Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Câu trả lời của bạn đã trả lời trực tiếp và có nội dung cá nhân rõ ràng, nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, phát âm một vài từ và cấu trúc câu để tự nhiên hơn. Cụ thể: (1) Sửa lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: ‘Reading is a great way…’, ‘changed’ hoặc ‘strain’), (2) Giữ câu ngắn gọn tối đa 3–4 câu, tránh các từ lặp và tiếng ngắt ‘umm’, (3) Thêm một liên từ đơn giản để kết nối ý (e.g. ‘because’), (4) Cho một ví dụ cụ thể ngắn để minh họa thói quen đọc sách.

Example: Yes, I do. Reading is a great way to improve my knowledge, and I have read books every day since I was a child. I prefer physical books because they are easier on my eyes, whereas reading on a phone or tablet often strains my vision.

Suggestion: Bạn trả lời rõ ràng nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, cấu trúc lặp và phát âm không rõ. Cần: (1) Sử dụng thì và cấu trúc chính xác (e.g. ‘I prefer reading physical books to reading on a screen’), (2) Tránh lặp ý (‘as I mentioned’ dùng 1 lần nếu cần), (3) Dùng số ít/phức hợp danh từ đúng (‘strain my eyes’), (4) Giới thiệu một ngắn lí do bổ sung cụ thể (ví dụ: thuận tiện khi ghi chú).

Example: I prefer reading physical books to reading on a screen because they are easier on my eyes and more comfortable for long sessions. Also, with physical books I can easily mark pages and make notes, which helps my study.

Suggestion: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng diễn đạt lộn xộn và nhiều lỗi từ vựng/cấu trúc. Cần: (1) Sử dụng câu chủ đề trực tiếp, (2) Sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. ‘tests often depend on small details’, ‘I also read articles closely’), (3) Thay từ sai bằng từ chính xác (‘skimming’ thay cho ‘scheming’), (4) Sắp xếp logic bằng liên từ (‘however’, ‘when’) và tránh lặp. Hãy cho 1 ví dụ cụ thể khi bạn skimming.

Example: I read carefully when I'm taking tests because tests often depend on small details. I also read articles closely if the topic is relevant to my work or studies. However, when I have a lot of material to cover quickly, I use skimming to save time and focus on the main points.

Suggestion: Bạn đã nêu quan điểm rõ ràng nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp, từ vựng và tính mạch lạc. Cụ thể: (1) Dùng số ít/phức hợp đúng (‘detailed reading’), (2) Tránh mâu thuẫn trong câu (‘even though it can be tedious’), (3) Dùng liên từ để giải thích lý do (‘because’), (4) Cho một ví dụ ngắn, gọn và chính xác về cách bạn đọc chi tiết.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because although it can be tedious, it helps me understand the text more thoroughly and remember key points. For example, when I study an article for class, I read it slowly and take notes to retain the main ideas.

× Reading the great way to improve my knowledge and I have been reading books every day since I was a child.

✓ Reading is a great way to improve my knowledge, and I have been reading books every day since I was a child.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' after 'Reading' and needs a comma before the coordinating conjunction 'and'. Add 'is' to complete the clause and use punctuation to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: include linking verbs and proper punctuation to form complete sentences.

× Reading on the phone or tablet often change my eyes.

✓ Reading on the phone or tablet often strains my eyes.

The verb 'change' is incorrect here; 'strain' is the appropriate verb to describe discomfort to eyes. Also subject is plural 'Reading on the phone or tablet' treated as singular action requiring singular verb 'strains'. Suggestion: choose verbs that match the intended meaning and ensure subject-verb agreement.

× Well I prefer read on physical books rather than read on a screen because I'm just like I just mentioned, reading on physical books like papers E easy on my eyes R and reading on the phone or tablet will strain my eye.

✓ Well, I prefer reading physical books rather than reading on a screen because, as I mentioned, reading physical books like paper is easier on my eyes and reading on the phone or tablet will strain my eyes.

Problems: verb form ('prefer read' should be 'prefer reading'), preposition/word choice ('on physical books' -> 'reading physical books'), punctuation and filler words removed, 'papers E' looks like typos corrected to 'paper', 'easy' should be comparative 'easier', 'eye' should be plural 'eyes' to match 'my'. Suggestion: use gerund after 'prefer', choose correct noun forms, and maintain plural consistency.

× Well, I read carefully when I'm taking a test because the test often depend on the small details.

✓ Well, I read carefully when I'm taking a test because the tests often depend on small details.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the test' vs 'depend' mismatch. Either make both singular ('the test often depends on small details') or pluralize both. Also 'the small details' is better as 'small details' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: ensure subject number matches verb form and prefer natural collocations.

× I often also read article closely if the topic is important to my work or my study.

✓ I also often read articles closely if the topic is important to my work or my studies.

Errors: missing plural 'articles' to match general meaning, placement of 'also' for natural word order, and 'study' should be plural 'studies' when referring to one's academic work. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and place adverbs where they sound natural.

× Also why I will use scheming skill to skip it to not to waste time to save time.

✓ Also, I use skimming skills to skip parts so I do not waste time.

Problems: 'why I will' is ungrammatical here; tense and word order fixed to present 'I use'. 'scheming' is wrong word; correct term is 'skimming'. 'skill' should be plural 'skills' and phrase 'to skip it to not to waste time to save time' is redundant and awkward. Suggestion: use correct vocabulary ('skimming'), simplify and avoid repetition, and use negative form 'do not' for clarity.

× Well, I prefer detailed readings even though we are a little too tedious, but it helped me to understand the text more carefully and more specific.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading even though it can be a little tedious, but it helps me understand the text more thoroughly and more specifically.

Errors: 'detailed readings' should be 'detailed reading' (uncountable activity), 'we are' incorrect pronoun — should be 'it can be', 'too tedious' adjusted to 'a little tedious', verb tense agreement 'helped' -> 'helps', and adjective/adverb misuse 'more specific' -> 'more specifically' or 'more detailed'. Suggestion: match noun count, use correct pronouns, maintain present tense for habits, and use adverbs when modifying verbs.

× Umm so I wouldn't meet it just like I scanning it for example when I read when I study an article for class, I read it slowly to remember the key point.

✓ Umm, so I wouldn't skim it; for example, when I study an article for class, I read it slowly to remember the key points.

Problems: 'wouldn't meet it' is incorrect; intended verb likely 'skim'. 'I scanning it' wrong form; use 'skim' or 'skim it'. Sentence run-on corrected with punctuation and clearer conjunctions. 'key point' pluralized to 'key points' for general meaning. Suggestion: use correct verb ('skim'), proper verb forms, and punctuation to separate examples and clauses.