Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Be more concise and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific examples and a brief reason using linking words. Also correct minor grammar (e.g. “in the morning,” “I usually read new articles on BBC Learning English, podcasts and newspapers”).

Example: Yes, I do. I usually read in the morning because I feel fresh and relaxed then. For example, I often read articles on BBC Learning English and listen to news podcasts to improve my vocabulary and stay informed.

Suggestion: Give a clear topic sentence and explain one or two specific reasons without unclear phrases. Avoid unclear terms like “PAC 10.” Use linking words (because, for example) and correct grammar (e.g. “on paper” not “on the paper ways”).

Example: I prefer to read on paper because I find it easier to concentrate and remember information. For example, when I read a printed article I can underline key points and annotate the margins, which helps me understand the author’s ideas better.

Suggestion: Provide a clear direct answer and organize details with linking words. Fix grammar (e.g. “when exams are near” and “I avoid interruptions”). Add a short example of how your approach changes.

Example: It depends on the purpose: when exams are near I read very carefully because I need to remember details and avoid interruptions. However, when I read for general understanding I read more quickly and focus on the main ideas.

Suggestion: Answer directly and use correct grammar and concise supporting detail. Use linking words (for example, because) and avoid awkward phrasing (e.g. “explain it to them”). Give a brief, concrete example of how detailed reading helps you.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the ideas. For example, after carefully reading a news article I can summarize the main points and explain them to a friend, which shows I have grasped the content.

× Yes I do, I usually prefer to read in the morning time because I feel very very fresh and stress free in the morning time.

✓ Yes, I do. I usually prefer to read in the morning because I feel very fresh and stress-free then.

Repeated phrase 'in the morning time' is redundant and 'stress free' should be hyphenated as 'stress-free' when used as a compound adjective. Also add punctuation to separate clauses and remove duplicate 'very'. Use simple present 'prefer' correctly for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× So I used to read new topics article from the BBC English learning news and some podcast and newspapers as well.

✓ So I read articles about new topics from BBC Learning English, some podcasts, and newspapers as well.

'Used to' implies a past habit; context indicates present habit so use simple present 'read'. 'New topics article' is incorrect word order and missing plural 'articles'. Use proper name 'BBC Learning English'. Use plural 'podcasts' and include commas. This is an article/word choice and sentence structure correction. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Mostly I prefer to read on paper just because it's far better than reading on a screen on the paper ways we can understand the PAC 10 and the meaning of the concept easily and also we can understand the topic and the authors.

✓ Mostly I prefer to read on paper because it is much better than reading on a screen; on paper we can understand the facts and the meaning of concepts more easily, and we can better understand the topic and the authors.

Run-on sentence with unclear phrase 'on the paper ways' and 'PAC 10' (likely 'facts') is incorrect. Replace with 'on paper' and correct noun agreement ('facts', 'concepts'). Use pronoun 'it' for 'reading on paper' and add punctuation. This fixes pronoun reference and noun errors. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× It depends.

✓ It depends.

This sentence is correct; it uses present tense appropriately to indicate a general condition. No change needed. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× If I have exams nearly then I read very carefully.

✓ If I have exams soon, I read very carefully.

'Nearly' is incorrect here; use 'soon' or 'coming up'. The zero conditional with present tense 'have' and 'read' is appropriate for habitual behavior before exams. Adjust adverb placement for natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 7

× I don't want any interruptions or distractions from other side.

✓ I don't want any interruptions or distractions from the other side.

Missing definite article 'the' before 'other side' is required when referring to a specific source of interruptions. This is an article/preposition usage issue. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× On the other hand, I usually read to understand the concept normally if the exams are not there.

✓ On the other hand, I usually read to understand the concepts when there are no exams.

'If the exams are not there' is unnatural. Use 'when there are no exams' and plural 'concepts' to match general meaning. Keep simple present for habitual action. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× To be honest, I prefer detailed reading.

✓ To be honest, I prefer detailed reading.

Sentence is acceptable, but 'detailed reading' is a correct noun phrase. No grammatical change required. (Kept as is.) Grammar problem type ID: 22

× I just want to understand the concept completely.

✓ I just want to understand the concept completely.

This sentence is grammatically correct in context; no change needed. Present tense and object use are appropriate. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× For example, if someone asks me about what the article today, then I am able to explain him about the article so he can understand me.

✓ For example, if someone asks me about the article today, I can explain it to him so he can understand.

Several issues: word order 'asks me about what the article today' is incorrect—use 'asks me about the article today'. Use correct object pronoun 'it' for 'article' and correct word order 'explain it to him' (not 'explain him about'). Remove unnecessary 'then' and simplify to natural English. Grammar problem type ID: 12

× Scanning is a good thing for the quick learners, but not for me.

✓ Scanning is good for quick learners, but not for me.

Use no article before 'quick learners' in general statements. 'A good thing' is wordy; 'is good for' is more natural. Maintain simple present for habitual preference. Grammar problem type ID: 22