Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答直接但不够自然，有语法和表达问题，且有些冗长。请注意句子简洁性与语法准确性：1) 避免“I hate working”与题意不符，可直接说不常走路；2) 将长句分成1-2句并使用连接词；3) 修正搭配错误（如“as possible as I can”应为“as much as possible”）。练习时可先用主题句回答，再用一到两个具体原因或例子补充。

Example: No, I don't walk much. I prefer resting when I'm free because I'm not very energetic, so I avoid unnecessary physical activity. For example, I usually take the elevator instead of the stairs at university.

Suggestion: 回答内容合适但有语法和用词错误，表达不够简洁具体。注意动词形式（如“went outside to play”而非“to playing”）、定冠词和复数（“the those works”不正确），以及句子流畅度。可以提供一两个具体回忆来丰富内容并使用连接词。

Example: Yes, I did. I was very energetic and often played outside with friends. For example, we would ride bicycles or skateboard together, and those afternoons are still some of my happiest childhood memories.

Suggestion: 解释有思路但词汇搭配和句子结构问题，且“oxytocin”说法较生物学化，可能不必要。注意介词和冠词（如“walk in parks”而非“walking parks”），修正语法（“it's also can”→“it can also”），避免重复并使用更日常词汇。建议先给主题句，再用一两个简洁理由。

Example: People like walking in parks because it helps them relax and feel closer to nature. For instance, the greenery and fresh air can improve mood and reduce stress, making it easier to unwind after a busy day.

Suggestion: 回答明确但需改进语法和流畅度。注意冠词和复数（“beside a river or a lake”或“beside rivers or lakes”），动词一致（“can refresh”与“makes”需一致）。可加入简短具体细节以增强表达，例如描述景色或活动。

Example: If I had the chance, I'd take a long walk beside a river or lake because the quiet surroundings and fresh air refresh my mood. Walking along the water and watching birds would help me relax.

Suggestion: 答案含义不清且语法错误多，词汇误用严重（如“go for war”应为“go for a walk”），时态混乱。建议先直接回答近期去过的地方，再说明原因，使用简洁句子并纠正搭配（“walk on campus”或“walk around campus”），并清晰描述活动。

Example: Lately I haven't gone on long walks because I'm very busy. I usually walk around campus between classes while I'm working on my final year project and preparing the exhibition with my classmates.

× I'm just trying to avoid working as possible as I can in my daily life and I'm the kind of person if I can sit, I won't stand and if I can lie down, I won't sit.

✓ I'm just trying to avoid working as much as I can in my daily life, and I'm the kind of person that if I can sit, I won't stand, and if I can lie down, I won't sit.

原句中"as possible as I can"用法不正确，正确的说法是"as much as I can"表示尽可能多地避免工作；此外缺少连词使句子结构不够清晰，需加"that"或逗号连接从句。建议记住常用固定搭配："as much as I can/possible"，并注意用连词连接定语从句或使用逗号分隔并列句。

× I often went outside to playing or working with my friends, such as riding bicycles or playing skateboards, and the those works makes me feel very happy and memorable.

✓ I often went outside to play or work with my friends, such as riding bicycles or skateboarding, and those activities made me feel very happy and created good memories.

原句时态和动词形式混用："to playing/working"应为不定式或动词原形，这里用过去常做的事应写"to play or work"。"playing skateboards"不地道，应为"skateboarding"。"the those works makes"中有多余定冠词且主谓不一致，过去时应为"made"。建议注意不定式与动名词的正确使用、名词搭配以及时态一致。

× I think walking parks can help people feel more connected with the nature and it's also can trigger the release of oxytocin and boost people's mood.

✓ I think walking in parks can help people feel more connected with nature, and it can also trigger the release of oxytocin and boost people's mood.

原句缺少介词"in"（应为"walking in parks"）且"the nature"中的定冠词不需要，通常说"connected with nature"或"connected to nature"。另外"it's also can"语序不正确，应该是"it can also"。建议练习固定搭配（"walk in parks", "connected with nature"）并注意助动词与副词的位置。

× And when you overwhelmed, working in parks can let you feel relaxed.

✓ And when you are overwhelmed, working in parks can make you feel relaxed.

原句缺少系动词，应为"when you are overwhelmed"。"let you feel relaxed"用法虽可，但更自然的是"make you feel relaxed"。建议注意主语和系动词的使用以及常见动词搭配（make sb feel / let sb do）。

× If I had a chance, I would like to take long walk beside river or lake because the quiet surroundings and the fresh air always can refresh my mood and makes me feel more relaxed.

✓ If I had a chance, I would like to take a long walk beside a river or a lake because the quiet surroundings and the fresh air can always refresh my mood and make me feel more relaxed.

句中缺少冠词："take long walk"应为"take a long walk"；"beside river or lake"应加冠词成为"beside a river or a lake"。主语为复合主语"the quiet surroundings and the fresh air"，谓语动词应为复数形式"make"而不是"makes"。"always can"语序不自然，应为"can always"或"always can"但更常见为前者。建议注意冠词使用和主谓一致以及情态动词与副词的位置。

× I didn't mean to go for war currently because I'm quite busy right now, so I'm just walking in campus because I need to do a lot of jobs like UMM, cooperate with my classmate to finish my final year project and build the exhibition.

✓ I didn't mean to go for a walk recently because I'm quite busy right now, so I'm just walking on campus because I need to do a lot of work like meeting, cooperating with my classmates to finish my final year project, and building the exhibition.

原句中"go for war"是拼写错误，应为"go for a walk"；"currently"与"didn't mean"时态冲突，且语义上用"recently"或直接用现在时更合适；"walking in campus"介词不对，应为"walking on campus"；"a lot of jobs"不自然，应该用"a lot of work"或具体名词；"cooperate with my classmate"主谓和数量不一致，改为复数"classmates"，并且动词形式要与上下文一致（cooperating / to cooperate）。另外将UMM（若为缩写）需用更清楚的词如"meetings"。建议检查单词拼写、介词搭配、时态一致和可数/不可数名词用法。

× Of course not. I'd like to say I hate working.

✓ Of course not. I'd like to say that I hate working.

句中缺少连词"that"（虽非必须，但加上更正式和清楚），使从句衔接更自然。建议在正式口语或书面语中使用"that"引导宾语从句以提高表达清晰度。