Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more natural and concise: start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, correct verb use, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use one or two supporting details with appropriate linking words. Pronunciation and grammar issues (working vs walking, tense consistency, planned vs plan) should be fixed.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. For example, I usually take a short walk along the river after lunch or dinner because it helps me relax and digest. It’s become part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: Answer the past question clearly in past tense and be specific. Start with a direct past-tense sentence, then give one or two concrete examples. Fix grammar (I like get with my friends → I liked hanging out with my friends) and linking words for coherence.

Example: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. I liked hanging out with friends at the park near my school, and we would play games or explore the area together.

Suggestion: Give a clear reason first, then add specific supporting details using linking words. Use natural collocations (a good place, outdoor activities) and correct articles and prepositions. Avoid redundancy.

Example: People like parks because they are peaceful and attractive places for outdoor activities. For instance, parks have trees and benches, so people can relax, exercise, or spend time with family.

Suggestion: Answer the hypothetical directly using conditional language, then give vivid specific reasons. Correct word choice (working → walking) and phrasing (feel free/feel the breeze). Use linking words to connect ideas.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the river. I enjoy riverside paths because the scenery is calming and you can feel the breeze, which makes walking very refreshing.

Suggestion: Use past tense for 'lately' (or present perfect for recent actions) and be specific about a recent walk. Fix verbs (will work → I walked/I've been walking; went home and play → play with my brother). Keep it concise and relevant to the question.

Example: Recently I walked in the large park near my home. I usually go there to play or walk with my brother, and we often spend an hour exploring the paths.

× Sure, I love working, especially when I finished my dinner or lunch, I always planned to walk along the river.

✓ Sure, I love walking; especially after I finish my lunch or dinner, I always plan to walk along the river.

Tense inconsistency and word choice: 'finished' and 'planned' are past forms but the speaker describes a habitual present action, so use present simple 'finish' and 'plan'. Also 'working' is incorrect in context; 'walking' fits. Rearranged for natural word order and punctuation. Suggestion: use present simple for routines (I finish, I plan) and choose the correct verb (walk not work).

× Yes, actually I am an outgoing man and I like get with my friends and playing.

✓ Yes, actually I am an outgoing man and I like to get together with my friends and play.

Incorrect verb forms and missing preposition: 'like get with' is ungrammatical—use 'like to get together with' or 'like getting together with'. Also 'playing' should match parallel structure with 'get' so use base form 'play' after 'and'. Suggestion: use infinitive or gerund consistently and include necessary particles (together, with).

× In the park or school so I like to have a walk.

✓ I used to walk in the park or at school, so I like going for walks.

Awkward structure and preposition: 'In the park or school so' is run-on and missing preposition before 'school'. Recast to express habitual past or general preference: 'I used to walk in the park or at school' or 'I walk in the park or at school'. Also use 'going for walks' as natural phrase. Suggestion: break into two clauses and use correct prepositions ('in the park', 'at school').

× I think it is because that the park is a proper and beautiful place to to have a activity outside, so it is a excellent choice for ourselves to enjoy.

✓ I think it is because the park is a proper and beautiful place to have an outdoor activity, so it is an excellent place for us to enjoy.

Pronoun and article errors: 'because that' is incorrect—use 'because' alone. 'to to have a activity' has repeated 'to' and wrong article; use 'an activity' and 'outdoor' instead of 'outside'. 'ourselves' is unnatural here; use 'us'. Also 'a excellent' needs 'an'. Suggestion: remove redundant words, choose correct articles ('an activity', 'an excellent'), and use natural pronouns ('us').

× I think the place most I like to walk is along the river, you know? As you are working along the river, you will feel the free and the wind.

✓ I think the place I most like to walk is along the river. When you walk along the river, you feel free and can feel the wind.

Word order and article/adjective issues: 'place most I like' should be 'place I most like'. 'As you are working' is incorrect contextually; use 'when you walk' or 'as you walk'. 'Feel the free' is wrong—use adjective 'free' without 'the'. Also 'the wind' is okay but 'can feel the wind' is more natural. Suggestion: correct word order, use appropriate verbs for the activity, and remove unnecessary articles before adjectives.

× I will work lately in the park because near my home there is a big park and I usually went home and play with my brother.

✓ Lately I have been working in the park because there is a big park near my home, and I usually go home and play with my brother.

Tense and word order problems: 'I will work lately' mixes future and recent time; use present perfect progressive 'have been working' or present simple depending on meaning. 'I usually went home' mixes past with 'usually'—use present simple 'go'. Also reordered clause for natural English. Suggestion: match tense to time expressions ('lately' -> present perfect), and keep habitual actions in present simple.