Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence stating whether you like reading, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear metaphors and grammar mistakes. Use linking words (for example, but, however) to connect ideas and keep sentences short (max 4-5).

Example: I don't enjoy reading much; I mostly read comic books because they are entertaining and easy to follow. However, I find novels and academic texts boring, so I rarely read them.

Suggestion: Answer directly and correct grammar: use a clear topic sentence saying your preference, then give a specific reason with correct vocabulary. Avoid typos (e.g., 'pepper' should be 'paper') and use linking words like because or as a result.

Example: I prefer to read on paper because long periods of screen reading strain my eyes. For example, when I study for more than an hour on a tablet I get headaches, so printed pages are more comfortable.

Suggestion: Structure your answer with one clear topic sentence, then give specific details and an example. Remove filler words and repeated phrases. Use linking words (for example, because, so, whereas) to show contrast between careful and casual reading.

Example: I need to read carefully when I study lecture notes because I must understand facts and concepts for exams. By contrast, I skim newspapers or social media posts when I just want the main idea.

Suggestion: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then explain why with a precise reason and an example. Use correct collocations (e.g., 'detailed reading' not 'teacher reading') and linking words (because, so, therefore). Keep sentences concise.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me fully understand complex information. For instance, when I read a scientific article I read slowly and take notes so I don't miss important arguments.

× I'm not a reading person, I like the comic books other than that novels, lectures are a cardboard man while reading that.

✓ I'm not a reader; I like comic books rather than novels. Reading lectures feels like dealing with a cardboard man.

Incorrect word choices and adjective/adverb usage: 'reading person' is unnatural — use the noun 'reader'. 'other than that novels' is incorrect; use 'rather than novels' or 'instead of novels'. 'lectures are a cardboard man while reading that' is unclear and uses incorrect metaphor and structure; rephrase to 'Reading lectures feels like dealing with a cardboard man' to convey the intended meaning. Suggestion: use appropriate noun forms and clearer predicates, and avoid literal translations of metaphors.

× I prefer read on paper because reading a long paragraph on screen make my eyes so irritation, So pepper is good for eyes.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because reading a long paragraph on a screen makes my eyes very irritated, so paper is better for the eyes.

Present tense and verb form errors: 'prefer read' requires the -ing form 'prefer reading'. Subject-verb agreement with present simple: 'make' should be 'makes' because the subject 'reading a long paragraph on a screen' is singular. Word choice and adjective/adverb errors: 'so irritation' is incorrect; use 'very irritated' or 'causes irritation'. 'So pepper is good for eyes' is a likely typo; use 'paper is better for the eyes.' Suggestion: use gerunds after 'prefer', ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose correct nouns ('paper') and adjective forms ('irritated').

× But for me I read carefully only on my lectures lecture notes, because I need to study the lecture notes.

✓ For me, I read carefully only my lecture notes because I need to study them.

Tense and article usage: 'read carefully only on my lectures lecture notes' is ungrammatical and has redundant words. Use present simple 'I read' with direct object 'my lecture notes'. Remove repeated phrase 'the lecture notes' by replacing with pronoun 'them'. Suggestion: simplify the sentence, place adverb 'carefully' close to the verb, and avoid repetition.

× So I read every paragraph very carefully. I understand each and everything on that.

✓ So I read every paragraph very carefully. I understand everything in them.

Subject-verb agreement and preposition use: 'I understand each and everything on that' is awkward and incorrect. Use 'everything' (not 'each and everything') and correct preposition: 'in them' referring to 'paragraphs' or 'notes'. Suggestion: use concise phrases and correct prepositions to refer back to plural nouns.

× Well, I prefer teacher reading because scanning is just to understand the main idea while the detailed reading get about a good understanding about what contains on it.

✓ Well, I prefer detailed reading because scanning is only for understanding the main idea, while detailed reading gives a good understanding of the content.

Sentence structure and word choice errors: 'I prefer teacher reading' is incorrect and likely intended 'detailed reading'. 'scanning is just to understand' should be 'scanning is only for understanding'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the detailed reading get' should be 'detailed reading gives'. Phrase order: 'what contains on it' is ungrammatical; use 'the content' or 'the material'. Suggestion: choose correct collocations ('detailed reading', 'gives an understanding of the content') and maintain parallel structure in comparative clauses.