Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, correct grammar, and give specific reasons or feelings. Use a clear topic sentence, one or two supporting details, and avoid hesitation sounds. Fix verb forms and article use (e.g., “a books” → “books” or “a book”).

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading in my free time. For example, I read books like Rich Dad Poor Dad because they motivate me and teach practical financial ideas, which inspire me to set goals and work harder.

Suggestion: Organize your answer with a clear preference statement, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Correct collocations (e.g., “read on paper,” “causes eye strain”) and avoid unclear phrases like “hour calls.”

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me concentrate. For example, when I study from printed books I can read longer without getting headaches, and I find it easier to remember information than when I read on a screen.

Suggestion: Start with a direct topic sentence answering both parts, then give clear examples. Avoid vague or repeated phrases and fix grammar (e.g., “a passage,” “one mistake can be costly”). Use linking words like “for instance” and “therefore.”

Example: I need to read carefully when I am studying for exams or trying to understand a difficult passage. For instance, during an exam I read each question slowly to avoid mistakes; however, I skim when I am looking for a simple fact or checking the structure of a text.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence, then two concise reasons with correct vocabulary (e.g., “detailed reading,” “scanning”). Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like “fallen quick 10.” Use linking words such as “because” and “however.”

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the whole idea and find accurate answers. For example, when I read a passage carefully I can notice subtle points and avoid mistakes, whereas scanning is useful only when I need a quick fact.

× Yes definitely I like reading whenever I and I get an free time.

✓ Yes, definitely I like reading whenever I get free time.

The sentence contains an extra pronoun 'I' and an incorrect article 'an' before 'free time'. Remove the duplicated 'I' and use no article with the uncountable noun 'free time'. Also add commas for clarity.

× I love to read a books like uh, Rich Daddy and Poor Daddy which makes me more motivated and inspired me to perform attacks and encourage me.

✓ I love to read books like Rich Dad Poor Dad, which motivate and inspire me to take action and improve myself.

Use 'books' (plural) without the article 'a'. The book title is corrected. The verb agreement should be plural 'motivate' to match 'books'. 'Inspired me to perform attacks' is incorrect phrasing; use 'inspire me to take action' or 'improve myself' for clarity. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I prefer to read in a paper because whenever it's an hour calls or and traditional purpose, our elder and the young brother also read from a paper.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because for traditional purposes my elders and younger brother also read from paper.

Use 'on paper' rather than 'in a paper'. 'For traditional purposes' is the correct phrase. 'Elder' should be 'elders' and 'young brother' should be 'younger brother'. Remove unnecessary articles before 'paper' when talking generally.

× So it is quite easier for me to study as compared to screen and it's less times and we can refresh our mind through the paper reading while the screen times always makes our headache and pain in our eyes.

✓ So it is quite easier for me to study compared to a screen; it takes less time and we can refresh our minds by reading on paper, while screen time often gives us headaches and eye pain.

Use 'easier' without 'quite' or place 'quite' before 'easy' ('quite easy'). 'Compared to a screen' is correct. 'Less times' should be 'less time'. 'Refresh our mind' becomes 'refresh our minds' (plural). 'Paper reading' -> 'reading on paper'. 'Screen times' -> 'screen time'. Verb agreement: 'makes our headache and pain' -> 'gives us headaches and eye pain'.

× Oh, that's an quite tricky question.

✓ Oh, that's a quite tricky question.

Use the article 'a' before a word starting with a consonant sound. 'Quite' follows the article; alternatively 'that's quite a tricky question' is more natural.

× I think whenever I'm confused at that time I should read carefully or when I'm finding something in that passage.

✓ I think when I'm confused or when I'm looking for something in a passage, I should read carefully.

Reduce redundancy ('whenever...at that time') and combine conditions into a single clearer clause. Use 'looking for something in a passage' instead of 'finding something in that passage'.

× Or for example, if I'm doing an passage evaluation, then I have to read it carefully because in one mistake can be wrong if I'm sitting in exam hall.

✓ For example, if I'm doing a passage evaluation, I have to read it carefully because one mistake can be costly if I'm sitting in the exam hall.

Use 'a' before 'passage evaluation'. Remove 'then' as unnecessary. 'In one mistake can be wrong' is ungrammatical; say 'one mistake can be costly'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'exam hall'.

× So it will be quite difficult for me to read our scam only scheme only.

✓ So it will be quite difficult for me to read the whole exam or follow only a quick scan.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Likely meaning is that relying only on scanning or attempting an exam quickly would be difficult. Provide a clearer alternative: 'read the whole exam' or 'follow only a quick scan'.

× I prefer reading details because it will absorb all kinds of answer and need answer for in the from the passage.

✓ I prefer reading in detail because it helps me find all kinds of answers I need from the passage.

Use 'in detail' rather than 'reading details'. 'Absorb all kinds of answer' is wrong; 'helps me find all kinds of answers' is correct. Fix word order: 'from the passage'.

× Sometimes scheming scanning may may be lost and it is only fallen quick 10 While reading by details it makes more conscious and more focus and concentrate on our work.

✓ Sometimes skimming or scanning may cause me to miss information, while reading in detail makes me more aware and helps me focus and concentrate on the task.

Replace 'scheming' with 'skimming'. Remove duplicate 'may'. 'May be lost' -> 'may cause me to miss information'. 'Only fallen quick 10' is nonsensical; interpret as 'only a quick read'. 'Reading by details' -> 'reading in detail'. Use 'aware' and 'focus' as nouns/verbs correctly and 'helps me focus' for natural phrasing.