Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Give a clear direct answer first, use correct grammar, keep it concise (1–2 sentences), and include one brief reason with simple vocabulary. Avoid repetition and unclear phrasing.

Example: No, I don't enjoy reading very much. I have spent a lot of time writing and studying since childhood, so I prefer activities that are more active than reading.

Suggestion: Start with a direct response (paper or screen), then give one clear specific reason. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid repetition or unclear phrases.

Example: I prefer to read on a screen because it is more convenient and I can adjust the font size and carry many books on one device.

Suggestion: Begin with a concise topic sentence answering both parts. Use contrasting linking words (e.g. 'when' / 'when not'), give one specific example for each case, and check grammar (use 'read carefully' not 'wait carefully').

Example: I need to read carefully when I study technical material or instructions because I must understand exact meanings. When I am skimming news headlines or casual social media posts, I don't read carefully because I only need the general idea.

Suggestion: Answer directly (scanning or detailed reading), then give one clear reason with a concise example. Use correct grammar and smoother phrasing (e.g. 'detailed reading' not 'details reading').

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand topics deeply; for example, when I read a textbook chapter I take notes to remember key ideas.

× Want to talk about this question as a student I really don't like reading because I read or write since my childhood which is hate the most of the people and I also hate reading.

✓ As a student, I want to talk about this question: I really don't like reading because I have disliked reading and writing since my childhood, and I am like many people who hate it.

Multiple sentence structure problems: missing subject at start, incorrect tense ('read or write since my childhood' should use present perfect to show an action continuing from the past), unclear relative clause ('which is hate the most of the people') and repetitive phrasing. Suggestion: begin with a clear subject and verb, use present perfect for actions from the past to now (have disliked), and simplify or rephrase the relative clause into a clear comparison (like many people who hate it).

× As I said earlier, I really don't enjoy while reading.

✓ As I said earlier, I really don't enjoy reading.

Incorrect use of the preposition 'while' with 'enjoy' here creates an ungrammatical phrase. The verb 'enjoy' should be followed directly by a gerund (reading). Suggestion: remove 'while' so the sentence reads 'I don't enjoy reading.'

× But to answer this question, I prefer to read on screen because it helps to it helps to maintain our construction construction on this.

✓ But to answer this question, I prefer to read on a screen because it helps me concentrate and organize my notes.

Repetition ('it helps to it helps to'), incorrect noun choice ('construction construction'), and vague object make the sentence unclear. Also article missing before 'screen'. Suggestion: use 'a screen', replace vague noun with appropriate verbs/phrases like 'concentrate' or 'organize my notes', and avoid repetition.

× Well, to talk about this question, whenever I have to focus on something so carefully and, uh, listen to carefully that meaning what the what the exact meaning of that, that time I need to be read carefully.

✓ Well, to answer this question, whenever I have to focus on something carefully and understand its exact meaning, I need to read it carefully.

Awkward phrasing and incorrect verb forms: 'listen to carefully that meaning' is incorrect; use 'understand its exact meaning'. 'I need to be read carefully' is passive and wrong; use active infinitive 'I need to read it carefully.' Suggestion: use active voice and correct verb phrases (focus on, understand, read it carefully).

× And whenever I have to not, you know, listen so carefully. We don't have, I don't have to exact meaning that time. I don't need to wait carefully.

✓ And when I do not need to listen so carefully, I do not need to know the exact meaning, so I don't need to read carefully.

Fragments and unclear pronoun use: sentence fragments ('And whenever I have to not, you know, listen so carefully.') and mixed subjects ('We don't have, I don't have') cause confusion. 'I don't need to wait carefully' is incorrect verb choice; likely meant 'read carefully.' Suggestion: combine clauses into a complete sentence, keep consistent subject, and use appropriate verbs ('read' instead of 'wait').

× Who want to talk about this question? I prefer to details reading because it helps us to maintain our knowledge and gives us more knowledge knowledgeable things.

✓ To answer this question, I prefer detailed reading because it helps us retain information and learn more.

Incorrect question form ('Who want to talk about this question?') and wrong adjective form 'details reading' (should be 'detailed reading'). Wordy and awkward phrase 'gives us more knowledge knowledgeable things' is ungrammatical. Suggestion: start with a clear introductory phrase, use the adjective 'detailed' + noun 'reading', and replace wordy expressions with concise verbs like 'retain information' and 'learn more.'