Reading— Part 1 Report

Suggestion: Clarify meaning and remove unclear phrases; give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it concise and natural (max 4–5 short sentences). Use linking words (for example, because, and, also).

Example: Yes, I enjoy reading because books often offer deep ideas and emotional insight. For example, I like detective stories since they are challenging and keep me guessing until the end.

Suggestion: Correct grammar and awkward phrases, use coherent linking and specific examples. Start with a direct statement, then explain two clear reasons using linking words. Avoid redundant words.

Example: I prefer reading on a screen because it is more convenient. I can carry thousands of books on my phone or tablet, and when I travel I can download titles to read anytime, which makes it easy to try new authors.

Suggestion: Make answer more organized and correct word choice (watching→reading). Provide a clear contrast with linking words (however, but). Use specific examples and avoid filler words. Keep sentences short and precise.

Example: I don't read carefully when I'm reading comics or light fiction because I read them mainly to relax. However, I read carefully when studying a textbook or a complex literary story because I need to analyse the author's emotions and meaning.

Suggestion: Keep the topic sentence clear, fix grammar, and add a brief reason with one example. Use linking words such as because or so. Avoid repetition and keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Example: I prefer detailed reading because detective novels need close attention to clues. By reading carefully, I can follow the clues step by step and try to solve the mystery before the ending.

× I like reading because I think many books are thoughtful for King and they are beautiful returns.

✓ I like reading because I think many books are thoughtful and have beautiful endings.

The original uses incorrect words: 'for King' and 'beautiful returns' are not appropriate. This is an adjective choice/word choice problem. Replace with 'thoughtful' (describing books) and 'have beautiful endings' to express that the books conclude well. Also ensure parallel structure.

× Also, my favorite kind of book is Detective Stories because they are challenging but also exciting.

✓ Also, my favorite kind of book is detective stories because they are challenging but also exciting.

Capitalization and article use: 'Detective Stories' should be lowercase as a genre. This is a quantifier/word form issue around noun phrase consistency. Use consistent lowercase for genres.

× I prefer reading on the screen because I think it's more convenient than PO portable.

✓ I prefer reading on a screen because I think it's more convenient than reading physical books.

'On the screen' and 'PO portable' are incorrect. Use 'a screen' for general preference and contrast with 'reading physical books' to make the comparison clear. This is an article and phrasing problem.

× I can access to thousands of books on my or tablets without already carrying heavy paper bags.

✓ I can access thousands of books on my phone or tablet without having to carry heavy paper books.

'Access to' is incorrect here; use 'access' without 'to'. 'My or tablets' is garbled; correct to 'phone or tablet'. 'Already carrying' is wrong tense/word choice; use 'having to carry'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error.

× And for example when I travel I can download many titles and read anytime which make it easier to find or try new author.

✓ For example, when I travel I can download many titles and read anytime, which makes it easier to find or try new authors.

Missing comma after introductory phrase and subject-verb agreement: 'which make' should be 'which makes' because it refers to the act of downloading/reading (singular idea). 'New author' should be plural 'new authors'. Also add commas for clarity. This fits article/grammar and agreement issues.

× When I'm reading some comics that amuse people or just interesting, I do not need to read really carefully because uh, it is just for relaxation.

✓ When I'm reading comics that are amusing or just interesting, I do not need to read very carefully because it is just for relaxation.

Missing 'are' before adjectives and awkward 'amuse people or just interesting' phrasing. Use 'are amusing' and 'very carefully' instead of 'really carefully' for formality. This is an adjective/adverb usage and verb omission issue.

× But if I'm watching, I'm reading some my textbook or some difficult story like literatures that I need to investigate the emotion of the writer, then I will watch carefully to understand.

✓ But if I'm reading my textbook or a difficult piece of literature where I need to analyze the author's emotions, then I will read carefully to understand.

Multiple errors: 'watching' is wrong verb; should be 'reading'. 'Some my textbook' is incorrect pronoun/determiner use; use 'my textbook' or 'a difficult piece of literature'. 'Literatures' should be 'literature'. 'Investigate the emotion of the writer' is awkward; use 'analyze the author's emotions'. Also 'watch carefully' should be 'read carefully'. These are pronoun, verb choice, and noun-form problems.

× I prefer detailed reading because my favorite type of books are detective novels and they require detailed reading so I can find out the solutions by myself step from step and it's really interesting and exciting.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because my favorite type of book is detective novels and they require detailed reading so I can find the solutions myself step by step, and it's really interesting and exciting.

Subject-verb agreement and noun-number issues: 'type of books are' should be 'type of book is' (singular). The phrase 'step from step' is wrong; use 'step by step'. Also reorder 'find out the solutions by myself' to 'find the solutions myself' for natural phrasing. This involves third person/subject-verb agreement and adverbial phrase correction.