Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and relevant to the question: state whether you walk a lot, give one clear reason, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and keep to 2–3 sentences. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and use appropriate verb forms.

Example: Yes, I walk quite a lot. I usually walk to and from work every day because it keeps me fit and helps me feel refreshed.

Suggestion: Answer directly in past tense and give specific details. Avoid unclear phrases (e.g. 'go outside to work when I wear a tie') and reduce redundancy. Use one linking phrase to add a supporting detail or example.

Example: Yes, I often went outside to play as a child. For example, I would play football with my friends in the street every afternoon and only return home when it got dark.

Suggestion: Give a clear main reason and then one or two specific supporting points. Use natural vocabulary (e.g. 'pleasant scenery' instead of 'good phenomenon') and correct grammar. Keep sentences concise and use a linking word like 'also' or 'because'.

Example: People like to walk in parks because they offer pleasant scenery and fresh air. Also, walking there is relaxing and good for cardiovascular health.

Suggestion: Answer the hypothetical clearly using 'I would' or 'If I had the chance'. Choose a realistic location and give one specific reason. Avoid informal slang ('wanna') and incomplete sentences.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverbank because it is peaceful and has long paths where I could walk continuously for exercise.

Suggestion: Use correct past tense and smoother phrasing. Give one clear detail (how long, what you felt) and connect ideas with linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Avoid awkward word order and repetition.

Example: Recently I walked to a friend's house because it is about a 50-minute walk away. I enjoyed the fresh breeze and the chance to relax while walking there.

× Yes, I work a lot because work is an exercise that gonna keep. Your body in a good condition and can make you feel a bit good and make your body be. So refreshing.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot because walking is an exercise that will keep your body in good condition and make you feel refreshed.

Multiple errors: 'work' is wrong verb; context requires 'walking' (verb + -ing) as a noun (gerund). 'gonna' is informal and incorrect for written grammar; use 'will'. Fragmented punctuation 'keep. Your body' should be one clause. 'make your body be. So refreshing' is ungrammatical; use 'make you feel refreshed'. Suggest using gerund for activities, avoid informal 'gonna', combine fragments into complete sentences.

× Yes, I often go outside to work when I wear a tie because I like playing around and I like to go outside to play with my friend.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to play when I was a child because I liked playing around and I liked to go outside to play with my friends.

The question asks about childhood (past), so verbs must be in past tense: 'go' → 'went', 'wear' → 'was wearing' or 'wore', 'like' → 'liked'. Also 'work' seems wrong; context is 'play'. Use plural 'friends' if referring generally. Suggest matching tense to time reference and ensuring verb choices fit context.

× Everyday I'm gonna go outside to play and go back home when the night is coming.

✓ Every day I would go outside to play and return home when night came.

Because this describes habitual past behavior, use past habitual structure: 'would' or simple past 'went'. 'gonna' is informal and incorrect; 'when the night is coming' should be 'when night came' (past). Also 'Everyday' is an adjective; use 'Every day' for adverbial phrase. Suggest using correct past habitual forms and avoiding 'gonna' in formal grammar.

× People like to walk in park because it the good place to walking and enjoying the good situation, the good phenomenon and also good for your heart.

✓ People like to walk in parks because they are good places for walking and enjoying the scenery, and they are also good for your heart.

Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' with 'the'. 'it the good place' lacks 'is' and article; change to 'they are good places'. 'to walking' should be 'for walking' (preposition). 'good situation' and 'good phenomenon' are unclear; 'scenery' fits. Also ensure subject-verb agreement and parallel structure. Suggest using plural/general nouns and correct prepositions.

× I like to take a long walk if I go to mall because mall is a big place and considering it is a good place if you wanna lose weight and it's also good for your body because you keep working every.

✓ I would like to take a long walk if I went to a mall because a mall is a big place and it can be a good place to walk if you want to lose weight; it's also good for your body because you keep moving.

Question asked about hypothetical (If you had the chance), so use conditional: 'would like' and 'if I went'. Use article 'a mall'. Replace informal 'wanna' with 'want to'. 'keep working every' is incomplete and wrong; use 'keep moving' to mean staying active. Suggest using correct conditional forms, articles, and complete expressions.

× Lately I did go walk to my friend house because her house kind of far away so it take me about 50 minute to arrive.

✓ Lately I walked to my friend's house because her house is kind of far away, so it took me about 50 minutes to arrive.

Use simple past 'walked' or 'went for a walk' for a recent past event. 'did go walk' is ungrammatical. Possessive 'friend's house' required. 'kind of far away' is informal but acceptable; verb 'take' should be past 'took'. Use plural 'minutes'. Ensure subject-verb agreement ('house is'). Suggest using simple past and correct possessive and plural forms.

× So I take the time to walk and to feel the breeze of air.

✓ So I took the time to walk and feel the breeze.

Use past tense 'took' to match previous sentence. 'breeze of air' is redundant; 'breeze' suffices. 'to feel the breeze' is correct phrase. Suggest avoiding redundant prepositions and matching tense across sentences.