lot, but it depends on where I live. For example, when I am in Ukraine I usually walk to my destinations because places are nearby. However, when I am in Bulgaria I tend to use public transport because I have less time.

Suggestion: Start with a direct answer, avoid fillers like 'uh', and make the reason clearer. Use a linking word such as 'because' and give a specific example of activities to enrich the answer. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I did. I spent a lot of time outdoors because most places were within walking distance, so we often walked to the local park to play football or ride bikes.

Suggestion: Provide a clear topic sentence and use correct grammar and linking words. Avoid double negatives and unclear phrasing. Give two or three specific reasons and a brief example to sound natural and effective.

Example: People like walking in parks because they can breathe fresh air and escape crowded indoor spaces. Also, parks are ideal for picnics or meeting friends, which makes them pleasant places to relax.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct conditional grammar (use 'if I had the chance'). Give specific details about the route or activities and use linking words like 'for example' or 'for instance' to make it coherent. Limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains. For example, I would hike up a trail through forests, enjoy panoramic views at the summit, and rest by a mountain stream — it would be refreshing and good for my health.

Suggestion: Start with a clear past-tense topic sentence, correct vocabulary and grammar (e.g. 'beachside', 'there was no sand', 'I spent about three hours', 'I breathed the sea air'). Use linking words to describe activities and feelings, and be specific about what you did.

Example: Recently I went for a walk at a rocky beachside where there was no sand. I spent about three hours there, walked along the shore, breathed the fresh sea air and relaxed while watching the waves.

× Independent country in which I state.

✓ I live in different countries at different times.

The original is fragmentary and unclear. It lacks a main verb and correct structure. Use a complete subject and verb phrase such as 'I live' and clarify timeframes. Suggestion: form a full sentence with subject + verb + object or complement.

× For instance, when I stay in Ukraine, I spend a lot of time outside and walk to my destinations, but when I stay in Bulgaria I mostly use transport because I spend less time.

✓ For instance, when I stay in Ukraine, I spend a lot of time outside and walk to my destinations, but when I stay in Bulgaria I mostly use transport because I have less time.

'I spend less time' is grammatically acceptable but sounds unnatural in this contrast; 'I have less time' better expresses limited free time. Maintain present simple for habitual situations.

× Of course, when I was a child I spent a lot of time outdoors and uh, mostly we went to the point by walk because everything was near to us.

✓ Of course, when I was a child I spent a lot of time outdoors and mostly we walked to places because everything was near us.

Use past simple 'walked' rather than the phrase 'went to the point by walk'. Also 'places' or 'near us' is more natural; 'near to us' is incorrect preposition use. Remove filler 'uh' in formal responses.

× They do didn't get us to breath fresh air, do not spend a lot of time in close spaces, and it's a good chance to have a picnic or spend time with friends.

✓ They allow us to breathe fresh air, help us avoid spending a lot of time in enclosed spaces, and provide a good chance to have a picnic or spend time with friends.

The original has incorrect negative auxiliaries ('do didn't') and wrong verbs ('get us to breath'). Use 'allow' or 'let' and correct verb forms: 'breathe' not 'breath'. 'Enclosed spaces' is more natural than 'close spaces'. Maintain parallel structure for the list.

× I'm a big fan of mountains, so if I would have such opportunity I would go for traveling and walk around the mountains, go up them and around the forests.

✓ I'm a big fan of mountains, so if I had such an opportunity I would travel there, walk around the mountains, climb them, and explore the forests.

In conditional sentences about hypothetical present situations, use the past simple in the 'if' clause: 'if I had' (not 'if I would have'). 'Go for traveling' is incorrect; use 'travel there' or 'go traveling'. Use parallel verbs and correct collocations: 'climb' instead of 'go up them'.

× It's impressive and so good for myself.

✓ It's impressive and very good for me.

'For myself' is misused; reflexive pronouns are used when the subject and object are the same and an action reflects back on the subject. Here a simple object pronoun 'me' is correct. Also use 'very' rather than 'so' for formality.

× I went to the beach side where there are no sand and everything is made by stone and I spend that around thir 3 hours so I've breast the seer and the just relaxed.

✓ I went to the seaside where there is no sand and everything is made of stone, and I spent about three hours there, so I breathed the sea air and just relaxed.

Multiple errors: 'beach side' → 'seaside', 'there are no sand' → 'there is no sand' (singular), 'made by stone' → 'made of stone' (correct preposition), 'I spend that around thir 3 hours' → past tense 'I spent about three hours there' (number and spelling fixes), 'I've breast the seer' → 'I breathed the sea air' (correct verb and nouns). Use past simple for a completed action. Maintain correct word order and prepositions.