Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct word choice (walk vs work), and use one or two brief supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid redundancy and long awkward phrases.

Example: I don't walk a lot, but I usually go for morning walks. They help me stay fit and give me more energy and focus throughout the day.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear time frame, use correct tense, and avoid repeating the same idea. Use linking words (for example, because, so) and give one specific example or memory to support your answer.

Example: Yes, I often walked and ran when I was a child. For example, my family and I would go for an evening run in the park, which helped me feel energetic and ready for school the next morning.

Suggestion: Use simpler, accurate vocabulary (walk, not work) and clear structure: a topic sentence plus two concise reasons with linking words. Give concrete examples rather than vague phrases.

Example: Many people prefer walking in parks because the atmosphere is peaceful and there is plenty of greenery. Also, parks are safe places for families, so people can walk with their children or practise meditation.

Suggestion: Be concise and natural: state your preference and give one or two clear reasons. Use correct prepositions and avoid repetition. If mentioning a place, add a short detail why it appeals to you.

Example: I don't often take long walks, but I would walk along Richard Road because it is well maintained and ideal for runners. The wide pavements and trees make it pleasant and safe for exercise.

Suggestion: Use past simple clearly, be specific and concise. Describe the place briefly and state the effect on you using one linking word (so, which). Avoid awkward or redundant phrases.

Example: I recently walked along a lane beside some fields and a small river near Mira fields. The peaceful scenery helped me relax and clear my mind after studying.

× Uncertainly note, I don't like to work a lot but I used to go on the morning walks to keep my body fit as it helps to remain healthy as well as productive all over the day.

✓ I don't usually like to exercise a lot, but I used to go on morning walks to keep fit because they helped me stay healthy and productive throughout the day.

The original sentence has awkward phrasing and misplaced words (sentence structure errors). 'Uncertainly note' is not a natural phrase; use a simple adverb such as 'usually' and place it correctly. 'Work a lot' is incorrect contextually; 'exercise' or 'walk' fits better. Tense consistency: 'I used to go' (past habit) must match the explanation 'helped' (past). 'all over the day' is unidiomatic; use 'throughout the day'. Suggestions: simplify phrasing, maintain tense consistency, and use natural collocations like 'go on morning walks' and 'stay healthy and productive'.

× Definitely yes, when I was a child I used to go on the morning walks as well As for the running at the evening, as that helps me to remain productive as well as a healthy in the morning as well as also all over the day. And that helps me to start my day with a great assignment as it is the.

✓ Definitely. When I was a child I used to go on morning walks and run in the evenings because that helped me remain productive and healthy in the morning and throughout the day, and it helped me start the day well.

Multiple past tense and sentence structure issues. Use consistent past tense 'used to' with past 'helped'. 'At the evening' is incorrect preposition; use 'in the evenings'. 'A healthy' is wrong article/adjective use; use 'healthy'. Remove redundant phrases like 'as well as also'. The final fragment 'as it is the.' is incomplete and should be completed as 'it helped me start the day well.' Suggestions: keep sentences concise, use correct prepositions ('in the evenings'), maintain past tense, and avoid redundancy.

× A considerable amount of citizens prefer to work in the parks despite of roads, as parks provide a great ambience for the work running as well As for the meditation, and they can travel with their kids and kids and spend their leisure time with their loving ones in the past.

✓ A considerable number of people prefer to exercise in parks rather than on roads because parks provide a pleasant atmosphere for running and meditation, and they can go with their children and spend leisure time with loved ones.

Errors: 'amount' with countable 'citizens' should be 'number'. 'Despite of' is incorrect; use 'rather than' or 'despite'. 'Work running' is nonsensical; use 'running' or 'exercise'. 'As well As for the meditation' has incorrect capitalization and structure. 'Travel with their kids and kids' is redundant. 'In the past' is irrelevant. Suggestions: use correct quantifier 'number', correct prepositions ('rather than'), remove redundancy, and use natural collocations ('pleasant atmosphere', 'go with their children').

× Usually I do not like to go on a long walk but if I had the chance then I would like to go on the Richard Rd. as it is a well known and well furnished Rd. that is very suitable for the runners and helps the runners to to prepare themselves for the practice.

✓ I usually do not like going for long walks, but if I had the chance I would go to Richard Road because it is well known and well maintained, very suitable for runners and helps them prepare for training.

Conditional sentence uses second conditional correctly ('if I had the chance... I would...') so keep that tense. Corrections: use 'going for long walks' (gerund), remove redundant 'then', expand 'Rd.' to 'Road' and avoid abbreviations, 'well furnished' is odd for a road—'well maintained' fits. Remove duplicate 'to'. Suggestions: use natural expressions ('going for long walks', 'well maintained'), avoid abbreviations and duplication, and keep conditional tense consistent.

× I went for a walk in the street that is attached to the fields as well as a small river that flows along with Mira fields as it helps me to refresh my mind from the daily academic greens as that puts a strong influence as well as impact on my mind.

✓ I went for a walk on the street next to the fields and a small river that flows along the Mira fields; it helped me refresh my mind from daily academic work because it had a strong positive effect on me.

Problems: prepositions and tense consistency. Use 'went for a walk on the street next to the fields' rather than 'attached to'. 'Flows along with' is redundant; use 'flows along'. 'Daily academic greens' is incorrect; use 'daily academic work' or 'studies'. 'Puts a strong influence as well as impact' is redundant; use 'had a strong positive effect'. Keep past tense ('helped', 'had') consistent. Suggestions: simplify phrases, use correct prepositions ('on the street next to'), choose appropriate nouns ('studies' or 'work'), and avoid redundancy ('strong positive effect').