Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Avoid repetition and awkward phrasing (e.g., “I do walk”).

Example: I don’t walk a lot overall. However, I walk regularly as part of my workouts, for example I often go for a brisk walk while chatting with a friend, and I usually walk between shops when I run errands.

Suggestion: Use correct tense and avoid exaggeration. Give a clear topic sentence about past habit, then provide one or two specific memories using linking words. Correct grammar: ‘I often went’ not ‘I often go’.

Example: Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child. For example, I spent many afternoons running and biking with my friends, and my parents often took us for family walks on weekends.

Suggestion: Be precise and avoid filler. Start with a clear reason, then add specific supporting points using linking words (for example, because / moreover). Fix sentence fragments and capitalization (wellness).

Example: People like to walk in parks mainly for health reasons because it’s a low‑impact exercise. Moreover, parks offer fresh air and pleasant scenery, which helps reduce stress and makes exercise more enjoyable.

Suggestion: Use the conditional form correctly and be specific about a place. Start with a direct answer naming a location, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Avoid tense mistakes and repetition.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal path because the sea views are calming and the fresh air is good for my health. For instance, I enjoyed long seaside walks during past vacations.

Suggestion: Good answer: clear and specific. Make phrasing more natural by combining sentences smoothly and adding one small detail (how long or what you noticed).

Example: Last weekend I went for a walk in Rojas City with some colleagues. We walked early in the morning for about an hour, and it was very relaxing because the streets were quiet and the air felt fresh.

× Sometimes I do walk whenever I do my workout like walk and chat outdoors.

✓ Sometimes I do walk whenever I do my workout, like walking and chatting outdoors.

The verbs 'walk' and 'chat' are part of a list describing activities and should be in the -ing form after 'like' to indicate activities (gerunds). Use 'walking and chatting' to maintain parallel gerund structure.

× But whenever I travel I often ride in bus or car so I don't walk a lot.

✓ But whenever I travel I often ride in a bus or a car, so I don't walk a lot.

English requires articles before singular countable nouns: 'a bus' and 'a car'. Also add a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'so' connecting independent clauses.

× When I do store visits I do walk a lot.

✓ When I do store visits, I walk a lot.

Use 'walk' without extra 'do' for present simple or use 'walking' if rephrasing. The auxiliary 'do' is unnecessary here. Also include a comma after the adverbial clause.

× Yes, I often go outside to have a walking.

✓ Yes, I often went outside for walks.

Question asks about past habit, so use past tense 'went' and the noun phrase 'for walks' instead of the ungrammatical 'have a walking'.

× I was a child almost every single day of my life.

✓ I went outside almost every single day when I was a child.

The original sentence misplaces 'was a child' and lacks the action. Use past tense 'went outside' and time clause 'when I was a child' to express past habit.

× I spent my life outdoors walking and running and biking along with my friends and parents.

✓ I spent my time outdoors walking, running, and biking with my friends and parents.

'Life' is exaggerated; 'time' is more natural. Use commas to separate items in a list and 'with' instead of 'along with' for conciseness.

× I love walking when I was a child.

✓ I loved walking when I was a child.

This sentence mixes present tense 'love' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'loved' to match the time frame.

× I believe people like to walk in parks for their health and Wellness.

✓ I believe people like to walk in parks for their health and wellness.

'Wellness' should not be capitalized here; use lowercase 'wellness' as a common noun.

× Nowadays people tend to walk as their workout routine and also to maintain their healthy lifestyle.

✓ Nowadays people tend to walk as part of their workout routine and to maintain a healthy lifestyle.

Use 'as part of their workout routine' and 'a healthy lifestyle' for natural collocations; 'their healthy lifestyle' is acceptable but 'a healthy lifestyle' is more idiomatic here.

× Walking is a trend nowadays and people are. Often.

✓ Walking is a trend nowadays, and people often do it.

Original is fragmented ('people are. Often.'). Combine into a complete sentence: 'people often do it' clarifies the meaning and corrects fragment.

× I like to take a long walk if I have a chance because it made me relax.

✓ I would like to take a long walk if I had the chance because it would make me relax.

Question asks a hypothetical: use conditional structure. 'If I had the chance' (past-subjunctive) with 'I would like' and 'would make' is appropriate. 'Made' is past and inconsistent.

× Also it helps my health and Wellness improve.

✓ Also it helps improve my health and wellness.

Lowercase 'wellness', and place 'improve' after 'helps' with the object 'my health and wellness' for correct word order ('helps improve X').

× I usually take long walks whenever I went to vacation.

✓ I usually took long walks whenever I went on vacation.

Mixed tenses: 'usually' with past context requires past tense 'took'. Use the correct preposition 'on vacation'.

× I went for a walk in Rojas City last weekend.

✓ I went for a walk in Rojas City last weekend.

This sentence is correct past tense; no grammatical change needed.

× I walked with my staff early in the morning and it was really relaxing because the streets were quiet and the air felt fresh.

✓ I walked with my staff early in the morning, and it was really relaxing because the streets were quiet and the air felt fresh.

Sentence is grammatically correct but add a comma before 'and' connecting two independent clauses for clarity.