Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and relevant: start with a clear topic sentence about how often you walk, then add one or two specific reasons or examples. Use correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles) and avoid general claims without support. Keep it under five sentences and use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often, usually for 30 minutes in the evening. I walk because it helps me relieve stress and improves my fitness. For example, walking has helped me sleep better and maintain a healthy weight.

Suggestion: Answer with a clear past-tense sentence describing frequency and a short specific detail. Use correct past tense forms and avoid repeating words. Add a linking phrase such as "usually," "sometimes," or "only once" to clarify frequency.

Example: When I was a child, I seldom went for walks; I remember going for walks with my mother only a few times in the mornings. For instance, we would walk to the nearby park once or twice during summer vacations.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and give two specific reasons with linking words such as "because" and "also." Use more natural phrases like "well-maintained," "walking paths," and "green surroundings." Keep sentences concise and avoid filler words.

Example: People like to walk in parks because they are well-maintained and have safe walking paths. Also, the greenery and fresh air make walking more enjoyable and relaxing.

Suggestion: Provide a clear location and explain specific reasons using correct adjectives and nouns. Use linking words like "because" and "for example." Avoid vague phrases like "work very smoothly"—instead describe scenery, climate, or atmosphere.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the northern mountains because the scenery is beautiful and the air is fresh. For example, walking among pine trees and along quiet trails would be very peaceful.

Suggestion: Answer in the past tense with a brief specific time and place. Begin with a clear topic sentence such as "I last went for a walk..." then add one detail (when or where). Correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Example: I last went for a walk about a month ago at a small park near my home. I went there in the morning because I had some free time before work.

× Yes, I work a lot because work is very important for your health and it's keep you from different diseases.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because walking is very important for your health and it keeps you from different diseases.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' and mixed second-person 'your' with first-person context; 'it's keep' is incorrect verb form and subject. Use gerund 'walking' as the subject and 'it keeps' for third-person singular present. Also ensure pronoun perspective matches the speaker (use 'your' only if addressing the listener). Suggestions: use the gerund for activities as subjects and use correct verb agreement (it keeps).

× If you walk a lot of then you have not any sugar issue and blood pressure issue.

✓ If you walk a lot, then you will not have any problems with diabetes or blood pressure.

The original mixes tenses and uses awkward noun phrases. 'You have not any' is ungrammatical; native structure is 'you will not have any problems with ...' or 'you do not have...'. Use 'problems with diabetes' instead of 'sugar issue'. Also include a comma before 'then' and correct future implication with 'will'.

× Uh, I go to the outside when I was child only one time at the morning I went to the walk for with my mom because my mom went to the walk at the morning and I also.

✓ When I was a child, I went outside only once in the morning to walk with my mom because she used to walk in the morning and I went with her.

The student mixed present and past tense ('I go' with 'when I was'). Use past tense consistently for past events: 'I went' and 'when I was a child'. Also fix article use ('a child'), word order ('in the morning'), and remove repetition. Use 'used to' to indicate habitual action in the past.

× people like to walk in parks because there is a well management and there is a made, uh, full of track so people can easily walk there and there is a lot of greenery so people enjoy.

✓ People like to walk in parks because they are well managed and have well-maintained walking tracks, and there is a lot of greenery so people enjoy them.

Incorrect prepositions and noun forms: use 'well managed' (adjective), 'have walking tracks' (not 'made full of track'), and 'enjoy them' to refer back to parks. Replace 'there is a made' with 'have' and use plural agreement. Suggestions: use adjectives correctly and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Uh, if I got the chance, I would like to walk in northern area because northern area work very smoothly and you enjoy a lot.

✓ If I got the chance, I would like to walk in the northern areas because the scenery is peaceful and you would enjoy it a lot.

'Northern area work' is incorrect: subject-verb agreement and awkward phrasing. 'Area' singular requires 'works' but better to say 'northern areas' or 'the northern area' and describe with 'is peaceful' or 'has beautiful scenery.' Also match conditional mood: 'would enjoy.' Suggestions: use appropriate nouns and verbs and maintain conditional consistency.

× During the park there is a lot of nature green tree, so you are more more is.

✓ In the park there are many green trees and more natural scenery, so you feel more relaxed.

The sentence has incorrect adjective order and awkward fragments ('more more is'). Use 'many green trees' (quantifier + adjective + noun), 'natural scenery', and a clear result clause 'so you feel more relaxed.' Suggestions: order adjectives correctly and complete the clause with a clear verb.

× Uh, where I should go for a walk like last month and now the time I have busy so, uh, I don't have a time to walk.

✓ Last month I used to go for walks, but now I am busy so I don't have time to walk.

The original mixes 'should' and wrong tense. Use past habitual 'used to' for past routine and present continuous 'I am busy' for current state. Also 'a time' is unnecessary; use 'time.' Suggestions: keep tense consistent and use standard expressions for routines.

× And where I did go, that is that was a park and which is a near to my home.

✓ Where I went was a park that is near my home.

The sentence misuses 'did' and 'which is a near to my home.' Use simple past 'I went' and relative clause 'that is near my home' or 'near my home.' Avoid redundant 'that is that was.' Suggestions: use correct past tense and concise relative clauses.