Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Correct the repeated word errors (work -> walk), reduce hesitations, and make the answer more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating the same idea.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk along the river near my home after dinner because it helps me relax and clear my mind, and the riverside scenery makes the walk more pleasant.

Suggestion: Fix word choice and repetition errors (work -> walk; remove duplicate words). Use one clear topic sentence, then give a specific example or detail about what you saw or learned to enrich the answer.

Example: Yes, I did. My parents often took me for walks around our neighborhood, and I remember discovering small parks and shops, which helped me learn about different people and places.

Suggestion: Correct vocabulary errors (work -> walk; subject-verb agreement: air is), reduce fillers, and organise reasons using linking words (firstly, secondly). Give one concrete example of a facility to be specific.

Example: People like walking in parks for several reasons. Firstly, the air is fresh and parks are good for morning exercise; secondly, they often have facilities such as jogging paths, benches, and playgrounds which make the visit comfortable.

Suggestion: Improve grammatical accuracy (mind flows; avoid unnecessary fillers like 'besides'), and make the imagery precise. Use one/topic sentence and a supporting reason with a clear linking word.

Example: I would like to take a long walk along the river near my home because the fresh air is refreshing and the gentle flow of the river helps my mind feel calm and peaceful.

Suggestion: Remove repetition (after after), improve tense and sentence ending (relax after -> relax afterwards/after my meal). Combine sentences to be concise and add a specific detail about what you did or saw to enrich the response.

Example: Lately I walked along the riverside near my home after dinner; the walk helped me relax, and I enjoyed watching people fishing and lights reflecting on the water.

× Yes, I do, because I think work is a good way to help me relax and clear my mind.

✓ Yes, I do, because I think walking is a good way to help me relax and clear my mind.

The noun 'work' is incorrect in this context; the speaker means the activity 'walking'. Use the gerund 'walking' as a noun to refer to the activity. This fits the question about walking and keeps tense and meaning consistent.

× And I usually work after dinner and I work along the river beside, uh, next to my home.

✓ And I usually walk after dinner, and I walk along the river next to my home.

The verb 'work' is mistakenly used where 'walk' is intended. Replace with 'walk' for correct meaning and maintain parallel structure. Remove redundant 'beside' when 'next to' is used; keep only one prepositional phrase.

× Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents usually took me out to have a work.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was a child, my parents usually took me out for a walk.

'Have a work' is incorrect English. Use the phrase 'for a walk' or 'to go for a walk'. 'Walk' here is a noun meaning an outing; the preposition 'for' is required.

× They thought that it it was a good way for me to experience the new things around me and to see the different world.

✓ They thought that it was a good way for me to experience new things around me and to see different aspects of the world.

There is a repeated word 'it it' — remove the duplicate. 'The new things' is better as 'new things' (no definite article) in this general sense. 'Different world' is incorrect; use 'different aspects of the world' or 'the world differently' to convey seeing variety.

× Well, I think there are several reasons people like to work in parks.

✓ Well, I think there are several reasons people like to walk in parks.

Again 'work' is incorrectly used instead of 'walk'. The verb phrase 'people like to walk' is correct. No subject-verb agreement issue after correction.

× Firstly, the air in the park are very fresh and the people can do exercise in the park during the morning.

✓ Firstly, the air in the park is very fresh, and people can exercise in the park in the morning.

'Air' is singular so use 'is' not 'are' (subject-verb agreement). 'Do exercise' is acceptable but 'exercise' as a verb is more natural: 'people can exercise'. Use 'in the morning' for natural preposition use.

× And besides, there are also many uh facilities in the park.

✓ Besides, there are also many facilities in the park.

Remove filler 'uh' for clarity and formality. The rest is correct.

× I would like to take a long walk along the river next to my home because I think walking along the river can help me breathe fresh air and besides I can also feel like my mind is flow with the river.

✓ I would like to take a long walk along the river next to my home because I think walking along the river can help me breathe fresh air, and I also feel like my mind flows with the river.

'Breathe fresh air' is correct. 'Is flow' is incorrect: use present simple 'flows' to describe a general state. 'I can also feel like' is awkward; 'I also feel like' is more natural. Ensure verb agrees with subject ('mind flows').

× Lately I went for a walk along the Riverside next to my home.

✓ Lately I went for a walk along the riverside next to my home.

'Riverside' should be lowercase unless it is a proper name; use 'riverside'. 'Lately' with past simple 'went' is acceptable for recent past; no tense change required.

× I walked along the Riverside after after dinner and I thought that it was a good way to help me relax after.

✓ I walked along the riverside after dinner, and I thought that it was a good way to help me relax afterwards.

Remove the repeated 'after'. Use lowercase 'riverside'. The final 'after' is incomplete; use 'afterwards' or 'after that' to finish the idea. Add a comma for clarity.