Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and use linking words (for example, 'because' then 'for example'). Pay attention to verb tense and countable/uncountable nouns (e.g., 'books that help me' not 'which are help me').

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because it improves my knowledge and vocabulary. For example, I read books about personal development and technology, which have helped me focus on my career goals.

Suggestion: Begin with a clear preference sentence and then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (for example, 'because' and 'however'). Correct grammar (e.g., 'reading on paper' not 'the paper') and avoid unclear phrases. Mention a brief exception if needed.

Example: I prefer reading on paper because screens distract me and I often get tempted to check other websites. However, if a book is hard to find, I will read it on a screen.

Suggestion: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence describing when careful reading is necessary, then give specific examples and use linking words such as 'for example' and 'but' to contrast. Fix grammar (e.g., 'legal agreements', 'I sometimes need to read carefully').

Example: I need to read carefully when the text is important or official, for example legal agreements, contracts, or card statements. But for leisure books I usually skim and focus only on the main ideas.

Suggestion: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one concise reason with specific details and use linking words like 'because' and 'so'. Correct verb forms and unclear words ('scan' not 'scanning' if used as preference, 'chapter' spelling). Avoid extraneous or confusing phrases.

Example: I usually prefer scanning because I need to finish a chapter quickly, often within one or two hours, so detailed reading would take too long. If the text is important, however, I will read it in detail.

× Yes I do because it helped me to improve my knowledge and vocabulary and I always prefer to those books which are help me to improving my knowledge and it also help me to focus better in my education or career.

✓ Yes, I do because it helps me improve my knowledge and vocabulary, and I always prefer those books which help me improve my knowledge; they also help me focus better on my education or career.

The student mixed past tense 'helped' with present habitual action; present tense 'helps' is required. Incorrect verb forms 'are help me to improving' should be 'help me improve'. Use parallel structure and correct preposition 'focus on'. Also remove unnecessary articles and infinitive markers. Suggestion: use simple present for habits, keep verbs base form after 'help', and maintain parallel clauses.

× I prefer to read on the paper because on the screen it's create a distraction.

✓ I prefer to read on paper because reading on a screen creates a distraction.

Do not use the definite article 'the' with 'paper' in this context; use 'on paper'. 'It's create' is ungrammatical: use present simple 'creates' for a general fact. Also prefer 'reading on a screen' for clarity.

× When are you reading on the mobile phone? So you going go on your other website is.

✓ When you read on your mobile phone, you often go to other websites.

Original sentences have incorrect word order and extra words. Use simple present 'read' for habitual actions and 'often' for frequency. Remove unneeded auxiliary verbs 'are' and 'going go' and incorrect 'is'. Structure should be Subject + Verb + Object.

× So most of the time I prefer to read on the books on the paper, but sometime with some books are not able to find in markets, so I prefer to on screen.

✓ So most of the time I prefer to read books on paper, but sometimes some books are not available in markets, so I prefer to read them on a screen.

Do not use 'the' before 'books' in general. Use plural 'books' without 'on the paper'; say 'on paper'. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes'. 'Are not able to find' is wrong passive/wording; use 'are not available' or 'I cannot find them'. Add 'read them' for clarity.

× Yes I sometime I need to be read carefully searches document like the legal and agreements and the card documents and other more documents.

✓ Yes, sometimes I need to read documents carefully, such as legal agreements, card documents, and other documents.

Use 'sometimes' for adverb and remove extra 'I'. 'Need to be read' incorrectly uses passive; use active 'need to read'. 'Searches document' is incorrect; use 'documents'. Provide examples with parallel nouns 'legal agreements'.

× It is very needed to read carefully.

✓ It is very important to read them carefully.

'Very needed' is not natural English; use 'very important' or 'necessary'. Include the object 'them' or 'documents' for clarity.

× But whenever I reading the normal book so it is not at it to read carefully.

✓ But when I read a normal book, it is not necessary to read it carefully.

Use base form 'read' with proper subject 'I'. 'Whenever I reading' is wrong; 'when I read' is correct. 'It is not at it to' is meaningless; replace with 'it is not necessary to'.

× So I only read it and understanding the meaning.

✓ So I just read it and try to understand the meaning.

Parallel verb forms are needed: 'read' and 'understand' should match; use 'try to understand' for intended meaning. Replace 'only' with 'just' for naturalness.

× Most of the time I prefer to scanning because I want to finish A1 chapter within a day so and less time and one and two hours so it is difficult to read a detailed reading.

✓ Most of the time I prefer scanning because I want to finish an A1 chapter within a day, and with only one or two hours it is difficult to do detailed reading.

Use gerund 'scanning' after 'prefer' or 'prefer to scan'. 'Prefer to scanning' is ungrammatical. Include article 'an A1 chapter'. Improve time expression 'one or two hours'. Use 'detailed reading' as a noun phrase with 'do' or 'perform'.

× So most of the time I prefer to scan ingredient.

✓ So most of the time I prefer to scan the content.

'Scan ingredient' is meaningless in this context. Likely intended 'scan the content' or 'scan the text'. Use correct noun to express scanning reading material.