Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答要更简洁、语法准确，并用连接词使句子连贯。注意动词形式和名词单复数。可以用一到两句概述习惯，然后补充具体地点和感受。

Example: Yes, I walk a lot, especially in the parks near my home. I enjoy walking there because the paths are lined with trees and flowers, and it helps me relax.

Suggestion: 注意时态一致（过去时），避免重复。先用一到两句直接回答，然后用具体细节说明，例如和谁去、去哪里、做什么。

Example: Yes, I did. My family had a small dog, so we often took it for walks near the national park. I loved playing with the dog and exploring the trails with my parents.

Suggestion: 回答要更连贯，注意主谓一致和连词使用。先给出总体原因，再列举两到三个具体原因，并用连接词例如 'because', 'so' 连接句子。避免重复短语。

Example: People like walking in parks because the air is fresher and the greenery is calming. Also, parks provide a peaceful environment away from work stress, so many people go there to relax and exercise.

Suggestion: 保持句子完整，补充具体原因並用连词使逻辑更清晰。可以比较不同地点并解释偏好。注意不要留下不完整的句子。

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a national park because it has extensive forests and more wildlife than a city park. The natural scenery would make the walk more refreshing and interesting.

Suggestion: 使用正确的时态（过去式或现在完成式），避免重复词。先直接回答最近去了哪里，再补充具体感受或看到的景物。简明表达即可。

Example: Recently, I went for a walk in the park near my home. It is very beautiful with many trees and flowers, and I enjoyed the fresh air.

× I really enjoy to walk through the parks.

✓ I really enjoy walking through the parks.

句中動詞 enjoy 後需接動名詞 (verb + -ing)，不能接不定式 to + 動詞。建議記住常見的動詞搭配，例如 enjoy + -ing。

× near my home there are lots of parks and falling them is flowers and trees.

✓ near my home there are lots of parks and in them there are flowers and trees.

原句中 falling them is 不合語法，應使用複數名詞 parks 並用介詞短語 in them 表示「在那些公園裡」。同時用 there are 引出複數名詞。

× Yes, when I was a child, my family raised a little pet, a little dog, so we often take out to walk the dog and near the National Park.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, my family raised a little pet, a little dog, so we often took it out to walk near the National Park.

描述過去習慣要使用過去式。原句中的 take 應改為過去式 took；另外動作對象應用代詞 it，並修正語序為 take it out to walk → took it out to walk。

× When I was a child, I really enjoying to play with my dog and enjoying the.

✓ When I was a child, I really enjoyed playing with my dog.

描述過去需要過去式 enjoyed；enjoy 後接動名詞 playing 而不是不定式 to play。原句還有殘缺片段（and enjoying the）應刪除。

× That's because the parks has a lot of fresh air and a lot of trees and flowers and animals.

✓ That's because the parks have a lot of fresh air and many trees, flowers, and animals.

主詞 parks 為複數，動詞應使用 have 而非 has；另外可改進用詞搭配，使用 many 修飾可數複數名詞。

× You can relax yourself. Since many people have a stressful work. That's why they like to work in the park.

✓ You can relax. Since many people have stressful work, that's why they like to walk in the park.

原句 relax yourself 雖可理解但更自然為 you can relax；句子片段 Since many people have a stressful work 為不完整句，且 work 為不可數，前需去掉 a，並且人們去公園是 walk，而不是 work（意思錯置）。合併為一個完整句更通順。

× They can relax themselves.

✓ They can relax.

relax 為不及物動詞，通常不需要反身代詞 themselves；刪除反身代詞更自然。

× If I had a chance, I would prefer to take a long walk in the National Park.

✓ If I had a chance, I would prefer taking a long walk in the National Park.

prefer 可跟不定式或動名詞，但在虛擬語氣中更自然用 prefer + -ing 表示偏好（也可接受原句，但按題單要求只修改符合類別的錯誤，給出更自然搭配）。

× That's because the National Park has a lot of trees and forests apart from the common park, so.

✓ That's because the National Park has many trees and forests, unlike common parks.

原句結尾不完整（so.），並且語序與單複數搭配更自然改為 many trees 和複數的 common parks。

× Recently, I go for work in my in the park near my home.

✓ Recently, I went for a walk in the park near my home.

描述最近發生的活動常用現在完成或過去式；原句語序混亂且 use of go for work 錯誤，應為 go for a walk。此處改為過去式 went 或可用 have gone。

× Actually there's a beautiful park near my home that I can see a lot of trees and flowers and I can breathe fresh, fresh air.

✓ Actually there's a beautiful park near my home where I can see many trees and flowers and breathe fresh air.

使用 where 比較自然來引導定語從句；a lot of 可數名詞改為 many trees；breathe fresh, fresh air 重複形容詞冗餘，改為 breathe fresh air。