Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Work on clarity, grammar and vocabulary accuracy. Give a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms (read, reading), and avoid repetition. Keep response to 2–4 clear sentences: state whether you like reading, mention what you read, and give a brief reason or example. Use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often read long novels, especially comic fiction, because they make me laugh and relax. For example, I recently finished a bestselling comedy novel that helped me unwind after a busy week.

Suggestion: Improve word choice and sentence completion. Use correct words (read, screen) and give a clear contrast with linking words ('however', 'but'). Explain briefly why paper is better and when you accept screens. Keep sentences complete and avoid trailing off.

Example: I prefer to read on paper because it helps me concentrate and is gentler on my eyes. However, I read on a screen when I have no choice, such as for emails or online articles, but I try to limit this to avoid eye strain.

Suggestion: Use correct grammar and structure: start with a clear topic sentence about when careful reading is necessary. Use specific examples (work emails, contracts) and contrast with casual reading (texts, social media). Use linking words ('for example', 'whereas').

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm doing work-related tasks, for example when checking emails, reports, or instructions, because mistakes can cause problems. In contrast, I don't read carefully when chatting with friends or browsing social media, since those messages are informal and low-risk.

Suggestion: Clarify vocabulary and reduce repetition: use 'reading' not 'leading', and 'scanning' vs 'detailed reading'. Give a concise reason and an example. Use linking words ('because', 'so'). Aim for 2–3 sentences that directly answer the question.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because I believe every piece of information can be important and scanning may cause mistakes. For example, when reviewing a work report I read every section carefully to avoid errors.

× Yes, I like reading really much.

✓ Yes, I really like reading.

The adverb 'really' should come before the verb 'like' to modify it correctly. 'Really much' is non-standard; use 'really like' or 'like very much'. Suggestion: Place adverbs before main verbs: 'I really like reading' or 'I like reading very much.'

× I usually lead Noble, a long comedy novel and and in person I try to leading English nowhere to practice my leading skills.

✓ I usually read 'Noble', a long comic novel, and in person I try to speak English everywhere to practice my reading and speaking skills.

Multiple issues: wrong verb 'lead' instead of 'read', repeated 'and', incorrect 'leading English nowhere' and wrong gerund forms. Replace with correct verbs and clearer structure. Suggestions: Use correct verbs ('read', 'speak'), separate ideas with commas, and use 'everywhere' instead of 'nowhere' if meaning to practice broadly.

× And I will enjoy leading because it's humid to be more personal.

✓ And I enjoy reading because it is helpful to be more personal.

'Will enjoy' unnecessary future; simple present fits habitual likes. 'Leading' should be 'reading'. 'Humid' is wrong word; likely 'helpful' or 'useful'. Use correct adjective 'helpful' and simple present 'I enjoy' for general statements.

× I prefer to lead on paper because paper can make me more concentrated and not have any effect to my eyes.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because it helps me concentrate and does not affect my eyes.

Use 'read' instead of 'lead'. 'Make me more concentrated' is awkward; 'helps me concentrate' is natural. Use 'does not affect my eyes' instead of 'not have any effect to my eyes.' Use correct subject 'it' for paper.

× But if I have to lead on a skin sometime I have a problem with my eyes and.

✓ But if I have to read on a screen sometimes, I have problems with my eyes.

'Lead' should be 'read'; 'skin' is wrong word for 'screen'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. Remove trailing 'and'. Use plural 'problems' or 'a problem'.

× I have to lead carefully when I working and I have to leave like e-mail or information to do my work.

✓ I have to read carefully when I am working, and I have to leave notes, emails, or information to do my work.

Missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous 'I am working'. 'Lead' should be 'read'. 'Leave like e-mail' is unclear; likely 'write or leave notes or emails'. Use parallel nouns and correct verb forms.

× But sometime I don't have to make more concentrate about to leading when I chatting with my friends or send a message with my friends like not.

✓ But sometimes I don't need to concentrate much when I chat with my friends or send messages to them.

'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Don't have to make more concentrate about to leading' is ungrammatical; use 'don't need to concentrate much'. 'Chatting' should be 'chat' with correct tense. Simplify ending to 'send messages to them.'

× I prefer detailed leading because in my view every information is important, we shouldn't scan because it can create more mistake and I don't think it should be happen in my work because my work is need to be careful and have a details.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because, in my view, every piece of information is important. We shouldn't skim because it can cause more mistakes, and I don't think that should happen at work because my work needs to be done carefully and with attention to detail.

Multiple problems: 'leading' should be 'reading'. Use 'piece of information' or 'information' without 'every' + singular. 'Scan' here means 'skim'; 'create more mistake' should be 'cause more mistakes'. 'Should be happen' is wrong; use 'should happen'. 'My work is need to be careful' -> 'my work needs to be done carefully' and 'have a details' -> 'attention to detail'. Suggestions: use correct verbs, countable/uncountable noun forms, and appropriate collocations like 'cause mistakes', 'attention to detail'.