Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意図は伝わりますが、文法と流暢さを改善する必要があります。短く自然なトピック文を使い、理由を1文で述べ、余分な音声フィラー（uh）や語順の誤りを避けてください。例えば、現在形・不定詞・形容詞の使い方（I don't like walking / it makes me tired）を正しく使う練習をしましょう。

Example: No, I don't walk much because I usually ride my bicycle instead. Walking makes me tired, so I prefer cycling for my daily commute.

Suggestion: 過去の習慣を語る際に時制（過去形）を一貫して使い、具体的な活動や頻度を示すと良いです。また、'any'の不自然な使用を避け、複数形や不可算名詞を適切に使ってください。例：I liked watching insects and plants, and I often went outside with my mother.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child I liked watching insects and plants, so I often went outside with my mother to explore nature in our neighborhood.

Suggestion: 理由を述べる時は一文で明確にまとめ、動詞の形と語順を正しく使ってください。繰り返しや意味の重複を避け、接続詞や句（for example, because, so）で理由と結果をつなげる練習をしましょう。具体例（stress relief, fresh air）を加えるとより説得力が増します。

Example: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and enjoy fresh air; for example, many go there to de-stress or watch birds and plants.

Suggestion: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。'walk on the sea'は不自然なので正しい表現（walk along the beach / walk by the sea）を使い、仮定法の構文を簡潔に保ってください。また、過去分詞や現在完了（I've never）を使う場合は文を完結させる必要があります。具体的な場所と理由を一つ示しましょう。

Example: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the beach because I have never walked by the sea and I think it would be peaceful and refreshing.

Suggestion: 質問は過去形の最近の一回の行動を求めていますが、回答は習慣や語順の誤りで混乱しています。'lately'を使うと現在完了や現在の習慣と合わせるのが自然です。'convenience store'の前に冠詞を入れ、理由は簡潔にまとめましょう。語彙の正確さ（thirsty / hungry, feel thirsty）も確認してください。

Example: Lately I went to a convenience store near my home because I often feel thirsty or hungry before bed, so I buy a snack or a drink there.

× No, I don't because I always ride my bicycle instead of walking. Uh, I don't like walk because it makes me. Tired.

✓ No, I don't because I always ride my bicycle instead of walking. Uh, I don't like walking because it makes me tired.

The verb after 'like' should be in the -ing form when expressing general preferences (like + gerund). Also remove the unnecessary period between 'me.' and 'Tired' and make 'tired' lowercase. Suggestion: use 'I don't like walking' or 'I don't like to walk' (both are acceptable, but 'like walking' is more natural here).

× Yes, because when I was a child I like to watch any insect or nature, so I often go outside with my mother to watch any nature.

✓ Yes, because when I was a child I liked to watch insects and nature, so I often went outside with my mother to watch nature.

The sentence refers to past time ('when I was a child'), so verbs should be in the past tense: 'like' -> 'liked', 'go' -> 'went'. Also 'any insect' and 'any nature' are unnatural; use plural 'insects' and uncountable 'nature'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense and correct noun forms.

× Uh, because they also enjoying, uh, enjoying, enjoying watching nature or feel relaxed to walking around the park, walking in the park.

✓ Uh, because they also enjoy watching nature or feel relaxed walking around the park.

Use the base verb 'enjoy' (they enjoy) not 'enjoying' after the subject. 'Feel relaxed to walking' is incorrect; use 'feel relaxed walking' or 'feel relaxed when walking'. Also remove repetition. Suggestion: 'they enjoy watching nature' or 'they feel relaxed walking around the park.'

× I would like to walk on the sea because I've never I've never worked at on the sea and after.

✓ I would like to walk by the sea because I've never worked on the sea before.

Prepositions: 'walk on the sea' is unnatural; use 'walk by the sea' or 'walk along the sea'. 'Work at on the sea' is incorrect — choose 'work on the sea' if referring to sea-based work. 'And after' is unclear; use 'before' if meaning previously. Suggestion: 'I've never worked on the sea before' or if you meant visit, say 'I've never been to the sea before.'

× I often go convenience store at lately because before I swept before I go to bed, I usually please thirsty or hungry. So I always go convenience to buy any food or drink.

✓ Lately I often go to the convenience store because before I go to bed I usually feel thirsty or hungry. So I always go to the convenience store to buy some food or a drink.

Use present tense 'go' and 'feel' for habitual actions. Add the correct preposition 'to' with 'go to the convenience store'. 'At lately' is incorrect; use 'lately' at the beginning. 'Swept' is wrong here; likely intended 'sleep' or 'go to bed' so use 'before I go to bed'. 'Please thirsty' is incorrect; use 'feel thirsty'. 'Any food or drink' is unnatural in affirmative sentences; use 'some food or a drink'. Suggestion: keep consistent present simple for habits and correct prepositions and verbs.