Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., Yes/No), avoid repetition and unclear phrases, and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Pronunciation and grammar need simplification and correction (e.g., "regarding station" is unclear).

Example: No, I don't walk a lot. I usually walk to and from the train station in the morning and evening, which takes about 20 minutes each day, so I get some exercise that way.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct tense and word choice. If you did not walk often, say so and give a specific alternative activity with linking words (e.g., "Instead"). Use simple, accurate vocabulary (e.g., "ride a bicycle", "wide roads").

Example: Not really. Instead, I usually rode a bicycle because my neighbourhood had wide, quiet roads, so cycling with my friends felt safer and more fun than walking.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons with linking words (e.g., "because" and "also"). Use correct vocabulary ("safe", "pleasant", "traffic") and avoid vague or invented words like "dental."

Example: People like walking in parks because they are safer and quieter than busy streets, and they offer pleasant scenery and fresh air, which helps people relax and exercise.

Suggestion: State your choice clearly and give two specific reasons using linking words (e.g., "because" and "and"). Use correct phrases ("had the chance" not "had a Shard") and precise vocabulary ("blend of urban and natural scenery").

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in Japan because many cities blend modern streets with nearby natural areas, and I could explore local neighbourhoods and visit parks and temples along the way.

Suggestion: Start with a clear past-tense sentence, then add specific details with linking words (e.g., "because" or "so"). Correct vocabulary ("convenient", "wide park") and avoid repetition. Mention frequency or duration if possible.

Example: I walked in the park near my house recently because it's very convenient. The park is wide with dedicated paths for walking and cycling, so I often go there for about 30 minutes when I have free time.

× I think I don't walk a lot, but I walk in the proper, proper proportion because I have to work in the regarding station doing committing to work.

✓ I don't walk a lot, but I walk in proper proportion because I have to work at the railway station and commute to work.

Errors: incorrect present tense phrasing, wrong prepositions, and awkward word choices. Reason: 'I think' is unnecessary and weakens the present-tense statement; 'in the regarding station' and 'doing committing to work' are incorrect prepositional and verb forms. Suggestion: Use simple present tense for habitual actions, use 'at the railway station' and 'commute to work' for correct collocations.

× I think, uh, in the morning and in the a evening, I think is the proper permission for for.

✓ In the morning and in the evening is the proper time for that.

Errors: incorrect articles and tense usage, and unclear vocabulary. Reason: 'the a evening' mixes articles; 'proper permission' is not collocated with 'time'. Suggestion: Use 'in the morning and in the evening' and 'the proper time' to express routine periods.

× When I what was a shy, I prefer to ride through a bicycle when I go outside because, uh, in my area there are, there are broaden laws that I can rode the bike with my fans.

✓ When I was a child, I preferred to ride a bicycle when I went outside because in my area there were broad paths where I could ride the bike with my friends.

Errors: incorrect tense (mixing past and present), wrong word choice, and verb forms. Reason: Talking about childhood requires past tense (was, preferred, went, were, could). 'Broaden laws' is wrong; likely 'broad paths'. 'Rode' is past tense but used incorrectly with modal; use 'could ride'. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in past tense for past habits and choose correct nouns: 'child', 'preferred', 'bicycle', 'paths', 'friends'.

× I think it's quite exciting then.

✓ I thought it was quite exciting.

Errors: tense mismatch when reflecting on past experience. Reason: 'then' indicates past; use past tense 'thought' and 'was' to match context. Suggestion: For reflections about childhood, use past tense consistently.

× I think the reason that people like to work in parks because parks is prepared the road that our people can walk if safer than walking in the state or walking, uh, in the other area, which is, can call dental to them.

✓ I think the reason people like to walk in parks is that parks have prepared paths where people can walk safely; this is safer than walking in the street or other areas that may be dangerous for them.

Errors: present-tense subject-verb agreement and incorrect word choice. Reason: 'like to work' should be 'like to walk'; 'parks is' should be 'parks have' or 'a park is'; 'prepared the road' should be 'prepared paths'; 'if safer' is incorrect conjunction/structure. Suggestion: Use 'parks have prepared paths' and 'is safer than walking in the street' and correct vocabulary such as 'dangerous' instead of 'dental'.

× So the park is a really suitable for place to.

✓ So the park is a really suitable place to walk.

Errors: sentence fragment and incorrect word order. Reason: 'suitable for place to' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use correct collocation 'suitable place to' followed by verb 'walk'.

× If I had a Shard, I would like to take a long walk in Japan because Japan is will not about about the city and is combined with nature.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in Japan because Japan is not only about cities but is also combined with nature.

Errors: wrong noun 'Shard', incorrect modal/future phrasing, extra words. Reason: 'Shard' likely meant 'chance'; 'is will not about about the city' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: Use conditional 'If I had the chance' and correct contrast 'not only... but also' to say cities and nature.

× I think I would like to walk around the city to explore the city and uh washing the natural attractions in.

✓ I would like to walk around the city to explore it and see the natural attractions.

Errors: incorrect verb forms and redundancy. Reason: 'washing the natural attractions in' is wrong; 'see' is appropriate. Also avoid repeating 'city'. Suggestion: Use infinitive 'to explore' and verb 'see' for attractions; remove redundancy.

× I walked in the park near my house lately.

✓ I walked in the park near my house recently.

Errors: adverb choice with past tense. Reason: 'lately' usually pairs with present perfect; for a simple past use 'recently'. Suggestion: Use 'recently' with past simple or change verb to present perfect: 'I have walked in the park lately.'

× It's really con is really convenient to to go there.

✓ It's really convenient to go there.

Errors: repetition and fragmented words. Reason: duplicated words 'con is really' and double 'to'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate fragments and keep 'It's really convenient to go there.'

× And it's, it's a wider bar that I can walk and I can ride a bicycle and I I usually go there when I have free time.

✓ It's a wide park where I can walk and ride a bicycle, and I usually go there when I have free time.

Errors: wrong adjective 'wider bar', wrong relative clause. Reason: 'wider bar' likely meant 'wide park'; use 'where' to introduce place. Also remove duplicate 'I'. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'park' and adjective 'wide', and structure sentence with 'where' and commas for clarity.