Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make the answer more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., 'digest' → 'digestion' or 'digestive process'), avoid redundancy, and limit to 3–4 sentences. Add a brief reason and a linking word.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually go for a short walk around my neighborhood after dinner because it helps my digestion and lets me relax. Sometimes I take a longer route on weekends to get more exercise.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and clarity: replace 'shy' with 'a child', remove repetitions, and be specific about feelings. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide a brief reason or memory.

Example: Yes, I often went walking with my parents when I was a child because it was a nice family activity. We usually walked in the nearby park and sometimes fed the ducks, which I found fun and memorable.

Suggestion: Improve vocabulary accuracy ('green spares' → 'green spaces'), remove repetition, and vary linking words. Be concise and include specific examples of activities.

Example: People like walking in parks because green spaces offer a peaceful escape from city noise. For example, in Bangkok many visitors walk there to exercise, breathe fresh air, or sit and chat with family and friends.

Suggestion: Fix vocabulary and factual errors ('Cities sky crap' → 'city skyscrapers'; 'Scrappers' unclear; 'Malaysia Terrace' likely wrong). Be specific and coherent: name one or two features you would enjoy and use linking words to explain why.

Example: If I could, I would take a long walk in Central Park, New York City, because it is a large green area surrounded by skyscrapers. I would enjoy following the scenic paths, visiting landmarks like Bethesda Terrace, and relaxing by the lake.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary ('green spares' → 'green spaces'), grammar ('a peaceful place'), and use present perfect appropriately. Add a brief specific detail about what you do there to enrich the answer.

Example: Lately I've been walking in Lumpini Park in Bangkok. It is one of the city's largest green spaces, with many trees and a large lake, so I enjoy jogging along the paths and sitting by the water to unwind.

× After my dinner I usually go out to walk around my house to help my digesting well.

✓ After my dinner I usually go out to walk around my house to help my digestion.

The noun 'digesting' is incorrect; use the noun 'digestion'. Also 'help my digestion' is the natural collocation; remove 'well' which is unnecessary. Use the -ion noun form rather than the -ing verb form here.

× Yes, I often went for walks with my parents when I was a shy because it was a good way to spend time together.

✓ Yes, I often went for walks with my parents when I was shy because it was a good way to spend time together.

The article 'a' before 'shy' is incorrect because 'shy' is an adjective describing the subject; do not use 'a' with predicative adjectives. Removing 'a' corrects the grammatical structure.

× We usually walked in the nearby park and sometimes fed the ducks which I which I rarely enjoyed.

✓ We usually walked in the nearby park and sometimes fed the ducks, which I rarely enjoyed.

There is a duplicated phrase 'which I' causing redundancy and breaking sentence flow. Remove the repeated words and add a comma before the nonrestrictive clause 'which I rarely enjoyed' to make the sentence clear and grammatically correct.

× I think parks are popular because they provide urban green spares where people can relax and escape the noise of the city, especially in busy places like like Bangkok.

✓ I think parks are popular because they provide urban green spaces where people can relax and escape the noise of the city, especially in busy places like Bangkok.

The plural noun 'spaces' is the correct word; 'spares' is a misspelling. Also 'like like' is a duplication; remove the extra 'like'. This fixes word choice and redundancy.

× Many people go there to work for exercise, get fresh air and spend quality time with family or friends.

✓ Many people go there to walk for exercise, get fresh air and spend quality time with family or friends.

The phrase 'work for exercise' is awkward and likely incorrect in this context. 'Walk for exercise' or 'exercise' is more appropriate. Replace 'work for' with 'walk for' to match the topic of walking and maintain parallel structure with the other verbs.

× If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Central Park in New York City because it is a huge green space surrounded by Cities sky crap.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Central Park in New York City because it is a huge green space surrounded by the city's skyscrapers.

'Cities sky crap' is a fragment with incorrect word order and misspellings. Use the possessive 'city's' and the correct noun 'skyscrapers'. This corrects adjective/possessive use and word choice.

× Scrappers would enjoy exploring the scenic path, seeing landmarks like Malaysia Terrace and taking a break by the lake.

✓ Visitors would enjoy exploring the scenic paths, seeing landmarks like the Mall Terrace and taking a break by the lake.

'Scrappers' is a misspelling and wrong word; likely intended 'scrapers' or 'skyscrapers' but context suggests 'visitors'. Also 'path' should be plural 'paths' for generality. 'Malaysia Terrace' seems unlikely in Central Park; 'Mall Terrace' or another landmark fits better. Adjust word choice for clarity and correctness.

× I have been walking in Lupini Park lately.

✓ I have been walking in Lumpini Park lately.

The main issue is the proper noun spelling: 'Lupini' should be 'Lumpini'. The present perfect continuous tense 'have been walking' with 'lately' is acceptable. Correct the park name to match the real place.

× It is one of the biggest green spares in Bangkok with many trees and a large lake that makes it peaceful place to unwind.

✓ It is one of the biggest green spaces in Bangkok with many trees and a large lake that makes it a peaceful place to unwind.

Replace 'spares' with 'spaces' (correct noun). Add the article 'a' before 'peaceful place' to form 'a peaceful place'. This fixes word choice and article usage.