Walking— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более ясно и структурированно: начните с простого утверждения (тема), затем добавьте 1-2 конкретных поддерживающих детали. Избегайте повторов и лишних фраз («actually», «I really» много раз). Контролируйте длину — не больше 3–4 предложений. Также улучшите грамматику: используйте корректные формы (I am the kind of person, I like to walk) и убирайте фрагменты вроде «I have already chosen this one».

Example: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually go for walks in my free time because I find them relaxing and good exercise. Sometimes I walk alone to think, and other times I stroll with friends for a chat.

Suggestion: Сократите вводные слова и фразы, исправьте ошибки времени и аренды слов: используйте простое прошедшее (I often walked). Дайте конкретный пример (куда вы ходили и с кем). Удалите бессмысленные фразы («Connor stays», «and just so»).

Example: Yes, I did. When I was about five or six, I often walked around my neighbourhood with my family or friends. I liked exploring parks and small streets near my home because it felt adventurous.

Suggestion: Будьте более конкретны и логичны: начните с простой причины, затем приведите 1–2 подробные причины с связками (for example, because/so). Избегайте неуместных фраз и ошибок согласования (parks are one of the best places).

Example: People like walking in parks because they offer a peaceful and green environment. For example, parks usually have wide paths and trees that make the air fresher, so walking there feels relaxing and safe.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ответ кратко и чётко: назовите место (topic sentence), объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте непонятных слов («big files», «4 times») и используйте правильную лексику (fields, countryside, coastline).

Example: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk in the countryside. The open fields and quiet paths would be perfect for walking for hours, and I would enjoy the fresh air and wide views.

Suggestion: Отвечайте на вопрос прямо: используйте прошедшее время (I went). Дайте конкретное место и краткую причину, избегайте заполнителей («uh», «umm») и повторов. Приведите один конкретный пример маршрута или времени.

Example: Lately I went for a walk in my hometown along the main street. I usually walk there in the evening because the pavement is pleasant and there are cafés where I can sit if I want.

× OK, actually I'm kind of person who really loves walking and yes of course I like I walk a lot 'cause when I find the free time or anytime when I want to do something, one of the best thing is strolling or walking for me on the streets alone or with my some friends. And that I have already chosen this one is my favorite activity ever.

✓ I'm the kind of person who really loves walking, and yes, of course I walk a lot, because whenever I have free time or want to do something, one of the best things for me is strolling or walking on the streets alone or with some friends. I have already chosen this as my favorite activity.

The sentence uses incorrect and redundant pronouns and articles ('kind of person' needs 'the', 'my some friends' should be 'some friends'). Verb forms and articles are inconsistent ('one of the best thing' should be plural 'things'). Suggestions: add 'the' before 'kind', remove 'my' before 'some friends', make nouns/verbs agree in number, and simplify redundant phrases.

× Oh, actually, when Connor stays, when I was about 5 or 6 years old and I really walk a lot.

✓ Oh, actually, when I was about 5 or 6 years old I used to walk a lot.

The response mixes present tense 'walk' with a past time reference. Use past habitual 'used to' to indicate repeated past action. Also 'when Connor stays' is unclear and likely unnecessary; remove unclear phrase.

× I really walked a lot on the streets or some places, like everywhere.

✓ I walked a lot on the streets and in many places; I walked almost everywhere.

The sentence uses past tense 'walked' correctly but the structure is awkward. Improve clarity by using 'and in many places' and 'almost everywhere' to sound natural.

× Because in my childhood I was a kind of person who is really keen on walking and 'cause it was my favorite activity, as I said, and just so.

✓ Because in my childhood I was the kind of person who was really keen on walking, and it was my favorite activity, as I said.

Mismatch of tense and incorrect article: use 'the kind of person' and keep past tense consistency ('was' rather than 'is'). Remove filler 'and just so'.

× Oh, actually, as it currently stands, so many people are really like to walk in the parks because parks are one of the best place for walking.

✓ Actually, many people really like to walk in parks because parks are great places for walking.

Incorrect verb pattern 'are really like to' should be 'really like to' or 'really like'. Also 'one of the best place' needs plural 'places'. Remove unnecessary filler 'as it currently stands, so'.

× Maybe 'cause they will be a big place or they will be a lot of streets too.

✓ Maybe because they are big and have many paths or walkways.

Using 'will be' is incorrect for general statements; use present 'are'. 'Streets' is better replaced by 'paths' or 'walkways' when referring to parks. Avoid future tense for general truths.

× Streets to walk.

✓ There are many paths or areas to walk.

Fragment 'Streets to walk' is incomplete. Make it a full clause and use appropriate nouns 'paths' or 'areas'.

× And there's so many people's gonna choose.

✓ Many people choose them.

Incorrect contraction and structure: 'there's' + plural noun is wrong; use 'there are' or rephrase to 'many people choose them'. Avoid informal 'gonna' in formal speech.

× This one is 2 Vulcan.

✓ (Unclear sentence) Possibly: 'This is the second reason.'

Sentence is unclear and likely unintelligible. Provide a clear intended meaning; if speaker meant 'second reason', use that phrasing.

× Oh I'm generally speaking if I had a chance, I really like to take a big files to long walk cause big files are one of the best place to walk a lot 'cause they will be a lot of plays and I really like it and I just I'm crazy about walking along 4 times and This is why the big files are one of the best choice for my perspective.

✓ Generally speaking, if I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in a large field because fields are great places to walk; they have plenty of space and I really like them. I'm crazy about walking there, so fields are one of the best choices from my perspective.

Mixes conditional and present tense incorrectly ('if I had a chance' requires conditional 'would like'). 'Big files' should be 'large fields'; 'one of the best place' needs plural 'places'; 'they will be a lot of plays' is unclear and should be 'they have plenty of space'. Keep tense consistent and correct nouns.

× Oh, OK. It's really interesting question to answer for me, uh, when it comes to talk about that, if I'm going to tell you about the Volk, uh, where I walk, umm, lately, where is my hometown that namely the streets, 'cause I really like, umm, I really like take a walk on, on the streets 'cause they will be along a long place to walk.

✓ Oh, OK. That's an interesting question. If I tell you about where I walk lately in my hometown, I usually walk on the streets because they provide long places to walk.

Awkward present/future phrasing 'if I'm going to tell you' should be simplified. 'Volk' unclear—probably 'the walk' or 'the area'; remove unclear words. 'I really like take a walk' should be 'I really like to take a walk' or 'I enjoy walking'. 'They will be along a long place' incorrect tense and structure; use 'they provide long routes/paths'.