Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、繰り返し（"reading books", "gives gives"）、文法（"In recently"）、語順や冠詞のミスがあり、自然さを損なっています。改善点：1) 重複語を避ける。2) 過去の出来事を述べるときは正しい時制と語句（"recently"）を使う。3) トピック文の後に短い理由や具体例を一つ付ける。4) 文は3文以内に収め、流れをよくする。

Example: I enjoy reading because it helps me relax and learn new things. Recently, I finished a romantic novel about two people reconnecting after years apart, and I found the character development very moving.

Suggestion: 主張は明確ですが、多くの繰り返し（"reading reading", "I I always feel feel"）と不自然な表現（"tired of eyes"）があります。改善点：1) 繰り返しをなくす。2) 自然な表現（"tire my eyes"）を使う。3) 理由を一つか二つ、具体的に述べる（例：画面の光や長時間の眩しさ）。

Example: I prefer reading on paper because screens often tire my eyes. The backlight and glare make it uncomfortable to read for long periods, whereas paper feels easier and more relaxing.

Suggestion: 考えは伝わりますが、言い方がやや不自然で冗長です（"contents of books"や"skip the sentence or books"）。改善点：1) トピック文で直接答える。2) 具体的な状況（例えば勉強や説明書）を挙げる。3) 否定の場合は簡潔に説明する。

Example: I need to read carefully when I'm studying or following instructions because accuracy matters. For casual reading, like light fiction, I sometimes skim if I'm not interested in every detail.

Suggestion: 意図は分かりますが、語順や繰り返し（"detail reading in detail", "I I it takes"）、冗長な表現が多いです。改善点：1) 明確なトピック文を使う（"I prefer scanning"）。2) 理由を一つ示す（時間がかかる、疲れる）。3) 文は簡潔にまとめる。

Example: I prefer scanning because it saves time and helps me find the main points quickly. Detailed reading takes much longer and can be tiring, so I reserve it for important material.

× I like reading books because reading books makes me relaxed and gives gives me more information.

✓ I like reading books because reading books make me relaxed and give me more information.

The verbs after the subject 'reading books' should agree in number and form; here 'reading books' acts as a singular gerund phrase but is followed by plural verbs incorrectly duplicated. Remove the duplicated 'gives' and use 'give' to match the notion of 'books' providing information; alternatively use singular agreement with 'makes' and 'gives' if treating 'reading' as singular. Also remove duplicate word 'gives'. Suggestion: say 'reading books makes me relaxed and gives me more information' or 'books give me more information.'

× In recently I read the romantic novel.

✓ Recently I read a romantic novel.

Word order and article use are incorrect. 'Recently' should precede the clause without 'In'. Use the indefinite article 'a' before 'romantic novel' because it refers to one novel not previously specified. Use simple past 'read' is correct for a completed action.

× I prefer reading reading on the paper to on the screen.

✓ I prefer reading on paper to reading on a screen.

Duplicate 'reading' should be removed. Use 'on paper' (no article) and 'a screen' for a general device. Keep parallel gerund phrases: 'reading on paper' and 'reading on a screen.'

× In case of on screen I I always feel feel tired of eyes, but on the paper I don't feel that.

✓ When I read on a screen I always feel eye strain, but when I read on paper I don't.

'In case of on screen' is awkward; use 'when I read on a screen.' Remove duplicated words. 'Tired of eyes' is unidiomatic; use 'eye strain' or 'my eyes get tired.' Also use 'on paper' rather than 'on the paper.'

× Well, I often read books carefully because I want to understand the contents of books.

✓ Well, I often read books carefully because I want to understand the content of the books.

'Contents of books' is grammatical but 'content of the books' is more natural in this context. Maintain present tense 'often read' and 'want' for habitual actions. Consider avoiding repetition of 'books.'

× If I don't read carefully, I skip the sentence or books.

✓ If I don't read carefully, I skip sentences or parts of books.

The original mixes singular and plural awkwardly. Make the objects parallel: 'skip sentences' or 'skip parts of books.' This clarifies meaning and improves agreement.

× I prefer scanning to detail reading in detail.

✓ I prefer scanning to detailed reading.

Use the adjective 'detailed' before the noun 'reading' rather than repeating 'in detail.' Keep the contrast concise: 'scanning' vs 'detailed reading.'

× In the detailed reading I I it takes a long It takes a long time to read the books, so I feel tired.

✓ In detailed reading it takes a long time to read the books, so I feel tired.

Remove duplicated words and unnecessary article 'the' before 'detailed reading.' Use 'it takes a long time' as an impersonal construction; keep 'read the books' if referring to specific books, otherwise use 'read books.' Duplications should be eliminated.