Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and clear: answer the question about walking (not working), use correct tense and articles, simplify phrasing, and add one brief reason. Keep it within 2–4 sentences and use a linking word if adding detail.

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for a 30–40 minute walk every morning because it helps me stay fit and clears my mind.

Suggestion: Use correct past tense and word order. Start with a clear topic sentence about frequency, then give specific details with linking words. Avoid contradictory or unclear time references.

Example: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. I usually went out in the mornings to walk and sometimes played with friends, although my mother only allowed us to go out on Fridays.

Suggestion: Give a concise main idea then specific reasons. Use correct grammar (it's → it is or its), and include linking words such as because or because of to connect reason and result. Be more specific about benefits of parks.

Example: People like to walk in parks because they are quieter and less crowded than busy streets. Also, parks have fresh air and pleasant scenery, which makes walking more relaxing.

Suggestion: Answer the hypothetical clearly using conditional form (I would…). State one clear place and give two specific reasons linked with connectors. Avoid vague phrases and repetition.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a quiet country road near my home because it is not crowded and many people jog there, so the atmosphere feels healthy and safe.

Suggestion: Use past tense for 'lately' and be specific about a recent instance. Start with a clear topic sentence about where you went recently, then give 1–2 concise supporting details with linking words like because or so.

Example: Lately I walked in my neighborhood. It is a residential area with many buildings and good walkways, so I prefer it for short walks, and my second choice is the nearby park.

× Yes, I do work a lot.

✓ Yes, I work a lot.

The original uses auxiliary 'do' unnecessarily with the main verb 'work' in a present simple affirmative sentence. Use the simple present 'I work a lot' to state a habitual action. Suggestion: Omit 'do' in affirmative present simple sentences (use 'do' only for questions and negatives).

× I usually go for 30 to 40 minutes walk in every morning because it helps my fitness onto my mind.

✓ I usually go for a 30 to 40 minute walk every morning because it helps my physical fitness and clears my mind.

Multiple issues: '30 to 40 minutes walk' should be 'a 30 to 40 minute walk' (measurement used as adjective takes singular 'minute' and needs article). 'in every morning' is incorrect; use 'every morning'. 'onto my mind' is wrong preposition and phrase; use 'clears my mind' or 'is good for my mind'. Suggestion: Use 'a + number + measure + noun' for durations as adjectives and correct prepositions/phrases for fixed expressions.

× Yes, when I was child in every morning when I was wake up, the time I go to the outdoor and walking.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, every morning when I woke up, I would go outside and walk.

Tense and article errors: 'was child' needs the article 'a child'. 'when I was wake up' mixes passive and present; use past 'woke up'. 'I go to the outdoor and walking' should be past/habitual 'I would go outside and walk' or 'I went outside and walked'. Suggestion: Use 'when I was a child' and simple past or habitual past constructions ('woke up', 'went outside', 'walked' or 'would go').

× Sometimes I play with my friends at that time, but my mother didn't allow this so every Friday.

✓ Sometimes I played with my friends at that time, but my mother didn't allow it, so I only did so on Fridays.

Mixed tenses and unclear conjunctions: 'Sometimes I play' should be past 'played' to match 'my mother didn't allow'. 'didn't allow this so every Friday' is unclear; expressed as 'didn't allow it, so I only did so on Fridays' to show restriction and frequency. Suggestion: Keep tenses consistent and make causal connectors explicit ('so' followed by result).

× Usually people like to walk in the park because of it's not crowded area or sometimes roadside is so crowded so they prefer park.

✓ Usually people like to walk in parks because they are not crowded, or because roadsides are often very crowded, so they prefer parks.

Article and pronoun issues: 'in the park' is too specific; use 'in parks' for general statements. 'because of it's not crowded area' is ungrammatical; use 'because they are not crowded' referring to parks. 'they prefer park' needs plural 'parks'. Also 'it's' is wrong contraction; avoid. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general statements ('parks'), and ensure pronouns agree with their antecedents.

× Basically I prefer my home area but when I got a chance I go to the outside Rd. area.

✓ Basically I prefer my home area, but when I get the chance I go to the nearby road area.

Tense mismatch: 'when I got a chance' is past while the general preference should be present/future 'when I get the chance'. 'outside Rd. area' is awkward; 'nearby road area' or 'a road outside my area' is clearer. Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual actions and 'get the chance' as the correct phrase.

× The road is never crowded.

✓ That road is never crowded.

Context requires a determiner to specify which road is meant; 'that road' or 'the road' is acceptable, but 'that road' fits the contrast with other areas. Suggestion: Use demonstrative or definite article to indicate a specific road when contrasting with others.

× Sometimes they they are around many percentage jogging in this area and it's a totally free.

✓ Often many people jog in this area, and it's completely free.

'they they are around many percentage jogging' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'many people jog' to express frequency. 'it's a totally free' is incorrect article and adverb use; say 'it's completely free' or 'there is no charge'. Suggestion: Use 'many people jog' for population/activity descriptions and 'completely free' for adverb + adjective.

× Usually I go for a walk in my home area.

✓ Usually I go for a walk in my neighborhood.

'Home area' is awkward; use 'neighborhood' or 'local area'. Tense is acceptable (present habitual). Suggestion: Use natural collocations like 'neighborhood' or 'local area'.

× It's a colony, it's a boundary area.

✓ It's a residential colony; it's on the outskirts.

'a colony' is acceptable in some varieties of English, but 'it's a boundary area' is awkward; 'on the outskirts' or 'a boundary area' needs clearer phrasing. Using 'residential colony' clarifies meaning. Suggestion: Use standard collocations like 'on the outskirts' for boundary areas.

× It's have lots of building but every building had a walkway so I prefer this.

✓ It has lots of buildings, and each building has a walkway, so I prefer it.

Subject-verb agreement and pluralization: 'It's have' should be 'It has'. 'lots of building' needs plural 'buildings'. 'every building had' inconsistent tense; use present 'has' to match ongoing state. Suggestion: Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct plural forms. Keep tense consistent for habitual/current facts.

× After that I my second choice is park.

✓ After that, my second choice is the park.

Word order and article: 'I my second choice is park' is incorrect order; remove the extra 'I' and add the definite article 'the park' to indicate a specific option. Suggestion: Use correct subject-verb order and include articles for specific nouns.