Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, 'in the evenings' or 'after dinner'). Also correct tense and word choice errors (e.g., 'my father went to work', 'my mother does small craft work'). Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often. In the evenings, I usually walk in the garden with my grandparents after we finish our tea because it helps us relax and chat about our day.

Suggestion: Answer directly and clearly. Use a simple past tense to describe childhood habits and avoid filler phrases. Give one or two specific details (e.g., where you walked, who accompanied you, and mention the pet briefly) and use linking words like 'often' or 'usually'.

Example: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. My grandparents and I used to walk in the neighbourhood with our pet dog, and we usually visited the nearby park every afternoon.

Suggestion: This is a clear answer but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and specific reasons. Start with a direct reason, then add a linked supporting point and an example. Use varied vocabulary ('relax', 'de-stress', 'connect with nature').

Example: People like walking in parks because it helps them de-stress after a hectic day. Additionally, parks offer fresh air and green surroundings, which allow visitors to feel more connected to nature and escape urban noise.

Suggestion: Use conditional structure correctly and be specific about why you would choose the place. Avoid awkward phrases ('gapped the opportunity') and reduce redundancy. Provide one or two concrete details about the place and link them logically.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the Chandigarh Rose Garden because it is very spacious and full of colourful flowers and well-maintained lawns, which would make for a peaceful and scenic walk.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently when talking about a recent event and be specific and coherent. Begin with a direct sentence stating where and when you went, then add one or two details about the experience. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases ('saw some dust').

Example: I went for a walk in the local park last weekend because I wanted some fresh air. I walked around the lake and enjoyed watching the ducks and the trees, which felt very refreshing.

× Personally speaking, yes. Personally speaking yes. I do prefer to have a walk with my grandparents because in the evening whenever I have a spare spare time, I usually prefer to go on a walk in the garden and after having a cup of tea with my family members, my father went to the business and mother having some small Crocs works and so me and my grandparent went to the garden for a walk.

✓ Personally speaking, yes. I prefer to take a walk with my grandparents because in the evening, whenever I have spare time, I usually go for a walk in the garden. After having a cup of tea with my family, my father goes to work and my mother does some small chores, so my grandparents and I go to the garden for a walk.

The original contains repetition ('Personally speaking' and 'spare spare'), awkward verb forms and tenses, and poor sentence structure. Use 'prefer to take a walk' or 'go for a walk' for natural phrasing. 'Father went to the business' should be 'father goes to work' to match habitual present. 'Mother having some small Crocs works' is unclear; corrected to 'mother does some small chores'. Rearranged into clear sentences and consistent present tense for habitual actions. Suggestion: avoid repeating phrases, use simple present for regular habits, and use common collocations like 'go for a walk' and 'do chores'.

× As much as much as I remember when I was a child, my mother told me that I have a big font of walking daily use whenever I have a time. So me and my grandparent usually prefer when I was a child, we usually prefer to go to the walk and having a small pet, which is, which is dogs. So we, uh, we see together.

✓ As far as I remember, when I was a child my mother told me that I loved walking every day whenever I had time. My grandparents and I usually preferred to go for walks, and we had a small pet dog. We used to go together.

The original has repetition ('As much as much as'), incorrect vocabulary ('big font of walking'), wrong tense consistency, and incorrect pronoun order ('me and my grandparent'). Use 'As far as I remember' to express recollection. For past habits use 'loved' or 'used to' and 'had time'. Use plural 'grandparents' if both mentioned and 'my grandparents and I' is the correct subject order. 'Go for walks' is the natural collocation and 'pet dog' or 'pet' plus 'dog' is correct. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'used to' for past habitual actions, and use correct subject order 'X and I'.

× So mostly masses like walk in the park because sometimes they have a very hectic schedule so get relaxed from their stressful life. They usually prefer to go to walk in the parks and also get connected with the nature and the surrounding environment.

✓ Most people like to walk in the park because sometimes they have very hectic schedules and want to relax from their stressful lives. They usually prefer to walk in parks and also connect with nature and the surrounding environment.

Problems: 'masses' is unnatural; use 'most people'. 'Like walk' should be 'like to walk' or 'like walking' (infinitive or -ing). 'So get relaxed' should be 'and want to relax' or 'to relax'. Tense/agreement: 'a very hectic schedule' => plural for 'people' -> 'very hectic schedules'. 'go to walk in the parks' is incorrect word order; use 'walk in parks'. Also 'get connected with the nature' -> 'connect with nature'. Suggestion: use correct collocations ('like to walk', 'relax from'), match singular/plural, and prefer 'people' over 'masses'.

× So if I had a chance to walk, so I gapped the opportunity and went to the Chandigarh Rose Garden which was very vast in the size also and having the very good ambience like a kind of flowers and green luxury grasses. And yes, I should definitely choose that place.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take the opportunity and go to the Chandigarh Rose Garden, which is very large and has a pleasant ambience with many flowers and green lawns. I would definitely choose that place.

Original mixes conditional forms incorrectly ('if I had a chance' should pair with 'I would...'). 'Gapped the opportunity and went' is incorrect sequence; use 'take the opportunity and go' or 'would have gone' depending on meaning. 'Very vast in the size' -> 'very large' and 'green luxury grasses' -> 'green lawns'. Use consistent conditional (second conditional) for hypothetical present/future situations. Suggestion: use 'If I had... I would...' and natural nouns like 'lawns' and 'flowers'.

× So if we talk about the work lately, so I usually prefer I went for a walk to the park last weekend because I I want some fresh air. For example, walk around the lake in some and saw some dust.

✓ If we talk about my recent activities, I went for a walk in the park last weekend because I wanted some fresh air. For example, I walked around the lake and saw some ducks.

Errors: 'if we talk about the work lately' is unclear; 'my recent activities' fits. Mixed tenses: 'I usually prefer I went' is wrong—use past tense 'I went' and 'wanted'. 'I I want' -> 'I wanted'. 'walk around the lake in some and saw some dust' seems to be misheard; likely intended 'walked around the lake and saw some ducks' or 'saw some dust' unclear. Corrected to 'saw some ducks' as a plausible meaning and fixed verb forms. Suggestion: keep past tense for past events, remove filler 'so', and ensure clear object identification (ducks vs dust).