Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar and avoid irrelevant numbers. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct verb forms and articles (e.g., "I prefer to walk alone"). Keep to under five sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually exercise in the morning at around 5:30 because it is peaceful then. I prefer walking alone since I can enjoy the fresh air and clear my mind.

Suggestion: Use correct past tense and reduce repetition. Begin with a direct past-tense topic sentence, then give one specific example with a linking word. Avoid filler phrases and correct pronouns.

Example: Not really. When I was a child I preferred sleeping to walking, so I rarely went for walks. However, sometimes in the evenings my friends and I would walk to a nearby pond and sit there for a while.

Suggestion: Be more fluent and organized: give a clear main reason then two specific supporting points using linking words like "because" or "for example." Remove hesitations and plural/article errors (e.g., "every park").

Example: People like walking in parks because the atmosphere is pleasant. For example, parks usually have trees and seating areas, and you can see others exercising, which makes walking more enjoyable and sociable.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use conditional structure properly. Start with a topic sentence using "I would" then give two concrete reasons with linking words. Avoid vague adjectives like "greenish" and correct verb forms.

Example: I would take a long walk in my home country because the countryside is very green and peaceful. Also, the cool, gentle breeze there makes walking relaxing and pleasant.

Suggestion: Use past simple for a recent action and be more concise. Start with a direct answer naming the place, then give two specific features and one feeling using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "it has waterfalls") and remove uncertainty phrases like "I think" when confident.

Example: Lately I walked in a nearby park called Blvd. It has waterfalls, fountains and many trees, so it feels very green and peaceful. When I go there I feel calm and can relax.

× I do exercise in the morning, it's around 5:30 I wake up and I will go for walking around 53535.

✓ I exercise in the morning; I wake up at around 5:30 and I go for a walk.

Use the base verb or noun instead of 'go for walking'. 'Do exercise' is acceptable but 'I exercise' is more natural. 'Go for walking' is incorrect collocation; use 'go for a walk'. Also use 'wake up at around 5:30' for time expression and remove the inappropriate 'will' when describing habitual action.

× So it's good time to go for a walk alone and I'm always prefer to go alone because I can enjoy The Walking and also I can.

✓ So it's a good time to go for a walk alone and I always prefer to go alone because I can enjoy the walk and relax.

Use the article 'a' with 'good time'. 'I'm always prefer' mixes subject+auxiliary incorrectly; use 'I always prefer'. 'The Walking' is incorrect capitalization and noun choice; use 'the walk'. The sentence was incomplete, so add 'relax' to finish the idea.

× When I was a child, I don't like to go for walking be so because I love to sleep a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I didn't like to go for walks because I loved to sleep a lot.

Talking about past preference requires past tense: use 'didn't like' and 'loved'. Also use plural 'walks' or 'to go for a walk' instead of 'go for walking' and remove extraneous words like 'be so'.

× So I prefer sleep rather than walking.

✓ So I preferred sleeping rather than walking.

If continuing past context, use past tense 'preferred'. After 'prefer' in past context, use the gerund 'sleeping' or use infinitive 'to sleep'. Maintain parallel structure: 'sleeping rather than walking'.

× But sometimes I will go for walking in the evening with my friends.

✓ But sometimes I would go for a walk in the evening with my friends.

In past narrative, 'sometimes I would' expresses habitual past actions better than 'will'. Also use 'go for a walk' not 'go for walking'.

× It's near to my home. There's one pond so you'll go there and we'll spend time time there and also we walk.

✓ It was near my home. There was a pond, so we would go there and spend time there and also walk.

Maintain past tense: 'was' instead of 'is'. 'You'll' is wrong person; use 'we would' for past habitual. Remove duplicated word 'time time' and use simple verb 'walk' in past habitual context.

× I think it's more easy to go for walking in a park, maybe especially in the, the atmosphere over there, like the, uh, for every parks, they have a lot of trees and uh, there is place to sit and uh, we can also see the other people who they are jogging, walking and we can communicate with them.

✓ I think it's easier to go for a walk in a park, especially because of the atmosphere there. In many parks, they have a lot of trees, places to sit, and we can also see other people jogging or walking and communicate with them.

Use comparative form 'easier' not 'more easy'. Use 'go for a walk' not 'go for walking'. 'Every parks' is incorrect; use 'many parks' or 'parks'. 'There is place' should be 'places to sit'. Remove redundant pronoun 'they' in 'other people who they are' and simplify to 'people jogging or walking'.

× Definitely my home country is because of the atmosphere and the climate in my country there is always in greenery everywhere.

✓ Definitely my home country, because of the atmosphere and climate; it is always green everywhere.

Avoid awkward phrasing 'is because of'. Use concise clause order: 'My home country, because of the atmosphere and climate, is always green.' 'Greenery everywhere' can be expressed as 'it is always green everywhere'.

× When I see or looking to the place, it's always in greenish colour and the wind over there, it's very calm and very cooling climate so.

✓ When I look at the place, it is always green and the wind there is calm and cool.

Use consistent verb form 'look' not 'see or looking'. 'Greenish colour' is awkward; use 'green'. 'Cooling climate' is incorrect adjective use; use 'cool' for climate. Remove unnecessary filler 'so' at the end.

× I'm always going to walk nearby my home.

✓ I always go for a walk near my home.

For habitual present actions, use simple present 'I always go' rather than 'I'm always going'. Use 'near my home' or 'nearby my home' -> 'near my home' is natural.

× There is one park called Blvd. it's I think it's a big park and it's consist of waterfalls, water fountain, small water canals and too many trees.

✓ There is a park called Blvd. I think it's a big park and it consists of waterfalls, water fountains, small canals, and many trees.

Use article 'a park' or 'There is a park called...'. 'It's consist' is incorrect; use 'it consists of'. Use plural 'water fountains' and 'canals'. 'Too many trees' suggests excess; use 'many trees'.

× It's look like very greenish and I think it's when I go there I feel calm and quiet and I can enjoy myself.

✓ It looks very green, and when I go there I feel calm and relaxed and can enjoy myself.

Use 'it looks' not 'it's look'. 'Greenish' is informal; use 'green'. 'Calm and quiet' describes place but 'calm and relaxed' describes feeling. Remove extra 'I think it's' for clarity.