Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I enjoy reading.), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense/use of phrases and avoid redundancy.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading. I often go to the library to read comic books because they are entertaining and help me relax after school. For example, I like superhero comics because the stories and illustrations are exciting.

Suggestion: Give a clear preference sentence, explain two concise reasons with linking words, and correct grammar (e.g., "I like reading on paper because..."). Mention the eyesight issue briefly and accurately.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because I enjoy the tactile feeling and the smell of books. Also, reading on paper is easier on my eyes, so I can read for longer without discomfort.

Suggestion: Answer directly: state when you read carefully and when you skim, then give clear reasons and one specific example. Use linking words (for example, however) and correct sentence structure.

Example: I read carefully when I want to understand the plot or learn new information, for example with novels or study materials. However, if a book is boring or not relevant to me, I usually skim the pages to get the main idea.

Suggestion: Give a direct preference (scanning or detailed), then explain why with a concise reason and example. Use coherent linking words and correct grammar to convey meaning clearly.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the full meaning of a text, especially with novels or academic articles. For instance, when I read a story, I focus on details to follow the characters and plot.

× Yes, I used to like reading books when I was more, and I often go to the library to read comic books, so I think it's very interesting and relaxed for me.

✓ Yes, I used to like reading books when I was younger, and I often went to the library to read comic books, so I think it's very interesting and relaxing for me.

The phrase 'when I was more' is incorrect; 'younger' expresses age in the past. 'I often go' should be 'I often went' to keep past-tense consistency with 'used to.' 'Relaxed for me' should be 'relaxing for me' because we need an adjective describing the activity, not a past participle. Suggestion: keep tense consistent and choose correct adjective form.

× I like read on paper because I love the feeling. We touch the book and feel the and smell.

✓ I like reading on paper because I love the feeling. We can touch the book and feel and smell the paper.

'Like read' is ungrammatical; after 'like' when referring to an activity use the -ing form 'reading.' 'We touch the book and feel the and smell' is ungrammatical and missing words; use 'can touch' for ability and place 'smell the paper' at the end. Suggestion: use gerunds for general likes and complete object phrases.

× Of the paper it bring me a lot of emotion.

✓ The paper brings me a lot of emotion.

'Of the paper it bring me a lot of emotion' has extra preposition 'of' and incorrect subject order. Use 'The paper' as subject and 'brings' for third-person singular. Also 'a lot of emotion' could be 'strong emotions' or 'many emotions.' Suggestion: use correct subject order and match verb form to subject.

× Also I have a problem my eye.

✓ Also, I have a problem with my eye.

Missing preposition 'with' between 'problem' and 'my eye.' The sentence also needs a comma after 'Also' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'a problem with' + body part or specify 'my eyes' if both.

× Well, I love a book and a story of it.

✓ Well, I love a book and its story.

'a story of it' is awkward and incorrect in this context; use the possessive 'its story' to link the book and its story. Suggestion: prefer 'its' to show possession.

× I read really carefully and I dive into them.

✓ I read very carefully and I dive into it.

Pronoun 'them' does not agree with 'a book' (singular); use 'it.' 'Really' is acceptable but 'very' is more natural here. Tense 'read' (present) is okay for general habits. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches noun.

× So when I don't because I don't like this book, I feel this book is not interesting of me.

✓ So when I don't like a book, I don't read it carefully because I find it uninteresting.

Original sentence has misplaced clauses and awkward phrases 'interesting of me.' Rearranged to logical order: state condition ('when I don't like a book') then consequence ('I don't read it carefully') and use 'uninteresting' instead of 'not interesting of me.' Suggestion: keep condition before result and use correct adjectives.

× I feel unlikely to really because it had me. Understand full of meaning books.

✓ I am unlikely to read carefully because I have difficulty understanding books that are full of meaning.

Original is fragmented and unclear: 'unlikely to really because it had me' is meaningless. Rewritten to convey probable intended meaning: speaker is unlikely to read carefully because they struggle to understand complex (meaningful) books. Use 'am unlikely to' and 'have difficulty understanding' and combine fragments into a full sentence. Suggestion: write complete sentences with clear subject and verb and connect cause and effect.