Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak dilbilgisi ve akıcılık sorunları var. ‘‘structural problems in my foot’’ yerine daha doğal ifadeler kullanılmalı (ör. "a foot problem" veya "flat feet"). Ayrıca neden yürümeyi sevmediğinizi biraz daha açık ve mantıklı bağlaçlarla açıklayın. Örnek olarak sonuç veya sebep bağlaçları kullanarak cümlenizi geliştiriniz. En fazla 3-4 cümle kullanın.

Example: I don't walk a lot because I have flat feet, which make long walks uncomfortable. As a result, I usually prefer short walks or using public transport. If I need to walk far, I wear supportive shoes to reduce pain.

Suggestion: Cevapta zaman uyumsuzluğu ve dilbilgisi hataları var (ör. "in the past", "we walked everywhere"). Daha doğal anlatım için geçmiş zamanda tutarlı ifadeler kullanın ve kısa destekleyici detaylar ekleyin. Bağlaçlarla nedenlerini açıklayın. Cümle sayısını 2-3 ile sınırlayın.

Example: Yes, I often went outside as a child because I had many friends nearby. We played different games in the park and usually walked everywhere together, which kept us active.

Suggestion: Genel fikriniz açık ama ifadeler tekrarlı ve biraz yapay. "In my view" ve "this is why" gibi bağlantıları doğru kullanın; ayrıca "desiring" yerine daha doğal "want" veya "try to" kullanın. Spesifik nedenler ekleyin (ör. temiz hava, doğa, egzersiz). Cümle sayısını 2-3 ile tutun.

Example: In my view, people walk in parks to escape daily stress and enjoy nature. For example, parks offer fresh air and quiet paths where people can relax or exercise.

Suggestion: Fikir net, ancak dilbilgisi ve kelime seçimi hatalı ("I choose" → "I'd choose", "suffocating and uh bad air" → "suffocating with poor air quality"). Tekrarlardan kaçının ve bağlaçlarla detay verin (ör. neden doğayı tercih ettiğinizi açıklayın). 2-3 cümle yeterli.

Example: I'd choose to walk in nature because cities can feel suffocating with poor air quality. Walking in a forest or by a lake would be relaxing and healthier for my lungs.

Suggestion: Cevap kafa karıştırıcı ve uygunsuz ifadeler içeriyor. "Kicked me out" ve dilbilgisi hataları ("unresponsible" yerine "irresponsible") daha kibar ve net ifade edilmeli. Ayrıca olayı mantıklı bir sırada anlatın: ne oldu, neden oldu ve sonucu. 3-4 cümle kullanarak olayın detaylarını daha sakin bir dille belirtin.

Example: Recently I walked to a job interview, but there was a misunderstanding at the reception. They said I had arrived late and asked me to leave the building. After that I explained the situation and tried to reschedule the interview.

× No, I don't walk a lot because structural problems in my foot.

✓ No, I don't walk a lot because I have structural problems in my foot.

The original sentence lacks a main verb 'have' to link the subject to the condition; this is a sentence structure error. Include the verb 'have' to indicate possession of the problem: 'I have structural problems in my foot.' Also consider singular/plural consistency: 'a structural problem in my foot' or 'structural problems in my feet' if both feet are affected.

× My foot is flat, I don't walk more.

✓ My foot is flat, so I don't walk much.

Using 'more' is incorrect here; 'much' is the appropriate quantifier with verbs in negative sentences. Replace 'more' with 'much' and use a conjunction 'so' for logical connection.

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

The phrase 'to have a walk' is unnatural; use 'for a walk'. The past tense auxiliary 'Did' is correct, but the verb form should be base form 'go' and the prepositional phrase should be 'for a walk' to sound natural.

× Yeah, because I had several friends in the past.

✓ Yes, because I had several friends when I was a child.

The response should specify the time frame to match the question about childhood. Replace 'in the past' with 'when I was a child' for clarity and tense appropriateness.

× We played various games on outside and we are walked to everywhere.

✓ We played various games outside and we walked everywhere.

Use 'outside' without 'on'. 'We are walked to everywhere' is incorrect: remove passive 'are' and use past tense 'walked' with 'everywhere'. This fixes preposition misuse and incorrect verb form/passive.

× In in my view, people are desiring to escape daily life stress.

✓ In my view, people desire to escape daily life stress.

Don't repeat 'In'. 'Are desiring' is an incorrect continuous form for a stative verb; use simple present 'desire'. This corrects pronoun/phrase repetition and verb form choice.

× This is why people like to go parks.

✓ This is why people like to go to parks.

Add the preposition 'to' before 'parks'. 'Like to go parks' is missing the necessary preposition.

× I choose nature because cities are suffocating and uh bad air.

✓ I would choose nature because cities are suffocating and have bad air.

The question is conditional ('Where would you like...'), so use conditional 'would choose'. 'Are suffocating' is acceptable, but 'uh bad air' lacks a verb: use 'have bad air' to show cities possess poor air quality. Also avoid filler 'uh'.

× The nature is have clean air and relaxing.

✓ Nature has clean air and is relaxing.

Do not use the definite article 'the' with 'nature' in this context. Use 'has' for possession and 'is relaxing' for description. Remove unnecessary words and correct verb forms.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where did you go for a walk recently?

'Lately' is often used with present perfect; 'recently' suits simple past questions with 'did'. Replace 'lately' with 'recently' to match past tense usage.

× I walked to my job interview lately, they were waiting for me and they kicked me out of the company building.

✓ I walked to my job interview recently; they were waiting for me and they kicked me out of the company building.

Replace 'lately' with 'recently' to match past tense. Also separate clauses with a semicolon or period instead of a comma splice. The tenses 'were waiting' and 'kicked' are consistent past.

× They say you came recently.

✓ They said, 'You came recently.'

In reporting past speech, use past reporting verb 'said'. If quoting directly, use quotation punctuation. Change 'say' to 'said' for past narrative consistency.

× You are unresponsible.

✓ You are irresponsible.

Use the correct adjective form 'irresponsible' (not 'unresponsible'). 'Un-' is not the correct prefix for this adjective.