Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and directly answer the question first, then give one or two specific supporting details. Correct grammar (use present simple for routines) and avoid redundancy. Use linking words like "because" or "so" correctly.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. Because I am a teacher, I move around the classroom every day to check students' work and help them, and I also take short walks early in the morning to stay active.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and avoid repeating the same idea. Provide a clear topic sentence then one or two specific details (when, who, why).

Example: Yes, I often went for walks with my grandmother when I was a child. She was very health-conscious, so we walked every morning and evening, and I remember enjoying our conversations during those walks.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence and give two concise, specific reasons. Reduce hesitation and use precise vocabulary (e.g., "fresh air," "relaxing"). Use linking words like "also" or "moreover" correctly.

Example: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and offer fresh air. Also, walking there helps relax the mind and recharge the body, especially after a busy day.

Suggestion: Be direct and use conditional correctly. Limit to one main reason with a specific detail. Avoid fillers like "uh" and phrases like "I listen that"—use "I've heard" or "I know."

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the nearby Rose Garden. I have heard it has many rose varieties and other flowers, so walking there would be a beautiful and refreshing experience.

Suggestion: Use past tense and a clear sentence structure: subject + verb + object. Avoid repetition and correct small errors. Give one specific detail about the experience (who, when, what you enjoyed).

Example: Last week my family and I went to the Rose Garden near our home. We enjoyed seeing many different flowers and the fresh air, which made the visit very relaxing.

× Yes, I do work a lot and because I'm a teacher so I have to be physically active always and to do this I often walk around the class to understand the student, what they are writing and what they are learning.

✓ Yes, I work a lot, and because I'm a teacher I have to be physically active, so I often walk around the class to understand the students, what they are writing and what they are learning.

Third person singular issue and subject-verb agreement: 'do work a lot' is unnecessary auxiliary here; 'I work a lot' is correct for present simple. 'Understand the student' should be plural 'students' to match the plural meaning. Also sentence flow improved by removing redundant 'so' and placing verbs correctly. Suggestion: Use simple present for habitual actions (I work, I often walk) and ensure plural nouns match context.

× So I think I'm a person who often prefer to have a lot of work and generally early in the morning.

✓ So I think I'm a person who often prefers to have a lot of work and generally starts early in the morning.

Present tense and subject-verb agreement: after 'who' the verb must agree with its subject 'a person' (third singular), so 'prefers' not 'prefer'. Also phrase 'generally early in the morning' lacks a verb; 'starts early' clarifies the meaning. Suggestion: Ensure verbs agree with their subjects and include a verb for time expressions.

× Yes, definitely. When I was a child I often go around outside of the home with my grandmother because she is so much health conscious and she also kept me along with her for a morning or evening walk and I enjoyed to spend her time with her.

✓ Yes, definitely. When I was a child I often went outside with my grandmother because she was very health conscious and she also took me along with her for morning or evening walks and I enjoyed spending time with her.

Past tense issue: 'go' should be past 'went' to match 'When I was a child'. 'She is' should be 'she was' for past. 'kept me along' is incorrect collocation; use 'took me along'. 'I enjoyed to spend' is incorrect: use gerund 'enjoyed spending'. Suggestion: Keep verb tenses consistent when describing past events and use correct verb forms (went, was, took, enjoyed + -ing).

× Or yes, in my childhood time I often go outside to have a walk.

✓ Or yes, in my childhood I often went outside to have a walk.

Present tense issue: 'go' should be past 'went' because the time frame is childhood. Also 'in my childhood time' is awkward; use 'in my childhood' or 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Match verb tense to the time expression.

× I think there are so many reasons behind the people like to walk in the parks.

✓ I think there are many reasons why people like to walk in parks.

Sentence structure: 'reasons behind the people like' is incorrect order. Use 'reasons why people like' to link cause and subject. Also 'in the parks' is better as 'in parks' when speaking generally. Suggestion: Use 'reasons why' + clause and simplify articles for general statements.

