Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Говорите более прямо и грамматически корректно. Начинайте с короткого топик‑предложения (Yes/No + причина), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте лишних слов и повторов; контролируйте время предложений. Работайте над простыми временами и местоимениями, избавьтесь от слов-паразитов.

Example: Yes, I love reading. It is my favorite hobby because it helps me learn new ideas and relax. For example, I read novels to improve my vocabulary and non-fiction to learn about history. Recently, I use an e-reader when I travel because it is convenient.

Suggestion: Отвечайте чётко и используйте связки для обоснования выбора (because, so, however). Упрощайте фразы и говорите короткими предложениями, избегая повторов и путаных слов. Подчеркните одно‑два конкретных преимущества бумаги или экрана.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it helps me concentrate and I am not distracted by notifications. However, I sometimes read on a screen when I need to access many articles quickly. Overall, paper feels calmer and easier to focus on.

Suggestion: Сформулируйте ясный тезис: когда вы читаете детально, а когда — бегло. Приводите конкретные примеры (учёба, работа, развлечения). Употребляйте простые фразы и корректные глагольные формы; избегайте бессвязных слов и ошибок в местоимениях.

Example: I read carefully when the material is important, for example for work or study because I need to understand details. For pleasure, such as novels or short articles, I usually skim to get the main ideas quickly.

Suggestion: Отвечайте прямо: назовите предпочтение и объясните причину с 1–2 примерами. Используйте связующие слова (because, so, therefore). Работайте над произношением и подбором слов (scan, skim, detailed reading) и избегайте бессмыслиц.

Example: I usually prefer scanning because I am busy and need to find key information quickly. For instance, I scan news websites for headlines and the first paragraphs. But for important reports, I always read in detail to avoid missing facts.

× They said I'm really keen on reading.

✓ I'm really keen on reading.

The student used 'They said' which incorrectly introduces a third-person subject. Remove 'They said' to state personal preference directly. Use first-person subject 'I' for personal opinions. Suggestion: Start sentences about personal preferences with 'I' (e.g., 'I am really keen on reading.').

× because it's really effectively way to enhance my loyal by the time the books.

✓ because it's a really effective way to improve my knowledge through reading books.

Multiple errors: 'effectively' is an adverb used where the adjective 'effective' is needed to modify 'way'; 'loyal' is incorrect noun choice for knowledge; 'by the time the books' is ungrammatical; use 'through reading books' or 'by reading books'. Suggestion: Use 'a really effective way' and 'improve my knowledge through reading books.'

× And when it comes to reading, I would say I always try to speak on time to reading because I don't have enough time as so much like before they listen.

✓ When it comes to reading, I would say I always try to make time to read because I don't have as much free time as before.

Problems: leading 'And' unnecessary; 'speak on time to reading' is incorrect—should be 'make time to read'; 'as so much like before they listen' is ungrammatical—correct comparative is 'as much free time as before.' Suggestion: Use 'make time to read' and the comparative structure 'not as much...as before.'

× I'm utilizing from the the electronic devices probably enhanced my level.

✓ Using electronic devices has probably helped improve my level.

'I'm utilizing from' is nonstandard; 'the the' duplicate article; 'enhanced my level' needs a subject and auxiliary—'has helped improve my level.' Suggestion: Use 'Using electronic devices has helped me improve.'

× And honestly, both of them utilizing still and but nevertheless, if you ask me the no, if I should choose Israel, I will say I prefer reading on the paper because it makes me more the focus and without any confusing, I feel really effectively lesser than the screen because if I read the screen on the screen, I've always faced some notifications and always it's confused me.

✓ Honestly, I use both, but if I had to choose, I prefer reading on paper because it helps me focus and is less distracting than screens; when I read on a screen I often receive notifications that distract me.

Many issues: 'both of them utilizing still' incorrect—use 'I use both'; 'if you ask me the no' and 'if I should choose Israel' are meaningless—replace with 'if I had to choose'; 'reading on the paper' should be 'reading on paper'; 'the focus' unnecessary article; 'without any confusing' should be 'less distracting' or 'less confusing'; 'I feel really effectively lesser than the screen' is nonsensical; 'if I read the screen on the screen' duplicated word; 'I've always faced some notifications and always it's confused me' should be 'I often receive notifications that distract me.' Suggestion: Simplify structure, use conditional 'if I had to choose' and adjectives 'distracting'/'less distracting.'

× Honest I always try to read through her because it's really crucial for to enhance my level by about reading because always read the special books to enhance my learning about the attorney some the person to or when it comes to reading analysts decorating.

✓ Honestly, I always try to read carefully because it is crucial to improve my level; I often read specialized books to enhance my learning, especially when studying topics related to law or analysis.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains many unclear phrases: 'Honest' should be 'Honestly'; 'read through her' unclear—use 'read carefully'; 'crucial for to enhance my level' should be 'crucial to improve my level'; 'always read the special books' -> 'I often read specialized books'; unclear nouns like 'attorney some the person to' and 'reading analysts decorating' must be replaced with plausible phrases such as 'topics related to law or analysis.' Suggestion: Break into clearer clauses, use infinitive 'to improve' and 'specialized books.'

× And generally bothers them also great.

✓ Generally, I prefer scanning as it suits me best.

Fragment lacks subject and clear meaning. 'Bothers them also great' is ungrammatical. Provide a clear response with subject 'I' and verb 'prefer.' Suggestion: Use full sentences with subject and verb: 'Generally, I prefer scanning.'

× But if I choose everyone, I will try to scan me because of the tell.

✓ But if I have to choose, I usually scan because it is quicker.

'If I choose everyone' incorrect—should be 'if I have to choose'; 'I will try to scan me' wrong reflexive use—'I scan'; 'because of the tell' unclear, replace with 'because it is quicker.' Suggestion: Use 'if I have to choose' and avoid unnecessary reflexive pronouns.

× Reading is most difficult challenge for me.

✓ Reading is the most difficult challenge for me.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'most difficult challenge.' Suggestion: Use 'the most' with superlative nouns ('the most difficult challenge').

× It's about my effective syllable, thereby I always prefer to scandal.

✓ It is about my reading efficiency, so I always prefer skimming.

'Effective syllable' is nonsensical; likely intended 'reading efficiency.' 'Prefer to scandal' is incorrect—probably 'prefer skimming' or 'scanning.' Suggestion: Use accurate vocabulary: 'reading efficiency' and 'skimming' or 'scanning.'

× I think it's about by the to do my building, to do my daily activities.

✓ I think it's because of my workload and daily activities.

Phrase 'about by the to do my building' is ungrammatical. Use 'because of my workload' or 'because of my daily activities.' Suggestion: Use 'because of' to give reasons and 'workload' for 'building' if intended as work responsibilities.

× And also I really poison with my the work, thereby I don't have time to detail reading.

✓ Also, I am very busy with my work, so I don't have time for detailed reading.

'Really poison with my the work' is wrong—should be 'very busy with my work.' 'Detail reading' should be 'detailed reading' or 'reading in detail.' Suggestion: Use 'busy with work' and the adjective 'detailed' to modify 'reading.'