Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise, organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Avoid hesitation words and repetition; use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Include a specific example of a book or topic to make your answer more concrete.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading a lot. I mainly read books about emerging technologies because they relate to my field and help me prepare for future work; for example, I recently read a book about machine learning applications that gave me practical ideas for my projects.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference or say you have no strong preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words like 'because' and 'however'. Avoid repeating words and correct minor grammar (e.g., 'both', 'comfortable').

Example: I don't have a strong preference between paper and screens because it depends on availability. If a book is only online, I'll read it on a screen; however, I prefer paper for long study sessions because it's easier to annotate and less tiring for my eyes.

Suggestion: Provide a clearer contrast by stating situations for skimming versus careful reading. Use linking words like 'whereas' or 'but', and give specific reasons why careful reading is necessary (e.g., to avoid mistakes or to understand methods). Keep sentences short and avoid incomplete sentences.

Example: I usually skim general articles for main ideas because they are just for leisure; whereas I read research papers carefully because I need to understand the methods and avoid mistakes in my work.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear preference depending on purpose, then give one specific reason and an example. Use concise language and correct small grammatical errors (e.g., 'if the paper is general, I don't mind minor misunderstandings').

Example: It depends on the purpose: I scan general articles to save time, but I use detailed reading for research papers in my field so I don't miss important details or make mistakes.

× Uh yes, reading is my hobby and I like reading and usually I read innovative books like which is related to my field and most of time I also prefer to read immersed technology fields related novels and books which will help me in my future work.

✓ Yes, reading is my hobby; I usually read books related to my field, especially those about immersive technologies, because they will help me in my future work.

The original sentence has multiple structure issues: run-on sentences, awkward phrasing ('like which is related to my field'), wrong word order ('immersed technology fields related novels'), and missing articles. Break into clearer clauses, use parallel structure, and place adjectives before nouns ('immersive technologies') to improve clarity. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid run-on errors.

× I have no issue with the both preferences.

✓ I have no issue with either preference.

'Both' should not be used with 'the' in this context; 'either preference' is the correct collocation when choosing between two options. Also 'preferences' (plural) is unnecessary when referring to two choices; use the singular 'preference' or 'either of them'.

× It depends on the availability, Availability of novel or availability of topic.

✓ It depends on availability, such as whether the book or the topic is available.

The phrase used repetitive and incorrect prepositions/capitalization. Use 'depends on availability' and then clarify with 'whether' to introduce alternatives. Avoid capitalizing common nouns mid-sentence.

× If it's available on Internet I can read it via Internet but if I have a book or other notes then I will read it on paper and both preferences are good and I am comfort.

✓ If it's available on the Internet, I can read it online; but if I have a book or notes, I will read them on paper. Both options are fine, and I am comfortable with either.

Use 'on the Internet' or 'online' (not 'on Internet' or 'via Internet'). 'Notes' is plural so use 'them'. 'Comfort' is a noun; use the adjective 'comfortable'. Also split into sentences for clarity and use parallel structure ('both options' or 'either option').

× I think when reading a general topic, you can not.

✓ I think when reading a general topic, you do not need to read carefully.

The original ends abruptly and is unclear. 'You can not' is ambiguous; the intended meaning is that careful reading is not necessary for general topics. Make the verb and object explicit: 'do not need to read carefully'.

× If you can't read it carefully, then it doesn't matter.

✓ If you cannot read it carefully, then it does not matter for general understanding.

The sentence is grammatically acceptable but vague. Replace contraction for formality if needed and clarify what 'it' and 'doesn't matter' refer to. Add 'for general understanding' to specify context.

× But if you are reading a research paper or an article which is related to your field project or your job ever, then you definitely have to read it carefully.

✓ But if you are reading a research paper or an article related to your field, project, or job, then you definitely have to read it carefully.

Remove 'which is' and 'ever' which are unnecessary or incorrect here. Use a parallel list 'field, project, or job' and place 'related to' before the list. This corrects awkward phrasing and maintains clarity.

× And this is the most important and difference between reading a topic carefully or not because if you.

✓ This is the most important difference between reading a topic carefully and not reading it carefully because if you

The sentence is fragmented and contains Word order problems. Use 'difference between A and B' structure and avoid starting sentences with 'And'. The original also ends abruptly; keep sentence complete.

× Don't read carefully your research paper or any other article there.

✓ You do not read your research paper or any other article carefully there.

The original is ungrammatical and awkward: imperative 'Don't read carefully your...' is incorrect in this context. Use declarative structure with subject and verb. Also 'there' is vague; specify location or remove if not needed.

× It also depends on the overall scenario of given the topic or given a paper.

✓ It also depends on the overall context of the topic or the paper.

'Scenario of given the topic' is ungrammatical. Use 'depends on the overall context' and simplify 'given the topic or given a paper' to 'of the topic or the paper'.

× If the paper is general then I don't care about the certain misunderstanding.

✓ If the paper is general, then I am not concerned about certain misunderstandings.

Use 'am not concerned' instead of 'don't care about' for better formality. 'The certain misunderstanding' is incorrect; use 'certain misunderstandings' (plural) or 'a certain misunderstanding' depending on meaning. Also add a comma after introductory clause.

× But if it was about to my field are related to research paper then definitely I will go for a detailed reading to avoid mistakes.

✓ But if it is related to my field or is a research paper, then I will definitely do a detailed reading to avoid mistakes.

Replace 'was' with 'is' to match general present condition. 'About to my field' is incorrect; use 'related to my field'. 'Go for a detailed reading' is colloquial; 'do a detailed reading' is clearer. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct prepositions.