Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Focus on answering the question directly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use a clear topic sentence (“No, I don’t walk a lot.”), then add one or two supporting reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating words and incorrect verb forms (work → walk).

Example: No, I don’t walk a lot. Although I try to be active, I usually use public transport for most trips, so I only walk short distances. Therefore, walking is not a main part of my daily routine.

Suggestion: Give a clear past-tense response using correct grammar and specific details. Start with a simple past sentence and follow with supporting details linked by words like “because” or “so”. Correct verb forms (go → went, chilled → child) and pronouns are needed.

Example: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child because my parents were very health-conscious. They usually took me to the park every weekend so I could play and breathe fresh air.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use specific reasons with linking words. Use natural collocations (e.g., “fresh air,” “tall trees,” “relaxing atmosphere”) and avoid redundancy (“huge, large”). Provide one or two varied reasons.

Example: People like to walk in parks because of the fresh air and greenery, which helps them relax. Also, parks are quieter than busy streets, so they offer a peaceful place to exercise or clear the mind.

Suggestion: Use a conditional sentence correctly and be specific about the location and reasons. Keep sentences concise and grammatical. Avoid unclear phrases (“folk season is clear”). Use linking words like “because” or “so” to connect ideas.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in my village because it is surrounded by greenery and quiet country roads. I enjoy the fresh air and the sound of birds, which makes walking very enjoyable.

Suggestion: Answer in past tense and be specific about a recent time. Use clear, grammatical sentences and link reasons briefly. Avoid vague phrases and incorrect prepositions (go for the work → went for a walk).

Example: Lately I went for a walk in the city park last Sunday. The park has many tall trees and a pleasant atmosphere, and the sunny weather made the walk very enjoyable.

× No, I do not work a lot because it is not necessary to work a lot. Little my work is also sufficient for our body.

✓ No, I do not walk a lot because it is not necessary to walk a lot. A little walking is also sufficient for our body.

The student used 'work' instead of 'walk' (wrong word choice) and produced an awkward noun phrase 'Little my work'. This is a sentence structure and word choice issue. Replace 'work' with 'walk' to match the question, and use 'A little walking' (gerund noun) for correct English. Use consistent vocabulary and the gerund to talk about an activity in general.

× Yes, I often to go outside to the work with when I was chilled because my parents are very health conscious about my health.

✓ Yes, I often went outside to walk when I was a child because my parents were very health conscious about my health.

Errors include incorrect infinitive structure 'often to go', wrong noun 'work' instead of 'walk', and 'chilled' instead of 'child'. The sentence also mixes present and past. The question asks about childhood, so use past tense 'went'. Use the bare form 'went' (past of 'go') and 'walk' as the intended activity. Correct 'chilled' to 'child' and use past tense for parents' attitudes ('were').

× They usually prefer walk me outside and they also go with me.

✓ They usually preferred to take me outside and they also went with me.

The verb phrase 'prefer walk me' is ungrammatical. After 'prefer' use the infinitive 'to take' or 'preferred to take'. Also adjust tense to past to match context: 'preferred' and 'went'. Use 'take me outside' rather than 'walk me outside'.

× Usually people like to walk in park because there are the huge, large trees and they get the fresh air coming from the trees.

✓ Usually people like to walk in parks because there are large trees and they get fresh air from the trees.

Use the plural 'parks' or include the article 'the park'. 'In park' is incorrect (preposition + noun). Also 'the huge, large trees' is redundant; choose one adjective and place it before the noun. 'Get fresh air' is the correct collocation; 'coming from the trees' is unnecessary.

× That's what people like to go.

✓ That's why people like to go.

The student used 'what' incorrectly. The correct connector here is 'why' to indicate reason: 'That's why people like to go.' This fixes sentence structure and meaning.

× If I got a chance for a long walk I take it's from my village because there is so much greenery and there lot of plants and the huge amount of folk season is clear.

✓ If I got a chance for a long walk, I would take it in my village because there is so much greenery, many plants, and the air is very clear.

This sentence mixes conditional forms incorrectly. For a hypothetical situation, use 'If I got... I would...' The student wrote 'take it's from my village' which is ungrammatical; use 'take it in my village'. 'There lot of plants' needs quantifier 'many plants'. 'Huge amount of folk season is clear' is unclear; likely intended 'the air is very clear' — correct to convey meaning.

× I usually go for the work lately in the park because of huge trees.

✓ Lately I have usually been going for walks in the park because of the large trees.

The student used present simple 'I usually go' with 'lately' (recent period); present perfect continuous or present perfect is more appropriate: 'have been going'. Also 'for the work' is wrong; use 'for walks' and add article 'the large trees'.

× Because of that there is too much good atmosphere and the sunny weather come at late.

✓ Because of that, the atmosphere is very pleasant and the weather becomes sunny late in the day.

Awkward conjunction use and incorrect verbs. 'Too much good atmosphere' is unidiomatic; use 'the atmosphere is very pleasant'. 'The sunny weather come at late' has wrong verb form and word order; use 'becomes sunny late in the day' to express timing. Also add comma after 'Because of that' for clarity.