× The first one in the parks are so much, uh, peaceful and quiet places.

✓ First, parks are very peaceful and quiet places.

Article and agreement errors: 'The first one in the parks are so much' is ungrammatical. Use 'First' to enumerate, and 'parks are very peaceful and quiet places' for correct subject-verb agreement and natural adverb/adjective usage. 'so much' is improper here; use 'very'. Suggestion: Use clear enumerators (First, Second) and proper adverbs (very) with adjectives.

× And moreover, I think there is the air, which is a plenty of the pure air is there and people enjoy to spend that time there and it gives a relaxation to their mind and also recharges their body.

✓ Moreover, I think the air is very fresh and pure, and people enjoy spending time there because it relaxes their minds and recharges their bodies.

Incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing: 'there is the air, which is a plenty of the pure air is there' is ungrammatical. Use 'the air is fresh and pure'. 'Enjoy to spend' should be 'enjoy spending'. 'A relaxation to their mind' is unnatural; use 'relaxes their minds'. Pluralize 'body' to 'bodies' to match 'people'. Suggestion: Use clear adjective phrases for descriptions and gerunds after 'enjoy'. Ensure plural agreement.

× I would like to have a walk in the Rose garden, which is located nearby my locality.

✓ I would like to take a walk in the rose garden, which is located near my locality.

Future/modal phrasing: 'have a walk' is less natural than 'take a walk'. 'Nearby my locality' is awkward; use 'near my locality' or 'near my neighborhood'. Capitalization of 'Rose garden' should be lower-case unless it's a proper name. Suggestion: Use natural collocations ('take a walk') and correct prepositional phrases for location.

× And uh, I listen that there is a so many different kind of the roses and different variety of the flowers are available.

✓ And I have heard that there are so many different kinds of roses and various varieties of flowers available.

Article and number errors: 'I listen' is incorrect; use 'I have heard' or 'I heard'. 'There is a so many different kind' should be 'there are so many different kinds' (plural agreement). Remove unnecessary 'the' before roses and flowers. Use 'various varieties' or just 'different varieties'. Suggestion: Match subject-verb number, use correct collocations (heard, kinds of), and avoid unnecessary articles.

× So I think in future, I would definitely take a long walk there because I think there would be a great experience of the beauty of the flowers along with the fresh air.

✓ So I think in the future I will definitely take a long walk there because I think it would be a great experience to enjoy the beauty of the flowers along with the fresh air.

Future tense usage: mix of 'would' and 'will' was inconsistent. Use 'will definitely' for intention and 'would be a great experience' for conditional/hypothetical; better: 'I will definitely take a long walk there because it would be a great experience to enjoy...'. Also 'experience of the beauty' is awkward; use 'experience to enjoy the beauty'. Suggestion: Keep future/modal consistency and use natural verb phrases for experiences.

× Last week me and my family decided to go to the park it it is a Rose Garden there and we went there.

✓ Last week my family and I decided to go to the park because there is a rose garden there, and we went.

Subject-verb and pronoun order: use 'my family and I' rather than 'me and my family'. Remove duplicate 'it it'. 'Rose Garden' should be 'rose garden' unless a proper name. Also combine clauses for clarity. Suggestion: Use proper subject order (X and I) and correct punctuation to join ideas.

× It was a great experience because there was a so many variety of the flowers are available and the air was so fresh and we really enjoyed that time.

✓ It was a great experience because there were so many varieties of flowers available, the air was very fresh, and we really enjoyed our time.

Verb form and agreement: 'there was a so many variety' should be plural 'there were so many varieties'. Use 'varieties of flowers' without 'the'. 'So fresh' improved to 'very fresh'. 'Enjoyed that time' is awkward; 'enjoyed our time' is natural. Suggestion: Ensure correct use of 'there is/there are' with countable nouns and pluralize appropriately.