Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify vocabulary and grammar: replace 'stay wet' (incorrect) with intended meaning (e.g. 'stay fit' or 'wake up'), correct article use and verb forms, and make sentences coherent and concise. Use a clear topic sentence plus one supporting detail with a linking phrase. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Example: Yes, I walk regularly. I usually go for a walk at 5:00 AM because it helps me stay fit, and it is an effective way to lose weight.

Suggestion: Use past tense consistently and correct general statements. Start with a direct past-time topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words. Avoid vague phrases like 'the child'.

Example: Not really. When I was a child I rarely went for walks because I preferred playing games, and my parents did not allow me to walk on the road for safety reasons.

Suggestion: Use more natural vocabulary and connect ideas with clear linking words. Correct collocations: 'walk in the park' and 'walk on the road'. Be specific about reasons (e.g. fresh air, safety) and avoid repetition.

Example: People prefer walking in parks because they offer fresh air and are safer than busy roads. Also, parks are quieter and more pleasant, so walkers feel more relaxed and less likely to be distracted or harmed.

Suggestion: Use conditional tense correctly and keep language concise. Start with a clear conditional topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific benefits using linking words. Avoid awkward phrases like 'common peaceful effect' or 'stay good'.

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in a park early in the morning because it is peaceful and quiet as the sun rises. This calm atmosphere helps me relax and is good for my physical and mental health.

Suggestion: Use correct past tense ('I went') and avoid fillers like 'umm'. Give a concise response with one or two specific details (time, reason, location) and link them logically. Correct phrases: 'I don't have a park nearby' and 'I find a quiet road'.

Example: I went for a walk yesterday at 5:00 AM because I usually walk each morning to stay fit. Since there is no park near my house, I walk along a quiet road where I can exercise peacefully.

× Yes I do. I usually go for the walk at 5:00 AM because it helps me to stay wet.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually go for a walk at 5:00 AM because it helps me stay healthy.

The original uses 'go for the walk' (article error/unnatural; should be 'go for a walk') and 'stay wet' is semantically incorrect. 'Stay wet' is wrong in context; likely intended 'stay healthy' or 'stay fit'. Use of present simple 'usually go' is correct; adjust wording for meaning and article usage.

× On the top of that it also an effective way to reduce weight.

✓ On top of that, it is also an effective way to reduce weight.

Missing verb 'is' causes a sentence structure error and incorrect phrase 'On the top of that' should be 'On top of that'. Add comma and the verb 'is' to form a complete sentence. 'Reduce weight' is acceptable but 'lose weight' is more natural.

× When I was a kid I usually don't go for a walk because I love to play a game instead of walking and the other main reason is the child is not allowed to walk in the road.

✓ When I was a kid I usually didn't go for a walk because I loved to play games instead of walking, and another main reason was that children were not allowed to walk on the road.

The sentence describes past habits, so verbs should be in the past tense: 'don't go' -> 'didn't go', 'love' -> 'loved'. Use plural 'games' after 'play' and change 'the child is not allowed' to past passive 'children were not allowed' and 'in the road' should be 'on the road' (preposition error).

× People usually prefer walking on the park other than Rd. because they find a distraction while walking on the road and they can also easily get an accident.

✓ People usually prefer walking in the park rather than on the road because they can be distracted while walking on the road and they can easily have an accident.

Use 'in the park' (not 'on the park') and 'rather than' is the correct comparative phrase. 'Get an accident' is incorrect; use 'have an accident'. 'Find a distraction' is awkward; 'be distracted' is more natural.

× So people used to cut back on the road while they have a beautiful park too.

✓ So people used to walk on the road even though there was a beautiful park nearby.

'Cut back on the road' is unclear; likely meant 'walk on the road'. Maintain past habit with 'used to'. Change 'have' to past 'was' to match past context. Use clearer phrasing 'even though there was a beautiful park nearby'.

× I usually like to walk in the park in the early morning because I don't find any distraction when the sun is rising, there will be no noise and a pleasant vibe, which gave me a common peaceful effect.

✓ I usually like to walk in the park in the early morning because I don't find any distractions when the sun is rising; there is no noise and the pleasant atmosphere gives me a peaceful feeling.

Maintain present tense for habitual action. 'Distraction' should be plural 'distractions'. Combine clauses properly with a semicolon or new sentence. 'Will be' is future; use 'is' to describe general conditions. 'Vibe' and 'gave me a common peaceful effect' are awkward; use 'pleasant atmosphere gives me a peaceful feeling'.

× In addition, it also helped me to stay good without any health problems.

✓ In addition, it also helps me stay healthy and avoid health problems.

Context is habitual present, so use present tense 'helps' not past 'helped'. 'Stay good' is unidiomatic; use 'stay healthy'. 'Without any health problems' is better expressed as 'avoid health problems'.

× I gone for a walk yesterday 5:00 AM in the morning because umm, every morning I used to walk to stay fit.

✓ I went for a walk yesterday at 5:00 AM because I usually walk every morning to stay fit.

'I gone' is incorrect; the past tense of 'go' is 'went'. Also use 'at 5:00 AM' and avoid redundancy 'yesterday 5:00 AM in the morning'. 'Used to walk' implies a past habit; since speaker means habitual present, use 'usually walk' or if past, 'used to walk' but keep tense consistent.

× In addition, I don't get any park to walk through so I find a road in the morning to walk peacefully.

✓ In addition, I don't have any park to walk in, so I walk on the road in the morning to walk peacefully.

'Don't get any park' is unnatural; use 'don't have any park'. 'Walk through' can be used but 'walk in' is better for parks. Use 'walk on the road' for roads. Improve word order for clarity.