Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Improve grammar, sentence structure and clarity. Give a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then add 1–2 specific supporting details (when you started, types of books) using correct verb forms and simple connectors. Keep answers natural, avoid invented words (e.g. "someoneization") and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Example: Yes, I love reading. I started when I was about five or six because my parents read fairy tales and comics like Doraemon to me. Since then I have enjoyed science fiction and fantasy because they spark my imagination.

Suggestion: Make a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then give one clear reason and a brief consequence. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing; avoid unclear phrases like "as a formation with you when I go to try." Use a linking word such as "because" to connect reason and result.

Example: I prefer to read on paper rather than on a screen because I find it easier on my eyes. For example, reading printed books helps me concentrate for longer periods without eye strain.

Suggestion: Start with a clear statement about when careful reading is necessary and when it is not. Provide two specific examples (exams, contracts at work) and use linking words like "for example" or "however." Correct grammar (e.g. "the exam wants to ask" -> "the exam asks") and avoid vague phrases like "some specific commitments."

Example: You need to read carefully in situations such as exams and legal or work documents. For example, in an exam you must read each passage and question carefully, and at work you should read contracts closely to avoid mistakes.

Suggestion: Give a direct answer (prefer scanning or detailed reading), then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use clearer phrasing: "detailed reading helps me remember ideas" and avoid awkward phrases like "read out loud on information detail." Keep to 2–3 sentences max and use linking words like "because" and "for example."

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand and remember the ideas. For example, when I read a report in detail I can summarize the main points and use them in discussions later.

× I extremely reading since I was a try from 5 or 6 years old and at that time my parents always thought for me how to read a book from fairy tales, from Doraemon for example or some kind of science fiction and they also taught for me more on someoneization from reading.

✓ I have enjoyed reading ever since I was about five or six years old, and at that time my parents always helped me learn to read books, such as fairy tales, Doraemon for example, or some kinds of science fiction, and they also encouraged me to get more out of reading.

The original sentence uses 'extremely' incorrectly as an adverb modifying 'reading' and has multiple structural problems. Use present perfect 'have enjoyed' to express a continuing state from the past to now. 'Since' with a point in time requires present perfect. 'A try from 5 or 6 years old' is ungrammatical; replace with 'about five or six years old.' 'Thought for me how to read' should be 'helped me learn to read.' 'Taught for me more on someoneization from reading' is unclear; changed to 'encouraged me to get more out of reading.' These corrections address adverb misuse, tense, and sentence structure; to improve, use appropriate adverbs, correct verb forms, and simpler clauses.

× I will choose to read on paper as a formation with you when I go to try.

✓ I would choose to read on paper when I have the option.

'I will choose ... as a formation with you when I go to try' is awkward and mixes future intention with unclear phrases. Use conditional 'would choose' for preference and a simpler phrase 'when I have the option.' This fixes inappropriate future-tense phrasing and unclear wording.

× I had a good habit to read on paper than reading on a screen because when you spend too much time reading on computer screen, it will damage to your eyes.

✓ I have a good habit of reading on paper rather than on a screen because spending too much time reading on a computer screen can damage your eyes.

Use 'have' (present) for a current habit and 'habit of doing' not 'had a good habit to.' Use 'rather than' for comparisons. 'It will damage to your eyes' is incorrect; use 'can damage your eyes' (no 'to'). This corrects tense, preposition, and modal usage.

× In my point of view, you need to read carefully in some cases.

✓ In my point of view, you need to read carefully in some cases.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; tense and structure match the meaning. Minor style improvement: say 'In my opinion' for naturalness. No correction required according to the listed types.

× For example, in your exam, you need to read carefully in each passage and its questions that the the exam want to ask.

✓ For example, in an exam you need to read each passage and the questions carefully to understand what the exam is asking.

Original has word order and agreement issues: 'its questions that the the exam want to ask' is ungrammatical. Use 'the exam is asking' (subject-verb agreement) and place adverb 'carefully' after the object or before the verb for clarity. Remove duplicate 'the'.

× You are in some specific commitments in your company.

✓ You have certain specific commitments at your company.

Use 'have commitments' rather than 'are in commitments.' Preposition 'at' is correct for location/company. 'Some specific' is improved to 'certain specific' or simply 'specific.' This fixes incorrect verb and preposition use.

× I am OK from person so in every cases and in every situations I always like detail reading because you know when you read out loud on information detail you can hold on the ideas and the content they want to impact to you.

✓ I'm an easygoing person, so in most cases and situations I prefer detailed reading because when you read detailed information aloud you can remember the ideas and the content they want to convey to you.

Multiple pronoun and word-choice errors: 'I am OK from person' -> 'I'm an easygoing person'; 'in every cases and in every situations' -> 'in most cases and situations'; 'I always like detail reading' -> 'I prefer detailed reading' (adjective form); 'read out loud on information detail' -> 'read detailed information aloud'; 'hold on the ideas' -> 'remember the ideas'; 'impact to you' -> 'convey to you.' Corrections improve pronoun/reference, adjective/adverb forms, and prepositions.