Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your response more grammatical, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then briefly explain why you walk and when. Use linking words (because, so) correctly and avoid redundant phrases. Also correct verb forms and article use.

Example: Yes, I walk quite a lot in the evenings. After a hectic day at work, I like to relax my mind by taking a short walk in the nearby park because the fresh air helps me unwind.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with specific details using correct tense and agreement. Use linking words such as ‘often’ or ‘usually’ and correct prepositions. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I often went for walks in the evenings when I was a child. I usually walked to school or to the nearby park with my friends, and we would chat about school and our hobbies, which was fun and helped us relax.

Suggestion: Start with a clear general statement, then give two specific reasons connected with linking words. Correct articles and word order, and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: People enjoy walking in parks because parks offer a pleasant and convenient outdoor environment. For example, the trees and fresh air make the area feel peaceful, and many people say walking there helps them feel connected to nature.

Suggestion: Answer directly and provide specific reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Use linking phrases (because, so that) and choose correct adjectives (quiet, calm). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: I would like to take a long walk in the mountains or along a quiet beach because those places are calm and soothing. Walking there would help me relax and recover from stressful work.

Suggestion: Use past tense correctly and give one clear time phrase. Mention one or two specific details (which parks, how long) and link ideas smoothly. Fix number and article usage.

Example: Recently I went for an evening walk in two nearby parks. They are very accessible, so I can get there quickly, and I enjoyed walking alone for about 30 minutes because it helped me unwind.

× Yes, I do a lot to work in the evening time because I feel so tired after my hectic work so I feel to relax my mind open to go walk nearby park.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot in the evenings because I feel very tired after my hectic work, so I walk to a nearby park to relax my mind.

The original sentence has incorrect verb patterns and word forms: 'do a lot to work' is incorrect for habitual walking, and 'feel to relax my mind open to go walk' mixes infinitive and noun forms incorrectly. Use the simple present for habitual actions ('I walk a lot'), plural 'evenings' for repeated times, and the structure 'walk to a nearby park to relax my mind' where 'to relax' is the correct infinitive purpose clause. Also adjust articles and word order ('a nearby park').

× When I was a child, I used to walk for in the evening time.

✓ When I was a child, I used to walk in the evenings.

The phrase 'used to' already indicates past habitual action, so adding 'for' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Use plural 'evenings' for habitual times. Remove 'time' which is redundant after 'evenings'.

× Sometime I walk in the school and nearby park with my friends because it helped me to share our views with each other and we enjoy a lot.

✓ Sometimes I walked at school and in the nearby park with my friends because it helped me share our views with each other and we enjoyed it a lot.

Tense inconsistency: the sentence begins with present 'Sometime I walk' but refers to past habit, so use past 'walked' to match 'helped'. Use 'Sometimes' (plural), prepositions 'at school' and 'in the nearby park', and correct object agreement: 'helped me share' (no 'to' needed) and 'we enjoyed it a lot.'

× People like to walk in the park because it is a very convenient for them.

✓ People like to walk in parks because it is very convenient for them.

'Convenient' is an adjective; remove the article 'a' because 'convenient' describes the general situation (uncountable concept). Also use plural 'parks' when speaking generally. The adverb 'very' correctly modifies the adjective 'convenient'.

× They feel more fresh air and green areas surrounding there are lot of trees and.

✓ They enjoy the fresh air and green surroundings; there are a lot of trees.

Original mixes noun phrases and word order. Use 'enjoy the fresh air' not 'feel more fresh air'. 'Green surroundings' is a clearer noun phrase. Split into two clauses: 'there are a lot of trees.' Add article 'a' before 'lot'. Remove trailing conjunction.

× They feel connected with the nature.

✓ They feel connected with nature.

'Nature' is generally uncountable here and does not need the definite article 'the'. Use 'connected with nature' for the general concept.

× I would like to take a long walk in the mountain or quite a beach area because I feel so comfortable there.

✓ I would like to take a long walk in the mountains or on a quiet beach because I feel very comfortable there.

Use plural 'mountains' or 'in the mountains' for general location. Use 'on a quiet beach' not 'quite a beach area' ('quite' was incorrect, should be 'quiet'). Use article 'a' before 'quiet beach'. Also 'very comfortable' is more natural than 'so comfortable' in this context.

× The atmosphere is a pleasant calm and soothing so I can relieve from my hectic work.

✓ The atmosphere is pleasant, calm, and soothing, so I can relax and recover from my hectic work.

Word order and choice: list adjectives 'pleasant, calm, and soothing' with commas. 'Relieve from my hectic work' is incorrect; use 'relax and recover' or 'relieve stress' with appropriate objects. 'Relax and recover from my hectic work' expresses the intended meaning.

× I went for a walk in the evening time 2 nearby parks because it is a more accessible for me and I can reach instantly without any obstacle.

✓ I went for a walk in the evening to two nearby parks because they are more accessible to me and I could reach them easily without any obstacles.

Number '2' should be written 'two' and placed before 'nearby parks'. Use past tense consistently: 'I went' and 'they were/more accessible' or 'they are more accessible to me' depending on meaning; here past narrative uses 'they were more accessible' but 'are' is acceptable if still true. Remove article 'a' before 'more accessible' and use 'accessible to me'. Use 'reach them easily' and plural 'obstacles'.

× I feel more comfortable there and enjoy myself alone.

✓ I felt comfortable there and enjoyed being alone.

Tense consistency: original describes a past walk, so use past tense 'felt' and 'enjoyed'. 'Enjoy myself alone' is awkward; 'enjoyed being alone' is more natural.