Walking— Part 1 Report
Conversation
Part 1
Examiner
Do you walk a lot?
Candidate
Yes I do, because walking a lot keeps my health good. For example I always work from my house to the nearest station. It takes 25 minutes by a walk so I can keep my house very well.
Examiner
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Candidate
When I was a kid, I often go outside by foot with my mother because I didn't think that I interesting praying inside. For example, when I was a child I when once I woke up I asked to my mother to go. Side and pray with me.
Examiner
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Candidate
One of the primary reasons is that people would like to feel safe because there are no cars inside parks. For another reason, people would like to feel nature closely. Therefore, people like to work in the park.
Examiner
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Candidate
If I had a chance to go walking for a long distance, I would choose walking in the mountains, because when we climb mountains, it takes longer hours, but after climbing to the top of mountain, we can feel a sense of accomplishment. Therefore, if I had a chance. I would like to go to mountains.
Examiner
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Candidate
Recently I walk around my house because I'm very busy nowadays and around my house the environment is very nice. Specifically there are a few cars and it it is very quiet.
Evaluation
Overall
Part 1
Do you walk a lot?
Score: 65.0Suggestion: 回答は直接的で内容も伝わりますが、文法ミス（時制や前置詞）、冗長な表現、不自然な語順が目立ちます。具体的には “work from my house to the nearest station” や “keep my house very well” は不自然です。改善点は：1) 正しい語順と前置詞を使う（e.g. walk to the station）2) 不要な語を省く（冗長を避ける）3) 一文目で主張、二文目で具体例（時間、頻度）を示す。
Example: Yes, I walk a lot because it helps me stay healthy. For example, I walk from my house to the nearest station every weekday, which takes about 25 minutes each way.
Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?
Score: 40.0Suggestion: 内容は伝えたいことがあるものの、時制の誤り、語彙の選択ミス（praying/interesting/side）、文の断片化、意味不明な部分が多く理解しにくいです。改善点は：1) 過去形を一貫して使う（e.g. I often went）2) 適切な語を選ぶ（e.g. bored instead of interesting/praying）3) 文を整理して具体例を短く述べる。
Example: Yes, I often went for walks with my mother when I was a child because I was bored staying indoors. For example, I used to wake up early and ask my mother to take me to the park nearby.
Why do people like to walk in parks?
Score: 55.0Suggestion: 意味は伝わりますが語彙と文法の選択に問題があります（would likeの過度使用、feel nature closely不自然、work→walkの誤り）。論理のつなぎは良いですが、もっと自然な表現と具体的な例を加えると良いです。改善点：1) 助動詞を適切に使う（use like/ enjoy）2) 自然を感じる＝“feel close to nature” 3) 最後に具体例（exercise, relax）を示す。
Example: People often enjoy walking in parks because they feel safer without traffic and can feel close to nature. For example, parks are quiet places where people can exercise or relax among trees and flowers.
Where would you like to take a long walk if you had the chance?
Score: 70.0Suggestion: 良い内容と理由（達成感）があり、論理も明確です。ただし文法（冠詞、複数形）、冗長表現、文の切れ目の不自然さがあるので整える必要があります。改善点：1) 冠詞と複数形の正しい使用（the mountains / a mountain）2) 文を簡潔に保つ3) 接続詞でつなげる。
Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the mountains because mountain hikes take several hours and reaching the summit gives me a strong sense of accomplishment.
Where did you go for a walk lately?
Score: 60.0Suggestion: 内容は明確ですが時制の不一致（Recently I walk→I have been walking / I walked）、語順や冗長、繰り返し（it it）などの小さなミスがあります。改善点：1) 適切な現在完了や過去形を使う（I have been walking）2) 不要な語を削り、具体的な理由（quiet streets, green areas）を示す3) 文の繋がりを意識する。
Example: Lately I have been walking around my neighborhood because I am very busy and the area is peaceful. For example, there are few cars on the streets and it is usually very quiet.
Grammar
× Yes I do, because walking a lot keeps my health good.
✓ Yes, I do, because walking a lot keeps me healthy.
Subject 'my health good' is unnatural; use 'keeps me healthy' to express maintaining health. Use adjective 'healthy' for a person and add comma after 'Yes'. Grammar problem type ID: 6
× For example I always work from my house to the nearest station.
✓ For example, I always walk from my house to the nearest station.
The verb 'work' is incorrect in context; 'walk' fits. Add comma after 'For example' and use simple present for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 26
× It takes 25 minutes by a walk so I can keep my house very well.
✓ It takes 25 minutes on foot, so I can keep my house in good condition.
Use 'on foot' instead of 'by a walk'. 'Keep my house very well' is unnatural; use 'keep my house in good condition'. Add comma before 'so'. Grammar problem type ID: 11},{
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