Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Cần rút ngắn câu trả lời, tránh tiếng ngập ngừng (umm, uh) và sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'reading books online' và 'it saves my time'). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể với liên từ hợp lý như 'because' hoặc 'so'.

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially books online because it saves time and offers a wide selection. For example, I can download novels or articles quickly and start reading immediately, which is very convenient.

Suggestion: Cần sửa cấu trúc để rõ ràng hơn và tránh mâu thuẫn (bạn nói không phải ra ngoài nhưng rồi 'read book directly on paper'). Tránh từ sai ('Novus'?) và dùng liên từ để nối ý. Giữ trong tối đa 4-5 câu.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because I can download nonfiction and magazines instantly. Therefore, I can read anytime without going to a shop. This convenience makes digital reading my first choice.

Suggestion: Câu trả lời lộn xộn và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, ý thứ hai không rõ ràng. Nên tách thành hai phần rõ ràng: khi cần đọc kỹ (nêu lý do cụ thể) và khi không cần (ví dụ: đọc truyện quen thuộc). Sử dụng liên từ như 'however' để chuyển ý.

Example: I need to read carefully when preparing for exams or following online instructions because I must understand and remember details. However, I skim books I already know or light stories because I can imagine the content and don't need every detail.

Suggestion: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc ('when I am concentrating on a book', 'the lessons the book gives me'). Nên dùng 2–3 câu súc tích nêu lý do và ví dụ cụ thể về lợi ích.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because when I concentrate on a book I understand the plot and the lessons it offers. As a result, I gain knowledge and feel more inspired by the ideas presented.

× I like reading, especially reading book online because it's, umm, save my time and have a wide range of, uh, kinds of books.

✓ I like reading, especially reading books online because it saves me time and has a wide range of books.

The nouns and verbs must agree in number. 'book' should be plural 'books' when speaking generally. 'It' (reading online) requires singular verbs: 'saves' not 'save', and 'has' not 'have'. Use 'saves me time' instead of 'save my time'. Suggestion: Use plural form for general countable nouns and ensure subject-verb agreement by matching singular subjects with singular verbs.'

× And I can, uh, read whenever I want instead of going out and have to choose.

✓ And I can read whenever I want instead of going out and having to choose.

After 'instead of' use a gerund ('having') not the base verb. Also maintain parallel structure: 'going out and having to choose'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after prepositions and keep parallel verb forms.

× I prefer to read on a screen because I can download Novus nonfiction and magazines instantly, so I can read anytime without going out and spend a long time choosing a book and read book directly on paper.

✓ I prefer to read on a screen because I can download novels, nonfiction, and magazines instantly, so I can read anytime without going out and spending a long time choosing a book or reading it on paper.

Use correct word 'novels' and separate items with commas. After 'without' use gerund 'spending'. Maintain parallelism: 'choosing a book or reading it on paper'. Also correct 'read book' to 'reading it'. Suggestion: Use gerunds after 'without' and ensure parallel structure for coordinated actions.

× Well, I need to read carefully when I'm studying for an exam or following an online exercise routine because I must understand the instructions and remember the details to do exercise.

✓ Well, I need to read carefully when I'm studying for an exam or following an online exercise routine because I must understand the instructions and remember the details to do the exercises.

'do exercise' is unidiomatic; use 'do the exercises' or 'do exercises'. Add definite article for specific exercises. Maintain present progressive 'I'm studying' which is correct. Suggestion: Use 'the exercises' for specific routines and plural 'exercises' when general.

× But I don't read carefully. When I read a book I read I already know well since I can easily imagine the sense.

✓ But I don't read carefully when I read a book I already know well, since I can easily imagine the content.

The original had fragmented sentences and repetition 'I read I'. Combine clauses for clarity and replace vague 'sense' with 'content'. Ensure subordinate clause ordering. Suggestion: Avoid fragments and repeated words; combine related ideas into one sentence.

× The situation in without constructing constraints too hard.

✓ The situation is without overly strict constraints.

The phrase 'in without' is incorrect preposition use and word order. Use 'is without' plus adjective phrase 'overly strict constraints' to convey intended meaning. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions and natural adjective order ('overly strict') and include a linking verb.

× I prefer detailed reading because when I concentrating in a book I can understand the story and know more about some lesson the book gift that I can.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because when I am concentrating on a book I can understand the story and learn more lessons the book gives me.

After 'when' use correct form 'I am concentrating'. Use preposition 'on' with 'concentrating'. 'know more about some lesson the book gift that I can' is ungrammatical; use 'learn more lessons the book gives me'. Suggestion: Use auxiliary 'am' with present participle and correct prepositions; use 'learn' for gaining knowledge and proper verb 'gives'.

× Improve my knowledge, improve my morale.

✓ It improves my knowledge and boosts my morale.

Fragments without subject are stylistically weak. Use full clause with subject 'It' (reading) and appropriate verbs: 'improves' and 'boosts'. 'Morale' is countable/uncountable but 'boosts my morale' is natural. Suggestion: Use complete sentences and choose verbs that collocate naturally with nouns.