Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: คำตอบมีโครงสร้างดีและให้เหตุผลหลายข้อ แต่ควรแก้คำศัพท์และไวยากรณ์ให้เป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น: ใช้ “in my free time” แทน “in my free child,” ใช้ “English journals” หรือ “journals in English” แทน “English journal” และใช้ “relaxes me” แทน “relax me” นอกจากนี้ ควรลดการใช้ “helps me” ซ้ำ โดยเปลี่ยนโครงสร้างประโยคบางส่วนเพื่อให้คำตอบลื่นไหลขึ้น

Example: Yes, I do. I enjoy reading in my free time, especially journals written in English, because they improve my language and analytical skills. Reading also helps me concentrate and relax after a busy day.

Suggestion: ควรตอบเหตุผลให้ตรงกับคำถามมากขึ้น โดยเน้นความสะดวกและการเข้าถึงข้อมูล แทนการกล่าวว่าสื่อสังคมออนไลน์มีความสำคัญมากขึ้น ซึ่งยังไม่เชื่อมโยงโดยตรงกับการอ่านบนหน้าจอ ควรแก้ “in screen” เป็น “on a screen,” “in mobile phone and iPad” เป็น “on my phone or iPad” และ “every time we want” เป็น “whenever we want.” ควรแบ่งคำตอบที่ยาวและมีหลายแนวคิดออกเป็น 3–4 ประโยคเพื่อให้ฟังเป็นธรรมชาติ

Example: Personally, I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. I can access books, articles, and news on my phone or iPad whenever I want. In addition, I can adjust the font size and search for information quickly.

Suggestion: ควรเริ่มคำตอบให้ตรงและเป็นธรรมชาติมากขึ้น เช่น “It depends on what I’m reading.” ต้องแก้ “it's depend” เป็น “it depends,” “academic journal” เป็น “an academic journal” หรือ “academic journals” และ “tools” เป็น “materials” เพราะคำถามกล่าวถึงประเภทของสิ่งที่อ่าน ไม่ใช่อุปกรณ์ คำว่า “literally” ไม่จำเป็นในบริบทนี้ และควรอธิบายว่าเนื้อหาทางวิชาการต้องอ่านอย่างละเอียดเพราะมีข้อมูลสำคัญ ส่วนเรื่องบันเทิงสามารถอ่านแบบผ่อนคลายได้

Example: It depends on what I’m reading. I read academic journals and serious news carefully because I need to understand the details and evaluate the information. However, when I read fiction or comics for entertainment, I usually read more casually.

Suggestion: คำตอบนี้ตอบคำถามโดยตรง มีลำดับความคิดชัดเจน และใช้คำเชื่อม “and then” ได้เหมาะสม ควรปรับ tense และเพิ่มประธานให้เป็นธรรมชาติ เช่น “At first, I prefer to scan” และอาจใช้ “the main idea” แทน “an overview of the content” เพื่อให้กระชับขึ้น นอกจากนี้ ควรเพิ่มเหตุผลสั้น ๆ ว่าวิธีนี้ช่วยประหยัดเวลาและทำให้เข้าใจรายละเอียดได้ดีขึ้น

Example: I usually prefer scanning first because it gives me a quick overview of the main idea. Then, I read the passage in detail to focus on specific points and understand the meaning more fully. This approach helps me save time while still understanding important details.

× I enjoy reading in my free child, especially on English journal because it helps me improve my language and analytical skills and also helps me concentrate on what I need to do.

✓ I enjoy reading in my free time, especially in English journals, because it helps me improve my language and analytical skills and also helps me concentrate on what I need to do.

Free child is not appropriate in this context. The fixed expression for time when you are not busy is free time. Use free time to describe when you enjoy an activity.

× I enjoy reading in my free child, especially on English journal because it helps me improve my language and analytical skills and also helps me concentrate on what I need to do.

✓ I enjoy reading in my free time, especially in English journals, because it helps me improve my language and analytical skills and also helps me concentrate on what I need to do.

Use in, not on, when referring to reading material such as a journal. The phrase in English journals is more grammatically appropriate here.

× Reading also relax me and helps me feel calmer after a busy day.

✓ Reading also relaxes me and helps me feel calmer after a busy day.

Reading is a singular subject, so the present-tense verb must take the third-person singular form relaxes. The verb helps is already correctly formed.

× Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms become more important and it's easy to find new information in screen, especially in mobile phone and iPad, we can read it every time we want so that is what I think is really easy.

✓ Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms have become more important, and it is easy to find new information on a screen. We can read it on a mobile phone or an iPad whenever we want, so I think this is really convenient.

The change began in the past and continues to the present, so the present perfect form have become is more appropriate than become. Use the present perfect for changes that are still relevant now.

× Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms become more important and it's easy to find new information in screen, especially in mobile phone and iPad, we can read it every time we want so that is what I think is really easy.

✓ Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms have become more important, and it is easy to find new information on a screen. We can read it on a mobile phone or an iPad whenever we want, so I think this is really convenient.

Use on with screens and electronic devices: on a screen, on a mobile phone, and on an iPad. Do not use in for these devices in this context.

× Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms become more important and it's easy to find new information in screen, especially in mobile phone and iPad, we can read it every time we want so that is what I think is really easy.

✓ Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms have become more important, and it is easy to find new information on a screen. We can read it on a mobile phone or an iPad whenever we want, so I think this is really convenient.

Singular countable nouns need articles. Use a mobile phone and an iPad. Use an before iPad because the word begins with a vowel sound.

× Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms become more important and it's easy to find new information in screen, especially in mobile phone and iPad, we can read it every time we want so that is what I think is really easy.

✓ Personally, I prefer to read on a screen because nowadays social media platforms have become more important, and it is easy to find new information on a screen. We can read it on a mobile phone or an iPad whenever we want, so I think this is really convenient.

The original sentence contains several independent clauses joined only by commas. This creates a comma splice and makes the sentence difficult to follow. Separate the ideas into two sentences and connect related ideas with appropriate conjunctions.

× When I need to read carefully and not, it's depend on the type of tools and the things that I use to read.

✓ Whether I need to read carefully depends on the type of material I am reading.

The structure When I need to read carefully and not is incomplete and unnatural. Use whether ... or not to express two alternatives, or use the simpler structure Whether I need to read carefully. The revised sentence also gives the idea a clear subject and verb.

× When I need to read carefully and not, it's depend on the type of tools and the things that I use to read.

✓ Whether I need to read carefully depends on the type of material I am reading.

The subject whether I need to read carefully is treated as singular, so depend must be changed to depends. Also, do not use the extra verb is before depend.

× If I read academic journal and serious information, I literally read it carefully, but if I need something like fiction or cartoon, I can read it easily.

✓ If I read an academic journal or serious information, I read it carefully, but if I read something like fiction or a cartoon, I can read it easily.

Academic journal is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article an. Cartoon is also a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. No article is needed before the uncountable noun information or the general category fiction.