Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Старайтесь избегать повторов и заполнителей («to to», «like that for always»). Начните с чёткой темы, затем кратко добавьте конкретный пример или причину. Улучшите грамматику (например, «it wasn't always like that») и используйте одно-два дополнительных предложения для пояснения.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often read short stories before bed, which calms me and helps me sleep. I used to dislike reading as a child, but I changed my mind when I discovered exciting fiction.

Suggestion: Упорядочьте ответ: сначала скажьте предпочтение, затем объясните причину, используя связку (because, however). Избегайте повторов и непонятных фраз («you don't need to talk with yourself», «A large and heavy book»). Проверьте согласование глаголов и числа («it gives»).

Example: I prefer reading on paper because it creates a special atmosphere and is more enjoyable. However, sometimes I read on a screen for convenience, for example when travelling, because e-books are lighter and easier to carry.

Suggestion: Отвечайте прямо и делите ситуацию на две части с соединителем (but, however). Уточните примеры и причины: когда важно читать внимательно (работа, учёба), когда достаточно беглого чтения (соцсети). Избегайте общих фраз и уточните, какие слова вы пропускаете и почему.

Example: I usually read carefully when the text is important, for example articles for work or study, because I need to understand details. However, I skim social media posts because they are often brief and not essential, so I may skip minor words or details.

Suggestion: Используйте корректную лексику («detailed reading», not «detailed training») и избегайте ошибок в словах («content»). Начните с ясного утверждения, затем объясните с конкретными причинами и примером. Сократите предложение, чтобы не превышать 5 предложений и сохранить естественность.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the plot and underlying ideas more deeply. For instance, when I read a novel carefully I notice themes and character development, which helps me remember the content and form my own opinions.

× I really like reading. I think it helps me to relax and to to enjoy myself.

✓ I really like reading. I think it helps me to relax and to enjoy myself.

Повторение слова 'to' является ошибкой структуры предложения и опечаткой; удалите лишнее 'to', чтобы глагольная конструкция 'to enjoy' была корректной.

× But it wasn't like that for always because when I was a child I hated reading.

✓ But it wasn't like that always because when I was a child I hated reading.

Неправильный порядок слов: 'for always' неверно; правильные варианты 'not always' или 'always' после 'like that'. Исправление переносит 'always' в подходящее место. Можно также сказать 'It wasn't always like that.'

× I really like to read so on paper because it give a special atmosphere, but at at some circumstances it's really comfortable to read on a screen because you don't need to to to to talk with yourself. A large and heavy book.

✓ I really like to read on paper because it gives a special atmosphere, but in some circumstances it's really comfortable to read on a screen because you don't need to carry a large and heavy book.

Несколько ошибок: неверное местоимение 'so' удалено; предлог 'on paper' корректен; 'give' должно согласоваться с третьим лицом единственного числа — 'gives'; 'at at' опечатка и должен быть 'in some circumstances'; повторение 'to' — опечатка; фраза 'talk with yourself' неуместна, заменена на 'carry' чтобы передать идею переносимости; 'A large and heavy book.' было фрагментом, объединено в предыдущем предложении.

× I try always to read carefully, but in some cases when I read some posts on news in the social media, I can miss some words because this information is unimportant for me.

✓ I always try to read carefully, but in some cases, when I read posts on social media, I can miss some words because that information is unimportant to me.

Неправильное размещение 'always' — лучше 'I always try'; 'some posts on news in the social media' неверно сформулировано: 'posts on social media' достаточно; артикль/местоимение 'this information' лучше заменить на 'that information' в контексте; предлог 'for me' заменён на 'to me' для естественности.

× I absolutely prefer detailed training because it gives me more understanding of the problem of the plot and also I can develop more thoughts on the issue of the book or article and I can thoroughly remember the contain of the text.

✓ I absolutely prefer detailed reading because it gives me a better understanding of the plot and also I can develop more ideas about the book or article, and I can remember the content of the text more thoroughly.

Неправильное слово 'training' заменено на 'reading'; 'more understanding' лучше как 'a better understanding'; 'problem of the plot' некорректно — 'the plot' или 'problems in the plot'; 'develop more thoughts' заменено на 'develop more ideas about'; 'contain' неверная форма, нужно существительное 'content'; порядок 'more thoroughly' после 'remember' для естественного звучания.