Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 의미가 불명확합니다. 질문에 대한 직접적인 주제 문장을 먼저 말한 뒤, 이유나 상황을 덧붙이세요. 동사 시제와 단어 선택을 바로잡고 중복 표현(예: "drop drop")을 피하세요. 구체적으로 얼마나 자주 걷는지(예: 매일/주 몇 회)와 그 이유(아이들을 데려다주기 때문에 등)를 알려주세요.

Example: Yes, I walk quite often. I usually walk every day because I drop my children off at school on my way to work, so I have to walk a short distance each morning.

Suggestion: 질문 시제(어릴 때)를 정확히 반영하지 못했습니다. 과거 시제를 사용하고, 구체적인 활동과 빈도를 연결해 대답하세요. 문장은 3-4문장으로 간결하게 유지하고, 반복을 피하며 연결어를 사용하세요.

Example: Yes, I often went outside when I was a child. On weekends my family and I usually played baseball or soccer in the park, and we did many different outdoor activities together.

Suggestion: 발음과 단어 선택(‘work’ 대신 ‘walk’) 오류가 있고, 중복과 망설임이 많습니다. 이유를 두세 가지로 정리하고 연결어(for example, also 등)를 사용해 논리적으로 전달하세요. 구체적인 결과(예: 스트레스 감소, 심장 건강 개선 등)를 덧붙이면 더 좋습니다.

Example: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and enjoy nature. For example, walking or jogging in a park can reduce stress and also improve fitness, which benefits heart health.

Suggestion: 조건문 시제와 어순이 어색합니다. 가정법 표현을 올바르게 사용하고 장소 이유를 구체적으로 설명하세요. 중복 표현을 줄이고 연결어(because, so, when 등)를 자연스럽게 쓰세요.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk around Oxford city centre because it has many long streets and lively atmosphere, which I find very refreshing.

Suggestion: 내용이 혼란스럽고 의미 불명확(예: 'So I walk to Rome')합니다. 최근 시점에 대한 간단한 과거형 응답을 사용하고 정확한 장소와 이유를 명확히 하세요. 반복을 피하고 한두 문장으로 요점을 전달하세요.

Example: I walked in Oxford city centre recently because I often go there to pick up my children from school. We usually spend some time walking around the shops and parks nearby.

× 'Yes, I will collect.'

✓ 'Yes, I do.'

'This is a present tense question about habitual action (Do you walk a lot?). Use the simple present tense for routines. "I will collect" is future and incorrect here. Suggestion: use simple present (I do) or a full sentence: I walk a lot.'

× 'Nowadays I drop drop my children off.'

✓ 'Nowadays I drop my children off.'

'The sentence has a word repeated (drop drop) which is a repetition error, not a listed grammar category, but the main issue is tense and routine: use simple present for habitual actions. "Nowadays I drop my children off" is the correct form. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use simple present for routines.'

× 'I worked for a long time.'

✓ 'I have worked for a long time.'

'The question asks about current habits; "I worked" (simple past) implies a finished action. Use present perfect (have worked) to indicate an action continuing to the present or relevant now. Suggestion: use present perfect for experiences or actions lasting up to now.'

× 'Yes.'

✓ 'Yes, I do.'

'A short answer to a present simple question should use the auxiliary do: "Do you walk a lot?" -> "Yes, I do." Using only "Yes" is acceptable in speech but formal correction uses "Yes, I do." Suggestion: include auxiliary for clarity.'

× 'Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?','Yes, I often go outside with my children every week, weekend we often go out, go out.'

✓ 'Yes. When I was a child I often went outside to walk.'

'The examiner asked about past habits (when you were a child), so use simple past (went). The student used present tense (go) which is incorrect for past reference. Suggestion: match tense to the time expression: "when I was a child" requires past tense.'

× 'weekend we often go out, go out.'

✓ 'On weekends we often went out.'

'Time expression "weekend(s)" referring to past should be plural "weekends" and use past tense "went". Also include preposition on (on weekends). Suggestion: use "On weekends we often went out."'} ,{