Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid incorrect word choices and redundancy (e.g., use "walk in the evening" not "work at the evening"). Use linking words if adding a second idea.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a 30–40 minute walk in the evenings while listening to music, which helps me relax and clear my head.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use past tense consistently. Give a concise reason with clearer vocabulary and avoid repetitive phrases. Use one linking word to connect reason to conclusion.

Example: Not really. My parents worked long hours and I was busy with school, so I rarely had time to go for walks with my family.

Suggestion: Give a clear, general reason and then one or two specific supporting details. Use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "refreshed", "fresh air", "birds singing"). Avoid vague or incorrect words such as "injected" or "fresh oil."

Example: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax. For example, the fresh air, greenery, and birds singing create a peaceful atmosphere that reduces stress.

Suggestion: Respond directly with a simple plan and one clear reason. Use natural collocations (e.g., "go for a long walk in the mountains") and avoid awkward phrasing like "building the body structure." Keep sentences within the 5-sentence limit.

Example: I would like to take a long walk in the mountains because I enjoy hiking with friends. The fresh air and steep trails are great for fitness and bonding.

Suggestion: Use correct verbs and vocabulary ("walked around the lake", "fresh air"). Start with a direct answer in present perfect or past simple, then add one specific detail about the experience. Avoid repetition.

Example: Lately I walked around the lake with my family. The scenery and fresh air felt calming, and we enjoyed watching the ducks and talking together.

× 'I especially love to work at the evening while listen to some music and I feel so refreshed and injected at the same time.'

✓ 'I especially love to walk in the evening while listening to some music, and I feel so refreshed and energized at the same time.'

'work' is incorrect collocation here; 'walk' fits the question. After 'while' use the -ing form 'listening'. 'at the evening' is wrong preposition and article use; use 'in the evening'. 'injected' is wrong word choice; 'energized' conveys intended meaning.'

× 'I don't really think so because I feel like those kind of activity makes a lot of free time to do with my family members because they always, always busy with their job and I'm always busy with my studies.'

✓ 'I don't really think so because I feel like those kinds of activities left little free time to spend with my family members, since they are always busy with their jobs and I'm always busy with my studies.'

'those kind of activity' should be 'those kinds of activities' (plural agreement). 'makes a lot of free time to do with' is incorrect; use 'left little free time to spend with'. Use 'they are' for present continuous/state. 'their job' -> 'their jobs.'

× 'So I don't think I always work in the outside.'

✓ 'So I don't think I always went outside.'

'work in the outside' is unnatural and mismatches tense. The question asked about childhood (past), so use past tense 'went outside'. Also use 'outside' without 'the'. If keeping present general meaning, correct would be 'work outdoors' but context requires past.'

× 'Because of this kind of activities, especially in the past, make them feel injected, make them feel refractory, especially the fresh oil and the atmosphere between them and the winding sound, the bars, singing voice.'

✓ 'Because activities like walking, especially in the past, made them feel refreshed and relaxed, especially because of the fresh air, the atmosphere, the rustling sounds and birds singing.'

'Because of this kind of activities' has number and preposition errors; use 'activities like walking'. The tense should be past 'made' because phrase says 'in the past'. 'injected' and 'refractory' are incorrect word choices; use 'refreshed' and 'relaxed'. 'fresh oil' should be 'fresh air'. 'winding sound, the bars' unclear: likely 'rustling sounds and birds'.

× 'Maybe I'll probably go to the mountains for walking activity because I do really love to work with my friends, especially at the activity for building the body structure more much better than the day before.'

✓ 'Maybe I'll probably go to the mountains for a walk because I really love hiking with my friends, especially for activities that help build stronger bodies and improve fitness compared with before.'

'go to the mountains for walking activity' is awkward; use 'go to the mountains for a walk' or 'hike'. 'do really love to work with my friends' wrong verb; use 'hiking with my friends'. 'building the body structure more much better than the day before' is ungrammatical and redundant; rephrase to 'help build stronger bodies and improve fitness compared with before.'

× 'Lately I've been working around the lake with my family members and loved ones.'

✓ 'Lately I've been walking around the lake with my family members and loved ones.'

'working around the lake' is wrong verb; context is walking. Present perfect continuous 'I've been walking' fits 'lately'.

× 'The scenery and the fresh oil always make make us feel emotional and also feel free to work around them.'

✓ 'The scenery and the fresh air always make us feel emotional and also free to walk around.'

'fresh oil' should be 'fresh air'. Duplicate 'make' removed. 'feel free to work around them' is awkward; use 'feel free to walk around' or 'feel free there.' 'emotional' might be acceptable, kept but could be 'moved' if preferred.'