Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (like, uh), and use one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Correct verb forms and prepositions (e.g. “do aerobic exercise” not “do like aerobic”).

Example: Not really. I usually do aerobic workouts at home because they improve my fitness and don’t require equipment. For example, I often follow 30-minute online routines that I can do anytime, which is more convenient than going for a walk.

Suggestion: Give a clearer past-tense narrative and avoid repeating ideas. Use past tense consistently and link ideas with words like “and” or “for example.” Provide one specific memory or example rather than general statements.

Example: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often went outside with my friends to play football and run around in the park. For example, every Saturday we would play until dusk, which kept me active and happy.

Suggestion: Use accurate nouns and clearer linking phrases. Start with a direct opinion, then give two specific reasons with connectors like “because” and “for example.” Avoid awkward phrasing such as “the like by atmosphere.”

Example: I think people like walking in parks because they are surrounded by nature and fresh air. For example, the greenery and quiet paths make walks more relaxing, and many parks also have safe trails for exercise.

Suggestion: Be concise and use correct verb forms and noun phrases. Begin with a clear statement, then explain why with two specific benefits connected by linking words like “because” and “so.”

Example: I would choose a park because of the greenery and fresh air. The relaxed atmosphere helps me unwind from my routine, so a long walk there would be refreshing.

Suggestion: Answer in past or present consistently and avoid filler words. If asked about recently, use a clear recent-time phrase (e.g. “lately” -> “lately I haven’t walked much”). Provide a brief reason and mention one specific alternative activity.

Example: Lately I haven't gone for walks because my schedule is packed. Instead, I’ve been doing 30-minute aerobic workouts at home, which fit better into my day and keep me healthy.

× Not really, in everyday life I tend to do like aerobic exercise rather than walking or jogging because it's a great way to improve my health and it's quite easy and you can do anywhere and anytime in without requiring like equipment.

✓ Not really. In everyday life I tend to do aerobic exercise rather than walk or jog because it's a great way to improve my health, it's quite easy, and you can do it anywhere and anytime without requiring equipment.

Errors: unnecessary filler 'like'; incorrect use of 'do' with activities that should be bare infinitive or gerund; missing 'it' after 'do anywhere'; extra 'in' before 'without'; punctuation/run-on sentence. Suggestion: remove fillers, use parallel verbs 'walk or jog', include 'it' when referring to 'aerobic exercise', and split into clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I did. When I was a child. I tend to going outdoors with my friends to engage, uh, activities, recre recreational activities like playing football or playing, uh, running and jogging is a great way to improve my health at that time.

✓ Yes, I did when I was a child. I tended to go outdoors with my friends to take part in recreational activities like playing football or running and jogging because they were a great way to improve my health at that time.

Errors: incorrect tense and form 'tend to going' should be 'tended to go' (past habit), repetition and filler words, 'engage' requires preposition 'in' but 'take part in' fits better, and subject-verb agreement with 'running and jogging is' should be 'they were'. Suggestion: use past tense for childhood habits, remove fillers, and ensure verbs are in correct forms. Grammar problem type ID:5

× I think Parks is a great place to stay active because it's surrounded by nature and really greenery.

✓ I think parks are a great place to stay active because they are surrounded by nature and lots of greenery.

Errors: incorrect capitalization and article use 'Parks' should be plural 'parks' and require plural verb 'are'; 'really greenery' is incorrect adjective+noun order and missing quantifier. Suggestion: use lowercase plural 'parks are', replace 'really greenery' with 'lots of greenery' or 'a lot of greenery'. Grammar problem type ID:17

× People tend to engage in the like by atmosphere because it's really a good place to walk.

✓ People tend to enjoy the atmosphere because it's a really good place to walk.

Errors: incorrect verb choice 'engage in the like by atmosphere' is ungrammatical and wrong prepositions. Suggestion: replace with 'enjoy the atmosphere' to convey meaning clearly. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I would go for parks because they combined with the greenery and fresh air, the atmosphere that really laid back and they can relax and escape from my routine.

✓ I would go to parks because combined with the greenery and fresh air, the atmosphere is really laid-back and they allow me to relax and escape from my routine.

Errors: 'go for parks' should be 'go to parks'; missing hyphen in 'laid-back'; mismatched subject reference 'they can relax' should refer to 'parks allow me' or 'they allow me'. Suggestion: use 'go to', correct adjective form 'laid-back', and clarify agent/subject so meaning is clear. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Currently I'm not do like walking or jogging.

✓ Currently I'm not doing much walking or jogging.

Errors: 'not do like walking' is ungrammatical; correct progressive form is 'not doing'. Suggestion: use present continuous 'I'm not doing' and remove filler 'like'. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I tend to another kind of activities like uh, aerobic exercise at home because I have uh, quite packed schedule.

✓ I tend to do other kinds of activities, like aerobic exercise at home, because I have a quite packed schedule.

Errors: 'tend to another kind of activities' mix of forms; should be 'tend to do other kinds of activities'. Also article before 'quite packed schedule' needed: 'a quite packed schedule' or simply 'a packed schedule'. Suggestion: use 'tend to do' + plural 'kinds' and include 'a'. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So, uh, doing at home is a great way to stay healthy without going outside.

✓ So doing exercise at home is a great way to stay healthy without going outside.

Errors: missing object after 'doing' — 'doing at home' is incomplete; specify 'exercise'. Suggestion: include the noun 'exercise' or restructure to 'Exercising at home...'. Grammar problem type ID:8